Date: 09/13/10 07:38 pm Title: Happy Birthday.
AAAAH MY GOD WTF.
I died.
Died. D;
Aww.. oh my God. AW.
On their birthday eve was so sweet... that necklace is adorable, seriously. :) Forever and always.. Omg aww. So lovely. I hate 'Billa' just thought I'd say that, but doesn't change how much I love your fic. :p
anyways, this chapter made me DIE.
They have a party.. sweet. :3
They take a shower together. Omg *________*
On their birthday.. parents house... Simone is so ditzy. o.0 Lol..xDDD That's hilarious.
But Tom is really careless and that was a stupid move. :/ To kiss Bill in the car... and Simone saw.. Gordon is a cool guy, seriously.
Simone freaked out and she was like "OMG OMG OMG OMG" I was like LOL LOL LOL. XDDDDDD
Then she questions Bill... Ugh, I can just imagine how awkward that would be. o_0 Ew... Anyways, her questions! Jesus. And the whole septum thing... why.. would Tom tell him to get that? o_O I mean... what would you do with it? Lol.. it's like he told him to pierce his penis. xDD /shot Anyways, Simone was totally implying Tom was some abuser/rapist (which Tom states later) was like :O HOW DAWR YEW.
I love it when Tom watches Bill sleep. How sweet and cute. makes me melt. *-*
Tom says 'i love you' before the guys/cops/idiots take him away. :( I DIED.
and Bill wakes up confused yet feeling okay.. and his mother.
HOW COULD SHE DO THAT?
THIS IS HER OWN SON! -____-
Meh lady is meh.
So Bill is the mental hospital.. does.. he think something is wrong? :/
So weird. :(
And saddening.
Actually makes me wonder why we haven't seen any new pics of the twins since like Aug 28? (on Bill haven't seen Tom for a long time!) That worries me a bit, unless they're having a good time away from paparazzi or interviews.. then hooray! :)
This leaves me off so excited.
I can't wait what angst will happen next.
I'm dying for your next update already.
Wait till you finish this, so much easier trust me. Hush sounds like a splendid title, I'll read it as well.
This chapter leaves me questioning, I cannot WAIT for next!
I ADORE twincest separation fics b/c I'm that cruel. ;)
LOVE IT. :)
Author's Response:
NO! DON'T DIE!
rnHahahhaa I rather like 'Billa' I hate 'Billy' or 'Billie' though :/ makes him sound like a hobo.
rnI'm glad the necklace wasn't too cliché :/ I was worried about that haha! THE TWINS HAVE TO SHOWER TOGETHER! END OF STORY! HAHAHAHA! IT'S TRUE! IT'S LIKE AAAAAHHHH!
rnYeah, but then again, Simone and Gordon arrived early, so Bill and Tom didn;t EXACTLY expect their parents to see them making out in their living room!
rnAnd then again. she would be freaking out, it's not really something you expect. :P
rnWell, she thought that Bill altered his apearance because Tom was in control of him, so Bill changed how he looked simply to make Tom happy. I think it's fucking stpid for her to think Tom was raping Bill, but she did see him Kiss Bill, not vice-versa, so I think it's sort of a fair thing to say...
rnFluffy Twins is, like, GAH I cannot write a fic without having a ridiculous amount on fluffy twins :P It's a bad, I'm trying to cure myself of my addiction.
rnWell, the scene in the mental hospital is, like, a few days in the future, he thinks that he shouldn't be there, but the it' not lik they're gonna say 'Ja, mental patient, you can go run free on the streets'
rnIt sounds stupid now, but theres a lot that will be explaiend in the next chapter :)
rnHahaha, I'm a litle nervous about Hush :/ hahaha it'll be my 14th even ff :D
rnrn
OHMYGOD I LOVE TWC SEPARATION TOO!! HAHA!
rnWe can be evil togetehr!
rnrn
love you!
Date: 09/13/10 06:49 pm Title: Happy Birthday.
ooh, this is really good. i'm glad to know whats going on now. I hope Gordon can talk Simone out of all this, maybe once she realizes this isn't working and what its doing to them. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Aaah, all shall unravel soon :D :D
rnRemember, Bill still thinks that Tom left him.
rnAll this amazing feedback shall be answered soon!
rnThansks so much!
