Date: 06/29/10 02:03 am Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I'm not losing interest! I'm just normally too lazy to comment. And I'm about to get even LAZIER than normal because the temperature has shot up; I think it's still like 100 degrees outside... I'm still very fascinated with how the twins are progressing, it does seem a bit slow at times, but I've also felt that JK Rowling went too slow with some parts of the HP books so you're okay XD I like how Bill and Tom have their double-standards of "I can change, but you have to stay exactly the same as always." It's so freaking adorable, and I have no idea why. It's like they're both scared of losing the familiarity of their twin but desperate to branch out in styles and likes. It's all so fascinating. I am still in love with this story, love.
Author's Response: *spanks you!* I don't want anything to feel like padding but the next years will definitely pick up. And I tooootally get that vibe off our real Tom and Bill, so of course I have fun playing with that dynamic in fiction. I think they're both invested in becoming their own person, but they don't want to get TOO different, you know? Thank you and I hope you continue to enjoy!
Date: 06/29/10 01:05 am Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I love sneaky twins :3 I am enjoying the fluff
In response to your questions, though; I personally don't mind reading through their lives as they progress -- the way you've written it/the pace you're writing it at -- and have no problems with anything, but despite the events that take place, it's possible some readers might find it...slow-moving? My only real critique/suggestion/whatever is that some readers might think that everything that's going on now are things we are very familiar with now (i.e., the twins hiding their secret doings from Simone, Simone's views on their relationship, the bullying, and so on...) Since I don't know what your plans for the story are, I have no place to say what you should do, because like I said earlier, I really don't mind reading at this pace. I guess if you ever consider skipping stuff, definitely leave it in if it's crucial to the story's progression as a whole (though I know you're an awesome enough author to not have me tell you that :P)
Though, I will admit, I am antsy for the day they get to be together whenever/however they want :) I hope that I helped and didn't come across offensive or anything. I'm always afraid of leaving critiques or suggestions because of that, so I really hope I said the right things D:
Author's Response: Sneaky covertly touching fluffy twins! I'm glad you're enjoying the pace - I was worried people would find it slow-moving and I agree, I need to try to cut back on too much repetitive stuff. Won't have that problem at all when we get further on, which I am excited to do!
I appreciate your comments, I do - I thought you struck a good balance of being supportive while providing constructive criticism. Thank you!
It's going to be a difficult road for them, reaching that place. ;_;
Date: 06/29/10 12:36 am Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I love everything you're doing with this fic! You really don't need to change anything in my book. I love the kits. :)
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I will keep forging on, and I'm going to try to work on JUST this for a while, because November was really fun and I felt as though I was making real progress!
Date: 06/29/10 12:21 am Title: Reinforcing the Bond
More frequent updates would be nice. It seems the wait between chapters is too long so I at times forget to check my tracked list
Author's Response: I'm going to work on that, I agree it can be tough to maintain interest when it seems like you need to wait too long. Thank you!
Date: 06/28/10 10:41 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I don't think this story needs any improvement. Its year four and i'm still as interested as i was during the year one story :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your support! Glad you think so. Makes me really happy to hear it and I'm going to try to pour all of my energy into this story for a while. :D
Date: 06/28/10 10:36 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I love it the way it is. You're in charge! You post it, I'll read it!
Author's Response: Thank you, so much! I'll keep working on it. :D
Date: 06/28/10 10:13 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I'm still loving the story. If people are losing interest, I have no idea why. ♥
Author's Response: Whew, thank you! :) I think, with a major project out of the way, it's time to turn the major share of my attention to this story for a while. :) It should benefit from that!
Date: 06/28/10 09:52 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I like the pace of these stories. I like these stories in general. *cuddles them*
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad. :3 Kits cuddle you back! But watch out for teeth. ;)
Date: 06/28/10 09:26 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I think this story is as amazing as it ever was, and needs no change of course. You keep on as you are, if you please!
I love that the kits have straightened out the whole 'no wrestling' business, but I'm worried about those darn bullies. Poor kits are too awesome for their own good, and others just don't understand.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate it! I'll do my best.
Yeah, they need to watch out. But the bullies are quite worrisome. The kits are definitely not something that others can really understand - like our own twins!
