Date: 05/12/10 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Gosh, this is great. I feel so bad for them both ;_;
Date: 05/12/10 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, my.
Great, great chapter. You totally fooled me about the piper's payment, fourteen years ago. I'm glad Tom's back, though. Even if things are not that smooth right now.
I'm loving this, completely.
See ya.
Date: 05/12/10 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 2
:whimper: You are really evil with these chapter breaks, you know. I'm so devastated for both Bill and Tom, having those memories taken from him. I really love the draw between them, the little whispers Bill wants to succumb to, the music leading him on. ♥ Carry on, good Kishmet!
Date: 05/12/10 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh now this is lovely. I love the concept of this, with the twinly twist and, of course, your writing just brings it all to life brilliantly. Looking forward to the next chapters x
Date: 05/12/10 09:46 am Title: Chapter 1
This is a really interesting start. I can't wait to see what happens!
You're so talented. The way that you word things really adds to the atmosphere of the story, and gives it that timeless, mystical, fairy-tale sort of feel. I hope I can learn to do that as well as you do.
♥
Date: 05/12/10 09:45 am Title: Chapter 2
So sad. :'(
I hope that Bill will make it up to Tom for the slap in his face. D:
Date: 05/12/10 09:31 am Title: Chapter 2
i cried, i freaking cried.. i love this, please update soon sugar?
Date: 05/12/10 09:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh, this story is so good! I'm loving it. Poor Bill to have his memories stripped away from him like that, even if at the time Simone thought it was for the best. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next!
Date: 05/12/10 03:16 am Title: Chapter 2
ohhhhh! cant wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 05/12/10 03:13 am Title: Chapter 2
yay so different,so beautiful
can't wait 4 more
Date: 05/12/10 03:10 am Title: Chapter 2
I wish I had took Muse's advice sooner and read your work sooner because it's truly brilliant. I love where you're going with this and I love how it's turning out. This is easily becoming one of my favorite stories. All the detail and setting of the mood is great. I love the side scene and memories you have too, they're great. You're truly doing magnificent.
Date: 05/12/10 02:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Awww love it!
Continue soon!
Date: 05/12/10 02:07 am Title: Chapter 2
can't wait for more, this is riveting
Date: 05/12/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 2
RUN TO TOMNUS, SON. GO TO YOUR DEAR SWEET BRUDER-LOVER.
Date: 05/12/10 01:39 am Title: Chapter 2
SHIT SHIT SHIT! give me more!!! GIVE ME MORE!!!
Date: 05/12/10 01:35 am Title: Chapter 2
ah! ah ah! Ah! ah! i really can barely wait for the next update, but i shall wait, as patiently as i can!
Date: 05/12/10 01:28 am Title: Chapter 2
gahh so intense! i love the magic you've incorporated into the story so far. i will definitely be reading... :D
Date: 05/11/10 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 1
This sounds very interesting ! I really like the first chapter and I can't wait for the rest!
Date: 05/11/10 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
ahh this is so good! i honestly can't wait to see what happens next so im really glad to hear that it's already fully written - and of course im looking forward to the next update! :D