Date: 09/13/10 03:10 pm Title: Happy Birthday.
Wow!! I can't believe that there mom would do something like that to them!! So where did they take Tom too!? Poor Bill never saw it coming! God I can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response:
If my mum did something like that I would knife her. No joke. Hahaha :P
rnAaah, my wonderful reviewer, all these questions you shall find out!
rn:D I'm so glad you like it! <3
Date: 09/13/10 11:54 am Title: Happy Birthday.
:@ Oh noo, poor Bill and Tom :'( I really want to punch Simone in the face for doing this to them
Author's Response:
GAH! Me too! While I was planning this chapter a few months ago I was like *deathglaarrreeee*
rnHahaha, but really, I'm sure Simone is a lovely woman, I feel bad making her such a bitch :/
rnThanks for the review!!
Date: 09/09/10 03:24 am Title: 4 Months Before.
Oh Viagra, how I love the shenanigans you cause!
Oh and...THE WAY YOU OPEN YOUR MOUTH IS VERY SUGGESTIVE, OKAY? That freaking KILLED me! I was laughing soooooooo hard I was crying.
Ooh, the sweater *Drools* at first, I wasn't really sure about it, now I love it. I'm was not aware it was possible, but Tom became even hotter O.o
Attention all whores, please keep your hands off Tom and stay out of the Twin Zone or we will be forced to set Bushido on you, and nobody wants that.
Aww, I love me some clingy Geo!
Ugh! I Hated that announcer lady. I wanted to punch her, but Tom made me feel better with his awesome comments! He was my favorite for that day.
I heard about the afterparty thing! And to answer your question IT'STOTALLYFREAKINGAWESOME! Hurray for the *~Twin Moments~*
NOOOOOOOO! FOREVER AND ALWAYS MEANS FOREVER AND ALWAYS! NEIN! IT CAN'T BE GONE IT DOESN'T WORK THAT WAY! I REFUSE! AND I WILL NOT CRY! YOU CAN'T MAKE ME!
Love
Torrie
PS I SEE WANT YOU DID THERE AND I AM HAPPY BECAUSE OF IT!
PPS Hurray for end of Beta drama!
Author's Response:
OH MY GOD THE VAIGRA THING WAS THE FUNNIEST THING HAVE EVER HEARD EVER!
rnBahaha :3 Im glad you liked that, I laughed a lot at my own joke haha!!
rnTom + tight fit clothes = *dies*
rnIkr, those bitches think they can get into the twin zone? *clicks fingers* NU-UH!
rnHagen is love <3
rnCollien was such a fucking just UGH but then when Tom said that, I was watching it live and it was about 4 am and I burst out laughing, like oh my gd it KILLED me!!
rnrn
:3 ;3 working on the next chapter right now!!
rnrn
Love TILDE!
rnrn
PS I WAS SO PROUD OF MYSELF!
rnPPS YAYAYAYYAYAY!
Date: 09/09/10 03:08 am Title: 4 Months Before.
Yikes, this is really good so far. I am eagerly awaiting the next one...though praying for a happy end eventually. keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
:3 thank you so much! It means so much that people have started reviewing more :3
rnthanks!!
Date: 09/07/10 07:11 pm Title: 4 Months Before.
NO WTF!!!11111 THERE IS NO NEXT BUTTON THIS IS BLASPHEMY.
I was sooooooo into then that last sentence was like ":OOOO!!!!1111111" and ZOMG no next button. FUCK NO. D;
Ehhh!!!1
I loved this. :3
Viagra.. lmaooooooo... X"D
and the awards...
girl...
hand slip..
uhh.. stupid other whorey girl.
drunk!Bill
and nekid twins.
YES YES YES.
I want to know what will happen when they separate! *___________*!!
;0
Lovely chapter...
