Date: 05/08/10 12:45 pm Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
i just love this story so much :) *dreamy sigh*
Date: 05/08/10 11:09 am Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
More more jaja? ^-^
Date: 05/08/10 10:57 am Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
I liked this chapter...and I'm glad you're keeping the last line thing, its cute! I practically jumped at the laptop the second I came back from the baot to check if you'd updated!
Date: 05/08/10 10:50 am Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
This story is so cute, all I can do is flail. ♥
Date: 05/08/10 05:08 am Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
This is so sweet, lol. Very lucky for Bill that he has his guardian angel watching out for him.
Date: 05/08/10 05:00 am Title: Hanging outside Bill's window and other stories
I kind of want to squish them both. You have a really nice, simple style with this that fits the plot really well.
Date: 05/08/10 04:52 am Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
awwww, Tom is perfect in this story~ I hope Bill doesnt think he is creepy..
Date: 05/08/10 04:27 am Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
aaaaawwwwww!!
idk what to say, but post more and great work!!
Date: 05/08/10 01:55 am Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
AWW!!! How sweet was that?! XD
Date: 05/07/10 11:49 pm Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
This is really cute. :D
Date: 05/07/10 11:22 pm Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
Awww...
I adored the interaction between Bill and his mother. Georg was, interesting lul. Tom is a complete sweet heart. < 3 I love him. He's so adorable.
I really like the idea of Bill being depressed, 'tiny', fragile, and very shy in a way. He's sweet. Just beautiful. Tom has a heart of gold in tis. I love his gentle persona and how he's basically Bill's secret admirer. XD When Bill wakes up, since he's drunk, he'll probably he like, "what are you doing here wtf" blah blah. Tomi will get sad. DX
Then again, this Bill isn't capable of hurting someone. Maybe on accident, plus Tom is sensitive.
I wonder if Georg will show up again..
This fic is so lovely, and I picture a light pretty lonely green color when I read it. It's like all the words turn a soft, broken, confused shade of green. Must be the plants... Idk. But it's just wow.
Only three chapters in also. You're doing amazingly. :)
I'm really enjoying it. And I felt like Bill was on the verge of tears with his mother.
< 3
Date: 05/07/10 11:11 pm Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
I cant wait for more
I really like this fanfic
Date: 05/07/10 10:27 pm Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
uii, so cute!!
Date: 05/07/10 09:00 pm Title: Tom carries Bill home and other stories
ohmygoodness! i really, REALLY love this fic, Byrd. ^_^ Tomi to the rescue! bad Georg. *shakes finger* and my favorite part, as always: "“I really… really love you,” He whispered in time to the steady thrumming pulse of Bill’s heart, and the boy stirred in his sleep, a warm smile lighting up his face. He was probably having a good dream, but maybe, the man thought, just maybe he had heard him, and had felt better." aww! *melts* i love it. i can't say that enough. ^_^
Date: 05/06/10 09:12 pm Title: Hanging outside Bill's window and other stories
poor Tom (and bill)
Cant wait for more
Date: 05/05/10 09:58 pm Title: Billy The Palm Tree And Other Stories
CUte :3
Date: 05/05/10 06:35 pm Title: Hanging outside Bill's window and other stories
Haha, I really like this so far. Tom is hilarious ;)
Date: 05/05/10 11:21 am Title: Hanging outside Bill's window and other stories
Kate Moss DOES INDEED look like a hobo next to Billa!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is a plot i haven't seen before so i'm curious, i'm enjoying it. I think this can be a really good story, it's already begun very well. looking forward to more.
Date: 05/05/10 10:25 am Title: Hanging outside Bill's window and other stories
David Jost the mob boss. XD i love it.
"Oh yeah, because that would REALLY convince Bill that Tom wasn’t an escapee from the local mental institution." aww! lol poor Tomi. i love how Tom keeps 'telling' Bill that he loves him, even though Bill can't hear him. it's cute. ^_^
Author's Response: thats how i wanted to end every chapter. but in different ways of course xD
Date: 05/05/10 04:53 am Title: Hanging outside Bill's window and other stories
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww~ so sweet.. i love it!
Author's Response: thanks :)