Date: 05/17/10 07:26 am Title: Chapter 5
This was absolutely amazing, I'm sad to see it go. D: But I'll live, as long as you keep writing. :D
Date: 05/17/10 04:27 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh, this was so lovely. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!
Date: 05/17/10 04:23 am Title: Chapter 5
I REALLY liked this story!
Love that the two of them were able to break the curse.
Love that they took in stray dogs and kittys at the end.
This is such a great story! :D
Date: 05/17/10 03:42 am Title: Chapter 5
This was just such a charming story. So sweet and tender...I've always liked the pied piper, but I never would have guessed it could be turned into something so lovely. Thank you for sharing!
Date: 05/17/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 5
awwwwww, so sweet! i loved it babe~ now i have a question.... what can i do to get you to update never, never? i love you sugar!
Date: 05/17/10 02:50 am Title: Chapter 5
That was absolutely beautiful. Your talent amazes me again and again, Kish. This was such a wonderful story and I'm so glad you shared it with us. Thank you. ♥
Date: 05/17/10 02:23 am Title: Chapter 5
Awww this was awesome!
How cute and rimantic
Date: 05/17/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter 5
Awh, this was just too sweet. I loved it :)
At first it was kind of confusing but everything cleared up. I really adored the idea of separation you used and how scared you made Bill when Simone had Tom go away, and then their bond when they met each other again was just wonderful. This whole story was wonderful, really. Thank you <333
Date: 05/17/10 01:57 am Title: Chapter 5
god that was beautiful. i love you. seriously. lol. Bill sang for Tom in moans and whimpers and whispers, and Tom responded, playing Bill as well as any flute. probably the best quote ever. this story was so spiritual! bless you and may you continue to write such beautiful, inspiring stories!
Date: 05/17/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 5
Such a cute and nice tale! Thanks! It was awesome!
Date: 05/17/10 01:36 am Title: Chapter 5
ahh such a magical, wonderful ending! :) i loved reading this - it somehow had this mystical air to it that you don't find in a lot of other stories.
Date: 05/16/10 10:28 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, one more chapter to go.
I thought it was going to be a little bit longer, but given the fact you wrote the whole story in Mother's Day, I shouldn't be surprised.
Anyway, I liked this chapter. A lot. Somehow, it succeeded portraying Tom. To figure out the mysterious piper, a little.
Thanks for sharing!
I'm really, really enjoying this.
Date: 05/16/10 09:48 am Title: Chapter 4
No more after this? Oh well, I suppose it ended well where it it did. But I would have liked more. I guess the story was finished though, and anything else would be indulgant. Great job!
Date: 05/16/10 09:18 am Title: Chapter 1
This is cool. I don't know if the piper took another of Jorg's kids when Bill was a baby (I think so), or if Tom is the original piper or Bill's stolen twin brother (no clue). Either way, this is a very original story and I love the setting you've created.
Date: 05/16/10 07:16 am Title: Chapter 4
amazing job sugar, i love how this story makes me feel like im living in a storybook~
Date: 05/15/10 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
so amazing :) aww im sad it'll be so short, but i still can't wait your next update!
Date: 05/15/10 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
I so adore the tone of this story. The whole atmosphere around it is beautiful and magical and this chapter was just lovely. :)
Date: 05/15/10 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 4
Only one more chapter? Aww, well I've really enjoyed it thus far and I think it's an amazing story.
Date: 05/15/10 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 4
They're cute! Can't wait to read more! :D