Date: 05/05/10 08:39 pm Title: It'll Be Fun
This actually made me laugh 0-o poor Bill all screaming and what not hahaha oh Tom...=) good but, kind of scary for me uhm, the blood, not a big fan of blood my self. *shutters* bye. =)
Author's Response: I'm not a big fan of blood either. Thanks for the review :)
Date: 05/05/10 08:39 pm Title: It'll Be Fun
wow. xD I didn't like the ending, no offense.
But I loved the scissors. Mwahahah >:D That was hawt. BDSM is utter love. seriously.
Aaaand, I liked the feelings that Bill felt. Fear ^_~ And how the blood was scaring him, the scissors.. Tom.. haha. It was brilliant. xD
It was kind of rape, but I love rape. XP
Poor Bill...
hehe this made me smile. xD
Write more BDSM. < 3
Author's Response: Yea, it kind of was rape and me, being sadistically weird like I am when it comes to fanfics, enjoy that kind of stuff. :) I wasn't quite sure how to end it because I wanted to show that Bill is now scared of Tom after their encounter... but I wanted to keep it a short one shot so it basically just ended randomly. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/05/10 07:52 pm Title: It'll Be Fun
my mouth looked like this:
:O
when i read the part where tom cut bill with the scissors.
i practically cringed at that lol.
I thought, oh gosh, Bill is going to be completely pissed at Tom for taking it so far, but then the end reassured me (:
where bill said:
"whatever you want, Master" hehe.
All in All, I Liked Thiss (:
& your first time BDSM? you did a great jobb ^-^
-----Samantha
Author's Response: I wanted it to seem as if Bill was afraid of Tom at the end of the story, and that he only called Tom his "Master" because he was afraid. I don't think it came across the way I intended, but I'm glad that you enjoyed the story anyway!! Yupp, this was my first stab at BDSM, so I'm kind of shy about it. Thanks for the review!