Date: 04/12/12 08:14 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a really good story!
u should make a sequel to this!!
Date: 02/29/12 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
i want more from that!could be the perfect story.that they wander around the same places the one always thinking he saw the other but never made to reach him until the fall to each other and they get to be together,as destiny wants T_T
Date: 11/09/10 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
pleeeaassee tell me there's a sequel @~@
Date: 06/03/10 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVED this, is there a sequel? of so please post it :) wanna know more!!! ^^
Date: 05/11/10 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
DUDE!!!! Oh my god that was so freaking sad/ intense. UGH I can't believe Bill left! T-T
Date: 05/11/10 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hi! I think this has a great start, but a little constructive criticism for you - there are some issues with puntuation and grammar. There are a lot of run-on sentences, and what seems like a complete lack of contractions. People think and speak with contractions, without them it feels a little stiff. Maybe have a friend or a beta reader take a look at it? It's great, it just needs a little polishing up!
Date: 05/05/10 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
TT_TT
i loved i so so sad but gr8t xx
Date: 05/04/10 11:49 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm Sorry for saying this , but you MUST write a sequel T.T.... btw Now i'm crying buuuuuuu
Author's Response: I have a secret for you I have a sequel for this story. So if you want me to put it up then I will.. its in chapters though.
Date: 05/04/10 05:03 am Title: Chapter 1
awww it was so fucking cute and so damn hot at the same time!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. Liked writing this a lot.
Date: 05/03/10 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was heartbreakingly good! Bottom Tom is always awesome! I think there should be another part when they meet again.
Anyway excellent job! :)
Author's Response: There is a sequel to this. I will put it on here its in chapters though.