Date: 05/11/10 11:11 pm Title: One Heart, One Bed
They fell asleep intertwined as one creature, one heartbeat.
This was my favorite part--it made my heart feel whole. Your writing is amazing, and I can't wait to see what you do in the upcoming chapters!
Author's Response: ♥ They give me that feeling. Thank you, your words really mean a lot to me and I totally appreciate it. Some rough times, some good times coming up!
Date: 05/11/10 10:42 pm Title: One Heart, One Bed
Uh-oh, I'm thinking this is going to put a damper on Tom and Bill's not too innocent nighttime activities. Not too good that Simone found out like this, I suspect. The naughty, very hot situation they found themselves into at the start of the chapter, more than made up for that, though. Fantastic chapter!
Author's Response: Maybe a bit. ;) They're actually a BIT too young to be really going at it. And this was definitely not a good way for Simone to find out! Thank you for your review. ♥
Date: 05/08/10 03:47 am Title: Surprise
i'm a dandelion, but i have my own thistle too, to protect me. =) i'm marrying him in 15 days!!
I'm so excited to see year 4 up. i got to read the others all in one piece. i cant decide if i want to wait and do that with this one...but i suspect i wont be able to help read each update as it comes. you are usually such a speedy updater though i wont complain much. =)
Author's Response: Hurrah for you and your thistle!
I'm really happy to bring year four out, finally. Cuties. Sorry the updates will be slow, though - once a week! I want to make sure I don't fall behind and get discouraged.
Date: 05/06/10 06:16 pm Title: Surprise
Awwww I'm so happy to see that you posted year 4 ! I love this story so much :D
This chapter was adorable, I like how even at such a young age, they already know that all they need is each other ! =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy to be writing this story again. It's lovely to be so certain of something when you're that young. ♥ Thanks for your review!
Date: 05/06/10 03:47 pm Title: Surprise
Onoes. Separation? *gets anxious for bill and tom*
Author's Response: Alas! We get into it a bit more in the next chapter, which is up! Thanks for your review.
Date: 05/06/10 05:16 am Title: Surprise
As much as I am ABSOLUTELY SO EXCITED about you updating again :DDDD I am so nervous for this year because they're growing up and that's bound to have Simone stepping in more. She really made me angry in this chapter and I'm sure she will more in the future.
But besides that, so beautifully written. Love love love Tay! ♥
Author's Response: Hee, but I think you're right to be nervous! Alas. They are growing up and getting all sexy-like, their peers are starting to notice. >_> Annnd unfortunately Simone is plowing forward with what she thinks is best, regardless.
Thank you so much! I'm utterly happy you're enjoying my kits.
Date: 05/05/10 08:04 pm Title: Surprise
Kits! *squees* They're too adorable. I love that even as they get closer to each other, they're still, well, boys and as such they behave. Loved that Bill couldn't even thing of teaming up with anyone else but Tom, despite getting along with the girls. I love jealous/possessive!Tom and how he thinks in terms on how to get away with the things he wants to do with his brother, like that last part in which he laid his head on his twin's shoulder. Lovely! I'll be looking forward to more, even if what's coming sounds awfully ominous.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, they're definitely still boys. ;D And we're going to see more and more of jealous possessive Tom, alas! Thanks for your review and I hope you continue to enjoy. And unfortunately, yes, ominous days are coming.
Date: 05/05/10 07:44 pm Title: Surprise
Reading this totally made me like 10 minutes late getting Mally from school. *grumble grumble engrossing story* *loves* :D
Author's Response: Oh nooo sorry to make you late! :O :tries to make chapters shorter: ;) Thank you!!
Date: 05/05/10 12:59 pm Title: Surprise
Hurray!!!! Finally!! I was afraid you won't continue the story!
Thank you!!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm really happy to continue it! Next chapter is up and I hope you continue to enjoy. ♥
Date: 05/05/10 11:13 am Title: Surprise
Kits!!! I'm so excited to see them again! But what is this end note seperation you speak of?? BAH!
Gorgeous banner also!
Author's Response: Hee hee, thank you! We start to see it in the next chapter, which I'm glad to say is posted! ♥ Thanks for your support and lovely words regarding the banner! :)
Date: 05/05/10 10:10 am Title: Surprise
OMG I'm sooooo excited to see this back. I've really missed the not-so-little kitlings! Though I'm scared for next chapter already, lol. Seperation ... *frets*
But aww, so happy for his fic to be back. And the banner is adorable.
Oh, and I am most definitely a thistle, lol.
