Date: 05/06/10 03:51 pm Title: Lesson Learned
This was very nice, and hot too.
At first I didn't know they knew each other but somewhere in the middle I started to think there must be something going on here and then I was sure. You did good job with this! :)
xx
Author's Response: I'm glad you picked up on some of the hints in the middle. =) Thank you so much. <3
Date: 05/06/10 03:13 pm Title: Lesson Learned
i absolutely loved your
'pure, unapologetic smut' ^^
well, i really just love all smut involving Bill and Tom xD
But your one-shot was super sexy
hehe.
I must not have read the main pairing because the whole time i didnt realize.....haha xD
Tom, a man in uniform...yummy (:
[and bill in the back seat of the car?
HOLY SCHEISSE what a perfect combo xD]
LOVED IT ^^
*f a v o r i t i n g*
-----Samantha
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! I don't often let myself write smut without a real plot, but I'd had this one in mind for a while, and decided to go for it. =) And I'm glad you were surprised at the end! That totally makes it worth it for me. (And yeah, Tom in a uniform and Bill in the backseat = super hot.) Thank you so much for reviewing! ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 05/06/10 03:12 pm Title: Lesson Learned
Damn hot. Kudos!
Author's Response: LoL Thank you!
Date: 05/06/10 03:09 pm Title: Lesson Learned
that was an hot clichè that still turns me on XD I love policemen *ç* and your so good that at the beginning I didn't understand that they were pretending.
I'm waiting for updates of your other stories
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought it was hot! I have to admit, I thought it was kind of hot, too. =) And I'm glad that you weren't aware from the beginning that they were pretending. That makes the ending worth it, yeah? And an update of Way Back Home is coming soon, I promise! <333
Date: 05/06/10 02:46 pm Title: Lesson Learned
Love this! Such lovely hot sexy smut! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <333
Date: 05/06/10 02:30 pm Title: Lesson Learned
Guh, loved this! I like the hints you started throwing in there, in the middle, that there was a little more to this encounter than meets the eye. ^_~ Very, very hot, and it made me giggle, too.
Author's Response: I'm glad you caught the hints! I was hoping they wouldn't be TOO obvious, but that they'd definitely be there if anyone went back and read it a second time. =) Thank you so much. ♥ ♥ ♥
Date: 05/06/10 02:27 pm Title: Lesson Learned
Ohhhhh! lol you tricked me. I totally fell for that. When Bill called him Tom I had to double take, and I was like... "when did he tell him his name?" Duh.
Nghhh this was so hot. Officer!Tom... fucking hell, I think my brain melted. *_*
Author's Response: hahaha I WANTED you to fall for it. =P And I thought that name thing might be a dead giveaway to everyone. =)
Date: 05/06/10 02:27 pm Title: Lesson Learned
OH THIS IS SO AWESOME! XD
And hot.
I was sitting here thinking NO WAY, NO WAY GUSTAV IS THE BOYFRIEND. NOT WHEN TOM REPLIED 'PRACTICE' LOL
NNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH, this was hot and I MELTED at Tom's repeated warnings for Bill to not speed. I just...yeah, melted.
LOVELY!
Author's Response: =D! I'm so, so, so glad you liked it. lol Melted? *offers ice* Thank you so much. ♥
Date: 05/06/10 02:12 pm Title: Lesson Learned
Hee, that was fun and naughty! Very, very hot scenario, I just love how it all played out. (And I really shouldn't be reading things like this at work, not that I could help myself once I saw it was a story by you) ;)
Author's Response: Hot, right? I've had the scenario in my head for a long time, and then I just randomly got the first line in my head and BOOM, that's how it goes. =) And nooo, naughty you for reading smut at work. lol