This is an amazing story. :) I really wish that you'll finish it someday! Will keep waiting! ^^

This story is so good and we're waiting like forever,pls write some for us!Please!

This story sucked me in.... but long time no refresh... so you could suck me (in) as well.
So, when will you post the new chappi?

Really enjoyed this chapter. It's fun to watch Tom's hard shell chip away.

Aw. Tom is totally falling for Bill. :)

Lol, I can't read it all right this moment, but will in a bit. Just wanna say that you are a-frickin-mazing for writing one this long =O And also for updating in general ;)

i loved the twilight reference, that made me laugh, all in all i love this story, hope you update soon! :E

I adored this chapter, very happy to see an update. As usual I always enjoy your writing, so it made my evening to come home and see that this was available as I check your story religiously.

I was happy to be able to gain more insight into Tom's inner workings, it cleared up a lot of questions that I had. I found it interesting his reaction to being alone when he arrived at the Sildon estate. I never would have imagined him as being so thrown off by his distraction, it lent a side to his psyche that I didn't consider and gave him a rather human attribute amongst his see of sociopathic behavior.

I enjoyed the image of Bill being so happy and pleased with sharing breakfast with Arthur on the verge in the morning. It was very sweet, and gave a very homey feel to their relationship that I feel you are grooming quite well. I enjoy their banter and the comforting atmosphere that seems to surround their interactions. It is a far cry from the uncomfortable and awkward relationship that he has with Tom at the moment.

I loved your entire addition of the pets, it was very fitting and very entertaining. Tom's confusion and lack of understanding Bill when he spoke of "favourites" made me smile, and when he arrived with the bobcat in tow I was immensely pleased. Unfortunate that Bill was harmed, and I feel pity for Tom's fear of causing Bill pain. I love how you continue to keep Tom's character within the boundaries of the limits that you have set. Many times I read into fiction on this site where a genius character is created, and then as soon as the twins come into interaction with one another all of their backstory is dropped as they suddenly "fall in love" and lose all sense of who they are as individuals. Don't get me wrong, fantasy fluff is lovely and serves its own purpose, but I am deeply relieved that you are showing the growth and changes of your characters without lessening who you want them to be...or at least without ruining who I as your reader imagine them to be.

Your chapters always leave me satisfied and happy, while still creating a sweet chocolaty tension that makes me hungry with curiosity. There is so much about the young men that I don't know, and you have spun their personalities so brilliantly that I can feel their thoughts and feelings on the very tip of my understanding, creeping closer with every piece of dialog that you share. If nothing were to ever happen with the plot beyond Tom visiting the Diamond and having conversations in the garden, I would continue to be an avid reader and would leave sated and fulfilled.

A beautiful job as always Jadis. Thank you for sharing these characters with us.

interesting, really interesting

Nah, I'm not mad. If you were gone for a year I'd be mad XD But when I know that someone has a demanding job, I'm more understanding.

And anyway, it's even better because this was such a looong chapter.

A couple mistakes, if you want to fix them:
He'd put on lose black pajamas > *loose
And careful here with differing then from than:Tom was registering the words a lot slower then usual > *than
"you think they're better then all the others?" > *than

And wow. Bill's cold façade has nearly completely broken down.