Date: 01/08/16 07:35 am Title: Push: 1
I wish you wrote regularly. Your writing is definitely breath-taking.
This fic is just amazing! The feelings and words are well-conveyed and able to touch the readers effectively. I loved it!
Date: 10/29/10 11:16 pm Title: Push: 1
Wow. *_* Another piece of amazingness. This one cuts deep because it feels so real, like this is the way it could really be. And I love that.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm flattered you think so.
Date: 07/04/10 02:20 am Title: Push: 1
I'm impressed with this story, I didn't think it would be so good!
I think there's real power in the way you make them talk to eachother and the narration. It really creates the mood of what's happening, the apprehension, the temptation, the fear of crossing that line. I loved it.
>>“Billi,” Tom murmurs and the nakedness of emotion in the two syllables almost hurts. “They’re just words, right?”
This line is amazing, u can feel it, and see it, and all the implications. That's my fav line. :)
This was fab. Great work. (Just watch out for typos!!)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you think so, that means a lot. (and yes, I'm frequently susceptible to typos :P)
Date: 05/11/10 01:39 am Title: Push: 1
Oh this is great! Please I will like to read more, such an awesome start!
XoXo
Author's Response: Actually...I think I'm keeping this as a one-shot. As I wrote the second chapter, I realized it didn't flow and that this chapter standing alone was the best way to capture the essence of the story I was trying to tell. BUT the second chapter to this is going to be used as a basis for a new fic that I'm working on! I'm so sorry to mislead you, but I hope you enjoyed it all the same...
Date: 05/11/10 12:19 am Title: Push: 1
That was super! I love how you pitted opposite forces against each other all over this story. It feels like a rush and like exhaustion all at once. That's what I got from it.
It would be something to be afraid of; ruining an irreplaceable bond, crossing that one line and changing everything.
This was a great oneshot, if felt like so much more!
Author's Response: That's a very insightful observation, thank you! I really appreciate your wonderful feedback.
Date: 05/11/10 12:02 am Title: Push: 1
Dont pull away, Tomi, please.. ;__;
I love this!
Author's Response: Actually...I think I'm keeping this as a one-shot. As I wrote the second chapter, I realized it didn't flow and that this chapter standing alone was the best way to capture the essence of the story I was trying to tell. BUT the second chapter to this is going to be used as a basis for a new fic that I'm working on! Sorry to mislead you. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/10/10 11:51 pm Title: Push: 1
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Actually...I think I'm keeping this as a one-shot. As I wrote the second chapter, I realized it didn't flow and that this chapter standing alone was the best way to capture the essence of the story I was trying to tell. BUT the second chapter to this is going to be used as a basis for a new fic that I'm working on! Sorry to mislead you.
Date: 05/10/10 11:47 pm Title: Push: 1
So intense! I ache for both of them and can't wait for more. *_*
Author's Response: Actually...I think I'm keeping this as a one-shot. As I wrote the second chapter, I realized it didn't flow and that this chapter standing alone was the best way to capture the essence of the story I was trying to tell. BUT the second chapter to this is going to be used as a basis for a new fic that I'm working on! Sorry to mislead you.
Date: 05/10/10 11:20 pm Title: Push: 1
For some reason, at the summary because of my kinky mind thought "Bill keeps pushing it" or whatever it was, was wrong. :D You know.. he 'pushes'. -shot-
Either way, that was lovely!
Bill being fearless, when he's really not. Pushing the limit, stepping over the lines, breaking every rule, I like that. When Bill was high/drunk that interaction with the twins was interesting and I admired how Tom was disgusted, knowing Bill is manipulative and that stuff.
Loved it. :)
Author's Response: Hahaha naughty, naughty! I'm glad you liked it. Thank you so much for the review!
Date: 05/10/10 08:48 pm Title: Push: 1
Wow, that was intense! I really like the way you wrote this. The idea is brilliant too! Can't wait to read the next chapter !
Author's Response: Awesome, thank you! Glad you think so!