Date: 06/28/10 09:18 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
Awww, they were both concerned the other didn't want them any more. I'm glad that was cleared up and quite effectively it might seem. ;)
I, for one, haven't lost interest in this story, although I wouldn't say no to more frequent updates and yes, I know I'm greedy. LOL. I think the story is perfect as it is, I love seeing them grow as they have so far, a step at a time. I think the pacing is great, I would feel as if I'm missing something if you changed anything about it, but that's just me. Hee.
Author's Response: They were, they definitely were. For two lil' kits so in tune with each other, it's amazing the misunderstandings they come up with! And wish all of the misunderstandings could be cleared up so easily.
Thank you! I'm going to work on more frequent updates for future years, though I think I'll stick to weekly for now. :3 I'm glad you are enjoying the pacing!
Date: 06/28/10 09:11 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
Well, I'm definitely not losing interest in the kits' story! In fact, I was waiting for this chapter before going to bed :P
I think you should write them as you see them and as you imagine their story... don't change it to much just for the readers cause I like the way you write them ! Personally, I adore kits fluff... I also love to see their evolution, so please don't skip to much underagey :) This series is just awesome, I wish more people knew about it !
Author's Response: I'm pleased to hear it! I guess I'm feeling rushed, wanting to get to later years. Which means I should concentrate MORE on writing this story. And I'm glad you like fluff and evolution, because that's really what this is all about! Thank you! I know this kind of fantasy story isn't for everyone and I'm just grateful as many people like it as they do. ;)
Date: 06/25/10 01:17 am Title: Parting Ways
Still digging watching where it all goes :D
Author's Response: Into a rough set of teenage years, that's for sure. ;D
Date: 06/23/10 06:10 am Title: Parting Ways
Aww poor baby Tom. Sometimes he just breaks my heart. :(
Author's Response: He's having a rough time of it, that's for sure. It makes you wanna hug him, doesn't it?
Date: 06/22/10 09:06 pm Title: Parting Ways
this was a good chapter, more insight into tom. i like how this is what makes him get dreadlocks. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: He's a tough nut to crack. ;) Yes, I liked the idea of him getting them to hold onto something close to him, someone who inspired him. ♥ Thank you!
Date: 06/22/10 06:18 pm Title: Parting Ways
Awww poor Tomi! At least he will always have Bill... Excellent chapter, can't wait for the next one ! :)
Author's Response: Yes, Tomi's having a hard time! But indeed, Bill will always be with him. Thank you and I hope you enjoy that next chapter! ;D
Date: 06/22/10 02:16 pm Title: Parting Ways
They each have trouble imagining change in the other. :) => And that's so cute!
Author's Response: Yes they do! Glad you enjoyed. ♥
Date: 06/22/10 11:38 am Title: Surprise
love it!!! finally some love from Tom to Simone!
Author's Response: Ack, sorry for this late response! Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying...there will be more love...eventually. ;)
Date: 06/21/10 10:16 pm Title: Parting Ways
Poor Tom. I understand how he must feel when it seems like everyone is leaving. And poor Bill, being worried and saddened by Tom being so upset. This was kind of a rough chapter, but it's pretty much a life lesson and better learned than not.
Author's Response: It's rough on him, and he doesn't work through his feelings as honestly and openly as Bill. ;_; For poor Tom, I think it will teach him not to let people in close for fear of losing them. Thank you, I always love to hear your thoughts!
Date: 06/21/10 09:39 pm Title: Parting Ways
Marcus ;_____; I are sad now. I wish I could give Tom a good snuggle for his sadness.
Author's Response: I know, Marcus is gone for good. ;_; Tom is temporarily certain that all the snuggles in the world will not fix this.
Date: 06/21/10 09:33 pm Title: Parting Ways
Awwww, poor Tomi, it's so hard for him. Harder than for Bill, since Bill is more expressive with his feelings, while Tom keeps it all bottled up. I'm sure it won't be pretty if/when it explodes. Love that the dreads will make an appearance as a lovely homage to Tom's idol and that he's not willing to accept a no where that's concerned.
I adore this story. Love this world you've created and I love seeing them grow up and discover who they are, even if they won't be the same any longer.
Author's Response: It is hard for him! For exactly those reasons, and when those things blow, they tend to blow HARD. And yes, the dreadlocks are on their way!
Thank you so much. ♥ I'm really happy you're enjoying their growing-up process. It makes their unfolding story that much more fun to me, seeing it through your eyes!