Date: 02/23/18 01:33 am Title: Chapter 2-A family picnic and convincing dad to go to town
please update this soon
Date: 07/10/13 03:11 pm Title: Prologue-An dangerous escape
YAY!!!
Author's Response: I am going to be updating in a few hours. I am a bit late but I am almost done. I have a few more things to add. :)
Date: 07/10/13 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 2-A family picnic and convincing dad to go to town
More yes now please
Author's Response: Yes ma'am *salutes* I have the next chapter almost done. I will post soon
Date: 05/10/10 07:33 am Title: Chapter 1-Arriving at the lake and settling in
I was probably going to leave a review in the first place, but the 'steamy hot twin sex' you said you will write, MADE me leave one :D
The cute little relationship between Bill & Anna is so cute [tom wasn't in it so much, but the whole family. awe ^^]
Btw, Anna keeps referring to Bill as "Mom" is Bill supposed to be a girl in this fic, or is it just assumed since he is the more feminine man, he takes the role of the mom? (:
The fact that the family seems so adorable only makes it worse to think that Anna will be murdered :O
But thats where the twists and plot come in xD
"So, I take it a fashion emergency doesn't count?" XDD
Great Chapter (:
-----Samantha.
Author's Response: Lol. Oh you will definelty get some steamy hot twin sex. And As for why anna calls Bill mom is he gave birth to her ans Bill refered to himself as her mom before she began talking so that's how that stuck plus the more feminine man thing as well. And There will be twists and plots. And As for Anna being murdered it may happen it may not. And Thanks for your review that made my day.rn
Date: 05/09/10 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 1-Arriving at the lake and settling in
i would love to vacation at a lake house...it's great to see them as a family unit...and the credit card part was funny...
Author's Response: Aww thanks. I thought of trhe credit card part very randomly. I'm glad you like and thanks for reviewing. More to come. Hopefully by wedsnday.
Date: 05/09/10 08:57 pm Title: Chapter 1-Arriving at the lake and settling in
Usually I hate OFC, but Anna sounds adorable! I love her little innocent daughter personality.
I laughed at first with Bill being referred to as mom. ::) But, ah well. xD He seems very very sweet, I love it. This was brief, but I highly enjoyed it. It isn't the best piece as of now, I KNOW it will become great because rape, angst, tears, *cough* "steamy hot twin sex" [ < - do want < 3 ] is all love. =3
It's a shame Anna will die, but once she does, I know I will really like this lmao.
Bill crying over his baby girl and Tom too, will be...
< 3
I really liked this so far. (:
You deserve this review highly, it's sooo saddening you only have two! :( *cries for you*
Author's Response: All shall be coming in the next 3 chapters 4 at the most. Oh and Anna doesn't die at all. She'll come back. She is a key part in the story. And yeah it is sad that I only got 2 reviews but hopefully they will go up cause it shall get better and better. And thank you for reviewing. That makes me happy. *huggles you*
Date: 05/07/10 02:07 am Title: Prologue-An dangerous escape
i loved the movie...this is interesting so far and can't wait to read more...
Author's Response: Thank you. I am finishing up the next chapter now. So expect it between today or monday. And Thanks foe reviewing :)
Date: 05/06/10 03:36 pm Title: Prologue-An dangerous escape
oh gosh, i wanted to see
'the last house on the left' movie when it came out in theaters, but to this day i havent seen it
*getting ready to ask mom to go to blockbuster* xD
I really think the idea though
[from reading the summary] will turn out to be a great fic (:
& poor natalie, being back-handed :O
Will Bill and Tom Be introduced in
the next chapter? (:
*s t a y i n g . t u n e d . f o r . m o r e*
-----Samantha
Author's Response: lol. Thank you so much. Your very sweet. And yes poor Natalie, That was kinda hard to do for my fic. And yes Bill and Tom will be in the next chapter. Them, their daughter, scotty, Anna's dog and a couple more character's will be in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing. I shall be updating soon. Maybe tommorrow or monday.