Author's Response: I'm really happy you're excited!! Next chapter is up, we'll see how it goes. ;) Thanks for your kind words on the banner! Yay for thistles, they keep the dandelions safe. ;)
Date: 05/05/10 04:22 am Title: Surprise
Oh gosh, I was so excited to see this get posted, you have no idea! I was literally just wondering what had happened to the kit stories. I can see trouble brewing on the horizon, and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I am so excited to post it finally! Thank you. :D Definitely trouble on the way, alas. :3 But good times too. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/05/10 03:53 am Title: Surprise
I'm a dandelion.
Glad to see this story continuing. I didn't understand at first why the twins were horrified by the large party. I guess it's that they thought it was babyish and the bullies were there, as well as the fact that they like smaller private parties with just their close friends.
Can't wait to see the progression of Bill and Tom's intimte relationship, and see how their parents and others handle that. Maybe an adult Youku will show up and explain it to Gordon and Simone...
Author's Response: Yay for dandelions!
Thank you, I'm happy to be continuing it. :) It's hard to explain all the ways the large party horrified them, but partially, it's the thought of sharing a very close and personal day with a lot of people who they don't care about - and who don't care about them.
It will be progressing~ Alas, they won't get to meet an adult youko for quite some time so they'll have to continue to fumble through things together.
Date: 05/05/10 03:18 am Title: Surprise
Reading this reminds again how adorable the kits are, especially Tom. Simone and Gordon are so nice, to have the kits party at the sweet shop how Bill always wanted was so sweet.
"Happy birthing-day, Tom!" a girl leaned in beside Tom, touching his shoulder.
Tom glanced up at her warily. "Oh, uh, thanks," he said, and looked away quickly when he found himself looking down her low-cut top as she bent over.
- lol oh Tom
I am looking forward tot he next chapter, it sounds like it's going to be good.
Author's Response: They are so cute together, I love them. ♥ And Simone and Gordon made a few sacrifices to make that happen!
Tomi's gettin' hormones. ;D Pretty soon he's not going to be able to avoid looking. ;)Fun times in fourth year.
Date: 05/05/10 03:01 am Title: Surprise
It's so nice to get a new part to this series. I love the beginning! :)
xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy, next chapter is up.
Date: 05/05/10 02:46 am Title: Surprise
I am definitely a thistle. *nods* I'm so glad you continued! Simone's worry is going to be the death of her, lol
Author's Response: *snickers* Awesome, Tom's a thistle too. ;D Simone is definitely going to need to learn to become, ahem, a little more hands-off if she wants to avoid gray hairs.
Date: 05/05/10 02:39 am Title: Surprise
I got so excited when I saw this in the most recent stories. I've been waiting forever for this to be posted. There were times I was actually going to e-mail you or something to ask if you were going to still do year four, but I stopped myself because I know people have lives too.
I am really excited though, and I am looking forward to see what's new with the youkos. Okay, now I am going to actually read the first chapter, I just got too excited and had to get it out.
Author's Response: Eek, I'm so glad to bring this to you guys finally! I meant to premiere year four in FEBRUARY, so I am ashamed it took me so long.
Some new stuff, some old issues! I'm so glad you're so excited to read it and I hope you continue to enjoy. ♥
Date: 05/05/10 02:34 am Title: Surprise
Omg YES KITS! Aw, the birthing day party was so sweet of Simone, even if the kits didn't so much dig it. Well, Tom. xD He's too big for his own britches, no matter how loose. I really missed these guys, but girl, you are making me nervous with that end note!
Author's Response: I love that YES KITS reaction! :D :D :D It puts a big smile on my face! Tom will always be too big for his britches. ...Next chapter is up and your nervousness is, ahem, possibly justified? >_> Thank you for reading!
Date: 05/05/10 01:59 am Title: Surprise
I'm so glad this story is back. I mean okay, it's a new story, a new year, but still... And Bill declaring that he is a dandelion made me snicker. He really is. Thank you for going on with this amazing story.
Author's Response: Thank you! ♥ It's back, baby. :D Bill is sooo a dandelion, to be inspired with later hair-styles... Thanks for sticking with me and continuing to enjoy!
Date: 05/05/10 12:37 am Title: Surprise
Yay the kits are back! I missed them, very much! Oh, dear god, I'm not a dandelion or a thistle, I'm a nightshade flower! XD Poor Tom, getting stuck in a sweet shop with all his classmates. I can imagine his unease! I'll be waiting for your next update! *tracked*
Author's Response: They are indeed! Oh man, I love that answer - nightshade flower, how awesome. Tom was definitely not happy with that "surprise." Next chapter is up and I hope you continue to enjoy!