Date: 02/12/10 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
Really? This was the first sex scene and TH fic you've ever written?
Well, to be honest with you, I really don't think you'll need any helpful criterias or tips whatsoever. Just keep on walking down the road where your inspiration takes you, add your ideas and keep true to your style. If this really was the first time you've written such stories, you'll face zero problems in the future, just remember never fear to experiment. This was so very well well written, that I have to admit I had a few difficulties believing that this was your first time writing such stories, I don't know what else to say except for: Great job! :D
You really impressed me =D
Author's Response: Awh...thank you! It was my first attempt at writing TH fanfiction, and of writing anything with sex, though I had been reading fanfiction for years before I wrote this. And I've been writing poetry and short stories for a long time, so have quite a bit of experiance with writing in general.
Date: 08/29/08 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
Gawd, this was so hot!!!
Date: 01/31/08 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
For first fic... IT'S AWSOME!!! So hot... So sexy... A really good job :) one of the best ;)
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Date: 01/29/08 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMGOD o.o H-O-T!!! XD lmao
totally awesome fanfiction! Goes straight to my favourites :D
Author's Response: Yay! My story got favorited! -dances- Erm...yes, I am so glad you liked it.
Date: 01/28/08 09:06 am Title: Chapter 1
omg i am speechless...xDD
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it. -strokes ego-
Date: 01/28/08 08:34 am Title: Chapter 1
gaaaaaahhhh!!!! so fucking HOT!!!! xD
love it!!!
Author's Response: -bows- I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was rather worried about how well I wrote the sex.
Date: 01/28/08 07:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow! You did an awesome job with this! I really hope you will write more! This was really hot ! *drools* Great work (:
Author's Response: -grins- Thank you! I do intend to write more, but I'm rather short on time at the moment.
Date: 01/28/08 03:05 am Title: Chapter 1
not bad for the first time!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 01/27/08 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
So cute, so sexy, so sweet, so funny.
I love the way you write! It's really easy to picture the whole scene! Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 01/27/08 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Some times Bill was just sexy on accident but today it was definitely on purpose."
lmao.
that was pretty gooooood!
and hot too.
great job for a first!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 01/27/08 10:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was good for your first fic. Hot sex scene too. Just noticed a few typos, but they weren't so bad that it pulled me out of the story. Good job.
And teasing Bill is always amazing, isn't he?
Author's Response: Thank you! And I love the idea of Bill being a complete tease. As long as I get to know what happens after wards, anyway.