^_^
*waits for next chapter*
Author's Response:
Hhahhaha!! I'm glad you like it so much to want a chaoter so soon!!
rnThe Viagra scandal is hnestly one o the funniest thing I have ever read. Ever.
rn:3 youre just gonna have to wait and fine out!
rnthank you thank you thank you!!!
rnrn
xx I'm working on it now!
Date: 09/07/10 07:02 pm Title: 3 Years Before.
Why a different font? :O
I had to make my entire comp bigger.. not just the THF story text.
Either way, Bill laughs... a lot. O_O
In Die Nacht...
Drunk Georg...
Gustav/Georg implication..
twins...
Bitchy Bill after crashing.
Tom flips.
and.. ILYBILLA stuff.
:'D :'D :'D
I thought Bill would be more scared and less "OMG YOU COULDA RUINED MY HAYRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!11111" attitude. -.0
LOVE THIS.
*next*
oh and LULZ 666....
Author's Response:
I really don't know :/ this one is just different, maybe there was a problem when it uploaded.
rnI've tried fixing it, reposting the chapter, but it hasn't worked *shrug* I dunno.
rnrn
The In Die Nacht bit I wrote a looong time ago :P thought I could fit it in.
rnBill was shaken up, he does yell that at the guy, and it says he was shaking, but he was under so much stress that I think it was a bit of everything that he was going on about :3
rnhahaha, off to rely to your next review!
Date: 09/07/10 06:53 pm Title: 4 Years Before.
D: I missed some chapters in this fic!
I liked this one.
So cheesy though. :p
The whole "I wish I could touch you thing"... they do touch on stage :333
Really sweet chapter... ^_^
Will read on.. can't wait to see what this will develop into. (:
Complete works of Shakespeare - Cool. X3
*presses next*
Author's Response:
:3 hahahhaa I know, I kinda like cheesy though hahahah!!
rnWhy thank you! It's wonderfult hat you liked it!
rnILOVEMYCOMPLETEWORKSOFSHAKEPEAREBOOK!
Date: 09/06/10 11:50 pm Title: 3 Years Before.
wiiii
You're getting to the point! i can't wait! I have a question. Why does the letters seem smaller than normal? i nearly lost my vision Ha-ha. well nevermind. i love the way the chapters were being developed to finally get to this point the expected 21st! omg i can hardly believe, please update asap! (not that i'm pushing or anything like that, sorry =P)
Read you soon (i hope)^.~
Author's Response:
eeeee I know :3 I'm so excited haha!
rnThe letters seems smaller?? I'M SORY! D: I dunno what happened *shrug* I'll try and fix it for the next chapter :3
rnThank you!! I'm so glad you like it!
rnGuess what! You reviewed at a good time, I'm posting now!
rnrn
xx Tildeeeeeeee
Date: 09/02/10 03:28 am Title: Prologue.
Just thought I'd tell you I have the card as my desktop background. And I may or may not have put the internet shortcut/icon over top a very important part of Gustav's anatomy* *Shifty eyes*
Love
Torrie
*By anatomy, I mean his crotch**
**By crotch, I mean his penis! :0D
Author's Response:
... BAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAH!!!! OHMYGODTORRIE! OH MY GOD, I'M DYING...
rnI love the astersks down the bottom!!
Date: 09/01/10 11:13 pm Title: 3 Years Before.
i really like it plz continue
Author's Response:
Yay!! Im so glad you like it! I sure will continue!!!
Date: 09/01/10 03:20 pm Title: 3 Years Before.
Fufufjgxh kbdhchlhdgkxigjxt!?$@$(4$):5:5
...Okay, I'm done flailing on my keyboard. OH MAH FROG THAT PICTURE IS SOOO FREAKING AWESOME! THERE ARE NO WORDS FOR HOW HAPPY I AM RIGHT NOW!!! QUICK! I NEED A PLANE DIRECT TO YOU SO I CAN GIVE YOU THE BIGGEST TACKLE/GLOMP/HUG THING EVER!
