Date: 07/05/10 11:45 pm Title: Sabotage
Oh now that was just mean. Bless Bill for keeping it together, though. I'd have been out of bitch blood. :/ And aw, Tom. Solidarity wins. :)
Author's Response: I know, it was really evil of them. Bill, I think, is such a sweetheart he learned to be a pacifist very early, you know? And he already senses that escalation isn't the best route. Tom would do anything for his brother, up to and including humiliation! Thank you~ ♥
Date: 07/05/10 10:23 pm Title: Sabotage
*smothers story in love*
Author's Response: *story - and kits! - loves you right back*
Date: 07/05/10 10:07 pm Title: Sabotage
Bah! I missed last chapter. But that just means that I got two in one! Losing interest in the kits? Blasphemy! No way man, the kits are love. :D
Author's Response: Aw, sorry you missed it! Next one is up! :D I've got to start writing them faster, then, so I can get deeply into their story again. I don't want anything to feel like filler! Thank you, I'm really happy you're still enjoying!
Date: 07/05/10 09:33 pm Title: Sabotage
OMG. Those girls are a bunch of little bitches. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: They are an evil little clique. Thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying!
Date: 07/05/10 08:47 pm Title: Sabotage
Awww, my poor kits. *cuddles them* Bill shows a maturity beyond his years in his actions and words, and he's right the other kids can't take their most important things. :D
I adore this fic, even if my heart broke a little bit with all the twins have to endure at school. I'll be looking forward to more. :)
Author's Response: I know, and they're so sweet. Bill is the little diplomat! Thank you...and really I hate to say it's only just begun. =_= Thanks for your review, and loving this story!
Date: 07/05/10 08:40 pm Title: Sabotage
Aw, that hurt my heart. Poor bbs. And hopefully Gordon notices what I'm thinking he notices and plays the good guy? Eh?
Author's Response: I know, but they're going to rise above it, the sweethearts! And Gordon is a very perceptive man. ;) Thanks for your review!
Date: 07/05/10 07:44 pm Title: Sabotage
And people wonder why kids go to school armed with weapons.
Author's Response: If only they could be as sweet and forgiving as Bill, we'd never have to worry about escalation. :/ Thanks for your review!
Date: 07/05/10 07:43 pm Title: Surprise
I'm glad I didn't come across as offensive :) It always worries me when I actually sit down and critique that I'll come across as a bitch :(
But I very much love the story, so whatever you decide to do I'm sure will work ^__^
Author's Response: Not at all! I was asking for feedback, I'm definitely open to hearing peoples' opinions on the story and you were very nice about it. :) And I am very glad you're still loving the story.
Date: 07/05/10 07:43 pm Title: Sabotage
Awww! Tom is so sweet, I didn't expect any less from him!
Kids can be so mean, I feel very sad for Bill, but he's right, they can't take the most important thing from them, that's what matter the most :)
Author's Response: Tom is the best big brother. ;) I know, kids can be very cruel! But Bill has a firm grasp of his priorities. Thanks for reading, I appreciate your review!
Date: 07/05/10 07:38 pm Title: Sabotage
how sad for Bill!!! I love ill's attitude though. its what everyone tries to tell themselves but few live it as well as he does.
Author's Response: Bill is a sweetheart, through and through. I think he learned early to be a diplomat, and to be the better person. ♥ Thank you for your review!
Date: 07/05/10 12:52 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I really like this story! And though it does seem to be taking a long time, I like that aspect of it :)
Just keep doing what you're doing! You're good at it!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm pleased to hear it! And glad that you like the gradual pace. :)
I will~! I'll try to pick up the update pace though.
Date: 07/01/10 02:00 am Title: Reinforcing the Bond
Dont change a thing the kits are perfect =)
Author's Response: Thank you, I appreciate it! :D
Date: 06/30/10 08:39 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I'm still reading this and loving it but I don't know what makes it (or not) for the others. I love how they are, how they worry that the other will change and not want them anymore. It's so cute!
And they learn everything together and, and... I don't know I just like it the way it is, no more and no less anything
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad to hear it! Kits are kits, bein' cute. ;)
That's really good to hear, I appreciate it.
Date: 06/30/10 12:29 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I would prefer more frequent updates, personally. But I definitely haven't lost interest in the kits. I really enjoy reading the updates and reading them are the high points of my weeks.
Author's Response: Good to hear, I'll work on that! Very pleased you're still interested in the kits. Thank you very much!
Date: 06/29/10 10:16 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I think it's perfect the way it is! I'm still enjoying every update. My reviewing has gotten rather spotty, though. :( Sorry about that, life's been tearing me away so it takes two or three sessions just to read a single update. Worth it all the way, though!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so! :D And pleased to hear you're enjoying each update. Sorry about life tearing you away, that's always more important.
Date: 06/29/10 01:56 pm Title: Reinforcing the Bond
More Drama and maybe not so much filler stuff. That would keep interest, make the years shorter and get the kits old enough to stand up to Simone in one go. Cause I know I love reading kinda fast paced stories that have some chapters that end in cliff hangers.
Author's Response: Augh, I do know what you're talking about and the next year will be much shorter. I don't want anything to come across as filler and if it does, it's something I ought to skip. Thank you for letting me know!
Date: 06/29/10 05:44 am Title: Reinforcing the Bond
Um, more updates are always good, more drama is good, more fluff is good too, lol. Don't skip their cute underagey stuff though. thanks for the update!!
Author's Response: More updates, acknowledged! I won't skip out on anything. :D Thanks for your review!
Date: 06/29/10 04:31 am Title: Reinforcing the Bond
I'll get it straight: I love it the way it is, don't change anything :) honestly, skipping to when they're older or just... modifying the dynamic you've built up since the first year would just, in my opinion, denaturalize the kits and the story as a whole. We go together is a coherent whole, and that is one of the best quality a fiction could have!
Okay, I'm not saying I'm not looonging to know what will happen to them by the end of your story, but taking baby steps in their lives as a reader seems natural for their evolution in life and regarding each other is made naturally of baby steps. Do I make sense? :D
All in all, I'm sorry if I don't review much, but know that your story is still much appreciated :)
ps. you've said on your Formspring recently that "I'm not getting paid for this gig, so I pretty much think I can do whatever makes me happy. And if I'm not enjoying it, I'll stop." and that's pretty much the idea! Do what you feel is right for the kits! ;) love
Author's Response: Aw, I'm glad you think so, and pleased it's coming across as a coherent whole! Definitely we're seeing the evolution of everything that makes them what they are, now and in the future. I do appreciate your reviews and you letting me know what you think!
I will keep doing what I feel is right for the kits. And I think right now, I need to give them MORE attention. :D Thank you!
Date: 06/29/10 04:17 am Title: Reinforcing the Bond
How could people lose interest? The story is just as sweet and charming as always. (Of course, I wouldn't complain about more frequent updates!)
Author's Response: Well, possibly with me not updating sooner. ;) Thank you, I'm really pleased you're still following!
Date: 06/29/10 03:07 am Title: Reinforcing the Bond
Cleanup is important! *firm nod* xD
Author's Response: You got it, dude! :D And they're so meticulous otherwise, they'd definitely be careful about this.