Date: 09/15/13 09:22 am Title: Chapter 1
I don't know what drove you to write the 5,000 word one-shot either but could you do it again? This was freakin' amazing!
Date: 11/05/12 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd love to read a sequal to this... enjoyed reading it again...
Date: 10/13/10 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was so amazing. I love stories like these, full of emotion and details. Loved it!
Date: 05/23/10 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I'd like to read a sequel, so keep on writing:)
Date: 05/11/10 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I liked it! I hope to see more chaps soon :)
Date: 05/11/10 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed it
I think you should make this into a full story, not just a one shot. Its really good
Date: 05/11/10 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
*to favorites*
please, please, pretty P-L-E-A-S-E more, more, more, more, MOAR!!
make me happy =)
Date: 05/11/10 10:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I had to read again this morning while listening to "Chasing Car's" by Snow Patrol-perfect for this story. If you don't know the song, it's beautiful. Here are the lyric's;
We'll do it all/everything/on our own
We don't need anything/or anyone
If I lay here/if I just lay here/would you lie with me and just forget the world
I don't quite know/how to say/how I feel
Those three word's/are said too much/they're not enough
If I lay here/if i just lay here/ would you lie with me and just forget the world
Forget what we're told/before we get too old/show me a garden that's bursting into life
Let's waste time/chasing car's/around our head's
I need your grace/to remind me/to find my own
If I lay here/if I just lay here/would you lie with me and just forget the world
Forget what we're told/before we get too old/show me a garden that's bursting into life
All that I am/all that I ever was/is here in your perfect eye's/they're all I can see
I don't know where/confused about how as well/just know that these thing's will never change for us at all
If I lay here/if I just lay here/ would you lie with me and just forget the world...
Date: 05/11/10 03:42 am Title: Chapter 1
A one-shot and Im want more :( U can write another one please
Date: 05/11/10 03:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I started reading this and then I got completely sucked in and forgot to even pretend to listen to what the teacher was saying. Whoops? XD I really loved it, I wish it wasn't a one-shot so bad, but it's fantastic just like this anyway. I loved how there's this complicated back story that you just hint at, it makes me really CRAVE a prequel or something ._.
Amazing!
Date: 05/11/10 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1
Aw man, so sad. It's awful that it took that to get Tom to come back. Thank goodness Bill held on that long and there's hope for them yet. :)
Date: 05/11/10 12:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Yea, it was inticing... What was it that happened? Or is that another story?
Date: 05/11/10 12:07 am Title: Chapter 1
So much happened and ended beautifully!
I really wish you would consider continuing...would love to know the detail's as to what got them to this point in the first place, and to see what the future will be!
Date: 05/10/10 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I definitely think you should continue on with this.
I really enjoyed it and want to know what happened in the past and what is going to happen now that Tom is back by Bill's side.
Date: 05/10/10 11:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this! However, I wish it wasn't just a one-shot! I'd really like to know details about the twins' past and future after the hospital accident. :)
Date: 05/10/10 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awe that was really cute and deep -favs-
Date: 05/10/10 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww that was adorable, I'm very glad you wrote it :) Twins should never be separated, that's like the saddest thing ever! I'm glad Tom came back in the end even if he shouldn't have left in the first place!
Date: 05/10/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was very sweet.
Tom leaving Bill and then finally showing up. It's saddening he had to leave his brother like that, not knowing his condition. Even having David tell him that. *shakes head* Bad Tomi.. Tom didn't seem to believe that e-mail... and, Bill? Aw, why? I'm surprised Bill wasn't crying the second he saw Tom or didn't back him out, but accepted him. I liked Simone's role this also. The re-acceptance between the twins as lovely. This was a very nine fic. Lengthy and made sense.
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Date: 05/10/10 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOW. this is really beautiful. I LOVE IT! :D *saved to favorites*