Date: 08/07/10 11:18 am Title: Chapter 10
I'm just saying this, I love this story a lot. Let Tom keep the baby!!!
Author's Response: haha awe yaye! thanks hun
Date: 08/07/10 10:29 am Title: Chapter 10
i truly think...
this is adorable!!
bills making the effort and thats good! :D
Author's Response: XD woot! thanks for reading!
Date: 08/07/10 07:50 am Title: Chapter 10
those things tom eats seem very gross to me XD but he is a cutie and so is Bill, good boys. I love this chapter.
Author's Response: lol i think thats the general concensus with everyone for the cravings tom has lol
Date: 08/07/10 04:12 am Title: Chapter 10
I love sweet and softening Bill. Absolutely fabulous. keep up the good work.
Author's Response: XD thanks hun sweet and softening bill is good
Date: 08/07/10 01:34 am Title: Chapter 10
Pfffft. Men. :D
Did that for old time's sake. Anyways. I think it's sweet that Bill's tryin to make it all up to Tom....
Author's Response: LOL awe wifey you make me happy lol ja it is sweet bills trying to make it up to tom. he feels like a right wanker!
Date: 08/06/10 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 10
Bill's reactions to the cravings (esp. the ice-cream) was really funny. It's nice to see that Bill thought up this nice gesture.
I'm excited about the months to come :)
Author's Response: lol the cravings were fun to write lol very much gag worthy though lol
Date: 08/06/10 11:30 pm Title: Chapter 10
Bill seem's to be changing, but i'd be surprised if we don't see a bit of the "bitch" in him from time to time. I love Bill's character in the story, and how he is trying to be there for Tom. My favorite line----"What are you doing to me"...
Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: yup! bills slowly changing but you can so bet we shall see the bitch again. its destiny lol
Date: 08/06/10 11:25 pm Title: Chapter 10
God that ice-cream one was nasty! Ugh XD But this is such a cute chapter! I wish I could go to a drive in movie with Bill >.> XD
Author's Response: LOL it is nasty eh? i tried imagining it and almost gagged lol
Date: 08/06/10 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 10
gott at the cravings! DX LOL I loved how they went to the drive-in movies! i've never been in one before! D: I think it's fun like you said *grins* I simply loved Bill's last words! they were so awesome! god, if someone says that to me... *melts* keep it coming!
Author's Response: hahaha i miss going to the drive in movies! theres like no more in quebec from what i know. sucks majorly. yeah the last thing bill says is uberly cute.
Date: 08/06/10 03:23 am Title: Chapter 9
not too fast, just right in my opinion... this is utterly sweet and i crave to see the fluff and maybe more smut between Bill and Tom, Tom needs that love more now than ever and Bill will grow from it into a sweet and loving person and father. just don't do what everyone else does and stir up tons of unnecessary drama and break the boys up? stress could kill the baby and Tom if they have too much, and i think Bill needs Tom in his life. this was so sweet, how do you feel knowing your story made a guy turn into a sniffling pile of useless tears and mush? you rock!
Author's Response: Holy shit! Please tell me you're joking! You seriously turned into a pile of tears and mush? That just seriously made my day hun! Like you wouldn't believe. I have a crappy job interview this afternoon and wasn't in the best of moods but now thanks to you're re view I'm all happy now! Thank you so much! And you have nothing to worry about really. I do not plan on breaking them up at all. This story is aimed to be pure fluff with bits of drama and smut here and there. But nothing unneccessary like breaking them up. Once they're together, they're together. I already made Tom's life hell to start with. It's time to be loving towards poor Tom now. But really my dear you made my day with this review! <3 P.S not to toot my own horn but I kinda do rock eh? ;) lol
Date: 07/31/10 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 9
Aw...sweetness! Loved it.
Author's Response: thank you! XD
Date: 07/31/10 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
awwwwww!!
even though bill was a dick, it was a nice thing to apologize (: hehe cute belly moment (:
Author's Response: awe thanks hun XD
Date: 07/31/10 04:04 pm Title: Prologue
Well you also mentioned it had been about a weeks time and it doesn't take long for people to accept a fact if they will. My proof my best friend and his kids XD Welcome :3
Author's Response: XD
Date: 07/31/10 07:17 am Title: Chapter 9
Ok yes a bit to fast and a bit unspectacular. I thought it would contain more drama.
But that was so sweet that I can accept it. Now I´m curious whats comming next. I hope thats as sweet as this.
Author's Response: least you were honest with me hun. im happy you like how it turned out even though it was abit fast.
Date: 07/31/10 06:39 am Title: Chapter 9
Bill stop having those horrible dreams please? XD
buttt I love how Bill finally comes around and is such a good daddy now, go Bill. And Tom is such a cutie. Tompreg and Tombot is just amazing ha
Author's Response: haha i dont think he has anymore dreams like this but i cant remember lol yeah botTom is amazing. its pure love!
Date: 07/31/10 06:08 am Title: Chapter 9
i don't think this was too soon at all. there was a lot of build up to this moment, fist you would have thought that when Bill found out about Tom he'd have imediately regretted treating him so badly, but i was surprised by how cruel Bill was in that bathroom scene. Then i thought, well if he's going all out of his way just to get to Tom's house, there must be some kind of resolution coming...poor Tom when there wasn't. i've been waiting on bated breath for this moment, and i honestly think it was the perfect time for Bill to come to his senses. Not to mention his reasoning was very realistic. What is going on with Tom is a hard thing to comprehend, so it makes sense that Bill would need time to accept something so rediculous, let alone step up to the fact that he is partially responsible for what happened. I really love this story and where it's going, though i have to say i am frantically worried right now, because i am hopeing beyond hope that Bill's dream was not some kind of premonition. I really want to see everything work out for the three of them, Bill Tom and the baby. Especially for Tom's sake. He's already been through so much, then on top of that everything that has happened recently between himself and Bill, and all that is to come throughout the duration of his pregnancy...it would be just too much to handle if any of them were hurt in the end. This is such a great story. I so can't wait for the next update. and hey, if you feel the need to post early again...i dont think you'll find any of your readers complaining ;D
Author's Response: oh my god. hun you just made my day! your review meant so much to me! I don't even know what to say besides thank you. but to calm your worries bill doesnt get premonitions. the baby will not be stillborn. that much i can assure you!
Date: 07/31/10 05:27 am Title: Chapter 9
love it!!! update soon
Author's Response: XD thanks for reading! update is every friday
Date: 07/31/10 03:33 am Title: Chapter 9
It wasn't too fast. That terrible dream spooked Bill into doing the right thing. Good good.
Author's Response: XD yaye! *dances*
Date: 07/31/10 01:49 am Title: Chapter 9
I just started reading from the first and couldn't stop-I love it and i'm dying to see what happen's in the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: *flutter claps* awe yaye! you read the whole thing in one go? :O wow
Date: 07/31/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 9
it was fast, but i imagine there will still be bumps along the way. scary dream! well, by the end anyway. thanks for the update, keep up the good work.
Author's Response: XD thanks hun