And the update? BLOODY EPIC! I LOVE drunken Geo! And blushy Gusti :0) And stripper Gusti...And nake- um, nevermind :0D Aww! In Die Nacht! I've had that and Zoom Into Me on repeat all day! I love the ~Twin Songs~! And dude, what are you even talking about? The 2008 part is pure win! Good ole Georg, keeping Stavi away from them hoes! I swear I almost died at the visual of Georg making out with Gustav's hand! Really. My sides hurt from laughing. THAT'S WHAT HE SAID! Next time someone says please to me, I'm going to yell that. Seriously.
I was facepalming (is that even a word?) at the guy who cut off Bill. Honestly, his though procces must have been like this: Shit! I just totaled that guys car! Double shit! It's Bill fucking Kaulitz! I could've killed him!...I bet he will want to go out with me! '-_-
Pff, of course Gustav noticed the jealousy of Andi at the ~Twin Love~ GUSTAV SEES ALL! Oh Andreas, you don't have a chance :0( Sorry muffin!
SGNCBfjjztzbvlhoi6:)-346;(87?&@"?6.sugar.gzh6
Sorry, I looked at the pic again. I'm going to go print it off and show it off to everyone I see! Yes, that may include random strangers.
Love
Torrie
PS. THE TWINS ARE 21!!! OUR BABIES ARE ALL GROWED UP!! *Dramatic pose*
PPS. STAVI's BIRTHDAY IS IN A WEEK! YAY GUSTI! I WANT TO BAKE A CAKE! AND EAT IT! CAUSE THAT'S WHAT YOU DO WITH CAKE!
CAAAAAAAAAAAKE!
Author's Response:
Oh my GOD! I don't even know how to reply to such an AWESOME review!! MMKAY! Starting from the beginnig -
rnrn
hvwjfjhxfowcngowgxfpglrngqkxvgqig - I wanted to join in your spazz :]
rnI am so happy you liedk it!! I was gonna post it on your Facebook, but it wouldn't let me cause it was so big, but I thought this was a betterer thing to do :3 I SHALL LIVE AT THE ARPORT TILL YOU GET THERE!! :]
rnHahaha I wa worried about the 2008 bit, it was much better in my head :/ but eh, it turned out okay :3
rnI prefer Zoom to Zoom Into Me, but eh, they're both BEAUTIFUL! <3 In Die Nacht <3 <3 I wrote that little bit... I think I wrote it BEFORE I left for Europe, it's old, it was origionally meant to be part of a one shot, but that idea died and it ended up here.
rnHAHAHA!! Drunk Geo is love :3
rnFacepalming sure is a word! I know, tha gy was a douche :/ People are stupid haha!
rnAaaah you noticed the Andras thing?? Goooood, shall return not too long away. t may not show much, but nearly everything that happens in these chapters is important, it's details like that that are important :3
rnHAHAHAHHAHAHAHH!! I'm SO glad you like the card!! When I made it I was like HOLY SHIT STAVI LOOKS LIKE A STRIPPER but eh :D
rnrn
love Tildeeee
rnrn
p.s. I KNOW! I WAS LIKE *wipes away tear* I'm so proud!
rnrn
p.p.s. I HAVE TO MAKE A SPECIAL THIS FOR STAVI! <3
rnrn
CCCAAAAAAAAKKKKEEEEE!!!!
Date: 08/26/10 06:09 am Title: 4 Years Before.
Okay, seriously though. This might just be my favorite chapter ever. IT ALL MAKES SENSE NOW!
This chapter could have easily been a oneshot! It has the happys, the sads, the funnys and A PLOT type thing! And really Georg? 'Who'ya fuck?' Bill Kaulitz would never just `fuck` someone. He`d be so good they`d have to invent a whole new word just to describe the action. Don`t get me started on Gustav *Dazed look* *Starts drooling*
Uh hum.
Torrie Out.
Author's Response:
Your favourite chapter?? Really?? OHMYGODTHANKYOUSOMUCH! I was so proud of this one :D
rnIt was actually origionally a plan for a oneshot, but then when I decided to have one chapter for each of the ears leading up to the separation I was like REDEN!
rnCause Reden is one of my favourite songs :)
rnI know, Georg just doesn't understand *face-palms* he knows NOTINK!
rnBAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Gustav is a bit AWESOME!
rnTilde out :P
rn
Date: 08/26/10 06:03 am Title: 4 Years Before.
