Date: 05/06/10 02:01 am Title: Chapter 1
i thought this was very well done.
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: 05/05/10 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
"They" Tom said that so many times... fuck they. :/ I hate "THEY". I hate when people say it, I hate when I say it myself. They is always bad. No matter what. When you don't want to refer, you say, 'they' or 'them'. I wish, "they" would burn in hell. Now.
Anyways, this was emotional, realistic and lovely. Tom, I like how he makes you think about the real Tokio Hotel. Tom, when you see him, during some interviews, gets quiet at times, and staring blankly into no where.. Whereas, Bill is always smiling goofily and talking way. too. fucking. much. ;__; And when Bill lets Tom speak, Bill starts like fading away too. You've probably noticed, but it's like, when they listen to one another's voice they go into dream land. o.o It's pretty though. It's a beautiful moment.
Either way, about your lovely fic..
I absolutely adored it. It was, so intense and beautiful. *shakes head* You did amazingly with this.
If one of the Kaulitz twins were to die, it's 100% obvious the living one won't be living very long... to meet each other once again, forever, in Heaven. :D
< 3333
much love for this fic. It's pure brilliance.
Author's Response: I totally get what you're saying about when they speak and have noticed it. It's beautiful *_*rnBut thank you so much for your extremely kind words. <3
Date: 05/05/10 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOw awesome can't wait :):)
Date: 05/05/10 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love how you show that Tom & Bill are real people and feel weak and unsure at time's like the rest of us.
My favorite line was- "About how you are my piece of home that I never want to leave. About how I love you so much and wouldn't know what to do without you."~~Beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3rnYes, like I said before, I really wish people would realize that they're not super heroes just because they're in a band, they have emotions, too. Just like you and me.
Date: 05/05/10 09:34 am Title: Chapter 1
beautiful...im loving the brief insight into the mind of tom kaultiz...cant wait to read what you write next!
"About how you keep me sane with this hectic life we live in. About how you are my piece of home that I never want to leave. About how I love you so much and wouldn't know what to do without you."
Author's Response: I've always wanted to know what went on in that boy's head, so I just decided to write my own, sad, version. (: &Thank you. <3
Date: 05/05/10 08:30 am Title: Chapter 1
wow. this is very beautiful. enough said. :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3
Date: 05/05/10 08:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I thought I knew what you were trying to achieve with this story, but then you got to the end and it was kind of... dull. Like, you had subtle clues for twincest, and then the fact that they'd made that pact was such a strong plot point. But the end seemed anti-climactic for what I was picturing in my head you had been building to.
So my opinion is that you had a good thing going, but the ending was a let down. Sorry I can't be a more up-beat reviewer. Keep writing tho, this was good. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I really appreciate you saying what you didn't like. It helps me see what I need to work on. So thank you. <3
Date: 05/05/10 04:17 am Title: Chapter 1
so sad :( it was a really good story
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: 05/05/10 02:43 am Title: Chapter 1
People tend to forget that these beautiful boys are fallible human beings too. Thanks for writing such a sweet story.
Author's Response: Yeah, I really wish people would realize that they're not super heroes just because they're in a band, they have emotions just like you and me. &Thank you so much. <3
Date: 05/05/10 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1
Awww this one shotbwas so cute!
Author's Response: hehe, Thank you <3
Date: 05/05/10 01:24 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this, amazing :]
Author's Response: Thank you. <3