Date: 03/09/15 04:55 am Title: Lost
HAHA THIS IS HILARIOUS..I LOVE IT. LUV YOUR STORIES.
Date: 09/19/12 08:18 pm Title: Lost
this was.. creepy o.o but highly pleasent to read. But the birthmark part contrastin with the police speach does leave doubts xD well I guess Tom will remain as mystery as to who he really is xD great job hun :D
Date: 01/19/12 01:51 am Title: Lost
Holy...shit...But...but he knew...Did Bill tell the police any of that stuff??? 'Cause if he didn't, that's the real Tom and he was kidnapped and escaped but had to resort to crime, and if he told them all the stuff Tom said, then Bill just lost his virginity to a stranger...Shit, that's creepy...
Date: 09/09/11 11:56 am Title: Lost
fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck!?!??!thats not tomi! :((((
Date: 08/04/11 06:52 pm Title: Lost
How can a mother not know her own son?
And when the police spoke so carelessly at the end it makes them seem cold.
"everyone wins except the real Tom" I believe the real Tom is out there.
The birthmarks confused me though made me think it was really him.
Ahh I don't know :/
Date: 04/07/11 03:42 pm Title: Lost
I love this story. There are a few grammar mistakes but other than that it's great. The part where Bill and Tom fall asleep, I wander if this Tom is actually his brother cause of the birthmarks. I just noticed that now.
Date: 03/22/11 03:55 am Title: Lost
You should write a sequel :D
Author's Response: Plotted around what? I really did enjoy writing this topic but I'm not sure if the way I wrote this would allow a sequel. I mean I did leave it pretty open ended and open to interpretation. Let's not spoil it for those that have different ideas about really happened. Who do you think Tom is?
Date: 03/12/11 05:26 am Title: Lost
Just one thing I forgot to mention: So i guess this 'Tom' who's taken the real TOm's place... he must have been stalking Bill for some time, huh? Since he knew all that stuff. XD
Date: 03/12/11 05:22 am Title: Lost
Wow! 0_0 This was incredible in so many ways xD First of all, Bill being all hysterical, saying that i wasn't the real Tom... gosh, I was sure it was something wrong with Bill, or that Tom had just changed too much that he couldn't recognize him xD I was convinced it was the real Tom, since Simone said so xD And he was acting it out so well! And the sex.... wow 0____0 That was... *drools* breathtaking. I can't put my finger on it! xD It was sexy! Haha, lol. The ending made me look like this: :) :| :O x___X 0___0 >.> and then finally like this: xD and :DDDDD. Haha it was a wonderful ending, even though it wasn't the real tom, which I thought xD It's a bit brilliant too, that they just said that the trouble maker was tom, sent him there and "solved" the case XD haha, I laughed at that! Yeah, I guess everybody won, except for the real Tom... Where is he btw? I wanna know so bad what happened to him xD what if he shows up later in life, finding Bill with this other 'Tom'! What's gonna happen then? Gaaaaaaaaaah! >.> This was mind blowing! It's deff going on my favorites!! And yeah, this review is quite.. disturbing. Haha, I made a fool out of myself again. Great. Okay, I'm leaving now... Byye! xD *fades away*
Date: 02/22/11 06:34 am Title: Lost
Wait... I don't get it. Like I might just be having a blonde moment or something, butif that wasn't Tom then who the freak was it? And does Bill ever find out it's not Tom? Anyway what happened to Tom, and you should right a sequel. I love that movie though
Date: 02/21/11 02:15 am Title: Lost
I honestly think that the fake Tom was the kid he was talking about earlier. The one Bill befriended when no one wouldn't. That explained him knowing alot of Bill, also I just hate cops, they're just people who are given the right to be bullies. They do more hurt than good and there are a tiny percent of people that are good cops. But that's just my opinion. : ) awesome story, I liked the creepiness of it.
Date: 12/10/10 01:52 am Title: Lost
I say it's not Tom. but I wanna know how he knows all that stuff
Date: 12/02/10 09:02 pm Title: Lost
Another story I adored! I've been going back through your 'Where Evil Lays' series and I'm so in love. This was highly creepy and honestly was quite a surprise at the end. I'm also left torn between being happy for Bill and 'Tom' and deeply sad for the real Tom. Amazingly complex and entertaining!
Author's Response: Haha thank you! Yeah not many readers seemed to pick up on that part, about 'Tom' being some homeless trouble-maker and the stituation sucking for the real Kaulitz boy. I'm very glad you picked up on that
Date: 11/13/10 04:52 am Title: Lost
I can't stop thinking how he knew all this things, was it the police that told him? Or is he a stalker of some kind? And Bill will problaby be confused again, if he see the mark and all the other details that are bound to appear.
Great fic by the way, would love to read more to know what would happen.
Date: 09/12/10 07:37 pm Title: Lost
Okay, I really thought he wasnt Tom but then the info...and what the fuck?!? Idiotic police! So not Tom but he certainly acted like him. Maybe a stalker that followed the boys, especially Bill?
Date: 07/26/10 06:29 pm Title: Lost
Stupid police. And they actually are like that, can you believe it? I know it to be true o.o I loved this!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! You're one of the very few that actually understood the ending and that little tid-bit the police said. I know right? The police can corrupt sometimes
Date: 07/14/10 07:19 pm Title: Lost
sooo good and I am guessing there's more
Author's Response: Nahh just a frustrating one-shot to keep you guessing. Poor Bill
Date: 05/11/10 10:53 pm Title: Lost
OMg that was not expected. I thought maybe Bill was right in the beginning being a twin and all but then I thought he was just in denial. That was great, I wonder if he'll ever figure it out though...
*Dun* *Dun* *Dun*
Date: 05/10/10 03:00 pm Title: Lost
Ok-great twisting of the mind. I'm thinking possibly that Tom's look's had changed quite drastically and it was actually the real Tom and the cop's didn't recognize him. If not, where did the homeless guy get all the info, like Bill calling him Tomi~that Bill didn't like being pushed around by his older brother and the info about Bushido?
Loved it!
Date: 05/10/10 10:50 am Title: Lost
wow. that was a mind twist. good story, great writing.