All I have to say is....
RRRREEEEEEEDDDDDEEEENNNN!
~Torrie
Author's Response:
WIR WOLLTEN NUR REEEEEEDEEEENNN!!
rn:P <3
rnxxT
Date: 08/26/10 06:00 am Title: 17 Years Before.
AWW!!! THIS CHAPTER MAKES ME SAD CAUSE THE TWINS ARE SAD AND THEY SHOULDN'T BE SAD! FIX IT! RAWR! I AM TORASAURUS REX!
...Heehee, sorry, that's the lack of sleep talking!
Oh, and FUCK YOU LIESEL! KEEP YOUR COOTY INFESTED LIPS AWAY FROM MY TWINS!...Um...I mean..our twins, right Tilde? :0D
SorrySorrySorry It took me sooo bloody long to review! :,0( I`m such a bad reader!
HOLY SHIT I`M GETTING A BEER! That is the best scene EVEH! No joke. I can totally imagine that happening!
I`m going to go review the other chap now!
ILY!
~Tor-rizzle :0D
Author's Response:
OH MY GOD I'M DYING!
rnTORASAURUS REX??? <3 <3
rnHahahahah GET THEM COOTIE INFESTED LIPS OFF OUR TWINS! <3 :P :P
rnNo! I's fiiine! You can take however long you take, but these reviews are stiil gonna makde my day better, no matter how shitty it is.
rn... Just pretend that made sense :/
rnHahahah! Gordon <3 :P :P
rnYAYAYA!
rnILLYYY SILLYYY!!
rnrn
xx Tizzle!
Date: 08/03/10 02:10 pm Title: 17 Years Before.
Lmao, Liesel Meminger? I just read Book Thief.
Author's Response:
>.>
rnrn
<.<
rnrn
rn
*runs and hides*
rnMMkay, you caught me :x fucking incredible book, anyhow :P
rnI'm not good at names I was starved for names and I had just read it hahaa :P :P
Date: 08/02/10 04:21 pm Title: 17 Years Before.
They were called Trumper-Stumper? Wtf does stumper mean? o_O *feels stupid* But... :/
Young twins.. I laughed so badly at Bill pretending to be Tom at the girl. xD "Ewwwy" ohmehgawd. "BUTTFACE" ahahaha *dies*
7 years before.. I cried. Really love how you wrote it, it made me cry. :l God.... -_- Just imagining that... D:
6 years before... Bushido? But Bushido never said that. It's all a stupid false rumor.
It was a really great chapter... Loved it.
Please update with angst!
I want it to be present xD I really want to see how they're separated. God, what a great a concept. ^_^ Please? XD I will beg you lol.
:3
Author's Response: It means 'Pathetic-Trümper, or Stupid/Retarded-Trümper' according to NotJustAndy :) rnOh no that wasn't Bushido who said it in this, it was just.... I dunno... Some guy from their school?? That section was suppoed to be funny :P rnReally? It made you cry? Well, goddarn it it made me cry too :/rnHahahahhaa The angst comes mainly after their 21st birthday, which will be in a few chapters, first comes the smut and the crack! rnHAHAH! I promise, only about threee or four chapters until their 21st :) THEN we get the good stuff :Prnthanks so much for your review!! Made my day at school LIVABLE!
Date: 08/02/10 04:07 pm Title: 21 Years Before.
oooh flashbacks. *_* So sweet. :)
^___^
I really enjoyed it.. especially the one of kindergarten. :)
Author's Response: Hahhhaa I loved tha kindy one :P <3 they were so ADORABLE! <3rnThanks o much for the review! rnx T
Date: 08/02/10 04:02 pm Title: Prologue.
The summary tore my heart. O_O
....
Such an amazing concept.
*reads on to ch. 2*
Author's Response: Oh my god, thankyousomuch! rn:D It's so amazing everytime I get a new reaer, get's me a-spazzin'!rnI shall make sure to update soon!rnrnxx T