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Reviewer: bubbleman89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/13 04:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 08/18/13 04:25 am Title: Chapter 1
This starts off really hot, you should finish it!
Reviewer: reireixgrr Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 05/10/10 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
I cant wait for more, this sounds promisingly hot!
Reviewer: andyyomnom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/10/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 05/10/10 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
totally awesome first chapter, explicit details when needed (LOL) in my opinion a very good story about poor bill. all i would say is not suitable for young readers xD
Reviewer: thgirls Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/10 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 05/09/10 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1
this is a fun and exciting story i really cant wait to see what happens next :D
Reviewer: im_his Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/09/10 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Date: 05/09/10 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1
can't wait to read more
Reviewer: tinkersowner123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/10 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
Date: 05/07/10 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really good
Author's Response: Thanks :) im glad you like it and i will write the next chapter soon
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