Date: 05/15/10 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
This is so sweet. I just love it. I can't believe Simone would sing Bill's memories of Tom away, though :/ That's really mean of her, and poor Tom. *hugs both of them*
I really adore their connection even after so many years apart. In some fics it comes off as cheesy and unrealistic, but in this one it's very nice. It almost seems...natural? Like, this is the way things should be and it's totally not weird at all.
<3
Date: 05/15/10 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awww, that was so lovely. Their connection is already so strong and Tom is willing to do just about anything to make Bill happy. I'll be looking forward to more!
Date: 05/15/10 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
But then Tom looked at him, and Bill's doubts melted away. Oh darlings. "You are my everything," said Tom, his voice soft. "You always have been."
*wibble!* Apparently I was looking forward to this part for more reasons than just the obvious, because this chapter tugs at my heartstrings just perfectly!
Date: 05/15/10 12:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
"Taking a breath is always a danger" - that felt like a statement with deeper meaning somehow. Beautiful, just beautiful. I like to see them bonding in this part, getting closer. It still makes me sad that all of Bill's memories were taken from him like that. But oh, the spark between them! *wriggles excitedly* You could do fairytales FOREVER and I would be perfectly pleased. ♥
Date: 05/15/10 10:09 am Title: Chapter 4
HOT and CUTE... and HOT AND CUTE.. and *death*
Date: 05/15/10 09:56 am Title: Chapter 4
They are adorable together, I really enjoy this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 05/15/10 07:33 am Title: Chapter 4
this is my most expected fic of the week. Keeping my head up for the ending.
Date: 05/15/10 05:51 am Title: Chapter 4
Awwwwwwwwwww
Date: 05/15/10 04:24 am Title: Chapter 4
They are so cute!!! Give me more!
Date: 05/15/10 04:10 am Title: Chapter 4
The love Tom has for Bill is so sweet.
Date: 05/15/10 03:34 am Title: Chapter 4
LOVE it. cant wait to read the end. tho it makes me sad it's ending so soon :)
Date: 05/15/10 03:23 am Title: Chapter 4
OH I really like this!
:DD update soon!
XoxOH
Date: 05/15/10 03:02 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, I love it. I can't wait to see if they break the curse!!!
Date: 05/14/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, my.
Some cliffhanger, ha!
I wonder if there'll be any flashbacks from Tom's past. That would be interesting.
Great chapter. I'm loving each and every single piece of the story!
Date: 05/14/10 05:53 pm Title: Chapter 3
Nice cliffhanger. :D
They're sweet! b29;
Date: 05/14/10 10:46 am Title: Chapter 3
It's like magic that they parted for so many years and still are so close. I love than tom's so protective of bill even as a toddler.
Date: 05/14/10 10:29 am Title: Chapter 3
Sooooo cute!!!!!!!!!! please continue!! This story is REALLY cute!!! XD
continue!!
Date: 05/14/10 07:10 am Title: Chapter 3
*dances* MORE MORE, I NEED MORE. This has easily become my favorite story on here.
Date: 05/14/10 06:48 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh noes! Cliffie! -whimper- You're being mean *pout* I love it though, it's great. Can't wait for more:3