Date: 09/29/24 11:49 pm Title: Hate
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 09/25/12 12:29 pm Title: Hate
amg *melts* I loved it darlin, bittersweet!
Date: 09/25/11 11:08 pm Title: Hate
Sweetie, that was really bittersweet. I worried about Bill and was so glad that Tom straightened out and did the right thing. I thoroughly enjoyed this. :)
Date: 10/13/10 08:42 pm Title: Hate
Heartbreaking... with a lovely ending.
Date: 06/25/10 03:33 pm Title: Hate
why don't you have more reviews on this story?
I understand that some parts may not reach out to some people but I think it reached out to the majority :)
I love the way that you wrote this, the way that you described Bill's pain and all of that emotion... Just Beautiful :)
Date: 05/03/10 10:03 pm Title: Hate
Awwww. x3 That was lovely! Please write more twincest. Your style is so much fun to read.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked it! And I will try to write more twincest. I'm hoping to improve:D
Date: 05/03/10 07:17 pm Title: Hate
It broke my heart when Bill was acting depressed, and crying.. the description of his weakness was so emotional, beautiful and deep. I loved it. You did wonderfully.
The very end with the kiss was slightly cheesy, but nevertheless it was wonderful.
Poor Bill. :
That was lovely. You should attempt more twc, this was magnificent. :D
Author's Response: Sorry for the cheesiness:p But I'm glad you liked it! It really cheers me up when I read comments saying they like my post:)
Date: 05/03/10 05:27 pm Title: Hate
Oh boy... the melodrama was killing me, and not in a good way. Coupled with the strange word choices and repetitiveness, and the cliches. I'm really sorry hun, but this one didn't do it for me. I like the idea of the love-hate thing, but I think this story needs another proof-reading.. and a reality check: the mopey emo Bill and vengeful stutty Tom were too one-dimensional to be real people. Again, I'm sorry, but I'm not a fan of this one. Keep writing. Don't be upset by my review please. :(
Author's Response: Thanks for the honesty. Some people just tend to say that they like something even if they truly hated it. Thanks so much for pointing out the things I needed to work on. I really appreciate it:)
Date: 05/03/10 04:18 pm Title: Hate
that was a lot of pain on both of their parts and i don't feel like it should have been solved so quickly. it was a great story line but the ending was weak. they needed more than just an apology and a kiss, it didn't feel like enough.
Author's Response: thanks for the criticism. i should really work on my endings:p
Date: 05/03/10 11:50 am Title: Hate
Awww, that was great!
Author's Response: thanks:D
Date: 05/03/10 10:42 am Title: Hate
aww, i liked the ending :)
Author's Response: thanks so much:) i'm glad you liked it.