Date: 05/03/10 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, that's one of the hottest masturbation scenes I've ever read. And I think the ending was perfect! It gave us enough of a hint about what's going to happen, but not too much. Of course, should you feel that this requires a sequel describing what happened after Tomclosed the door, I'm perfectly okay with that. xD
Author's Response: Goodness, thank you! And I'm so glad you liked the ending. Maybe we'll see more yet. >.> Thank you, love. :D
Date: 05/03/10 05:38 am Title: Chapter 1
uuuuggh. u have to write a sequel. it cant end like this. bill gotta have tom u know. :P awesome though. love it...
Author's Response: Hmm, I won't say I won't. xD I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you! :D
Date: 05/03/10 05:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, far, far too vague. I haven't the foggiest idea what they could be going to do, have you? ;)
No, lol, I'm kidding. This was so, so good, such a perfect little fic to start my day with. It was steamy and hot and mmmm, the image you created of Tom all sweaty and half naked? Nghhhhh yesplease. xD
Author's Response: LOL Shush, woman! Someone told me I should have made the end more clear, you know. ._.
Man, the visuals as I was writing this nearly killed me, so I'm glad they worked for you. ♥
Date: 05/03/10 04:38 am Title: Chapter 1
No the ending was not too vague! The description of Tom's eyes made it clear that he liked what he saw.
We all know they're going to have hot shower sex now. I mean we'll have to imagine it, but...yeah.
Author's Response: Mhm, I was hoping so. And how did imagining that shower sex go for you? xD Thanks for reading!
Date: 05/03/10 04:22 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG.
WOW.
That was incredibly sexy. Esp that Tom caught him. And the descriptions, the images you create with your words are amazing. You're a very talented writer.
I'm hoping that there will be a 2nd part to this. Perhaps with some angst at the beginning... here's what I'm imagining: Bill gets up a bit confused and follows Tom asking why Tom didnt have any reaction, so Tom explodes at him, angry, and says stuff like "What am i supposed to feel, Bill? You're fucking yourself thinking of me!" (in the context that it's 'wrong') then gets a bit aggressive and corners Bill, and Bill's like breathless and so horny, and they're in eachother's faces and before Bill knows what he's doing he's kissing Tom, and Tom's wound up from yelling, and well.. the rest is very sexy angry sex. Gosh, I'm sorry, but it would be so hot if you could write that sequal.. u just had my brain going.
I loved this story. Short, well written, and very sexy. Very well done. :)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! You know, maybe it would go something like that! And I never say never. Anyway, I'm so glad you liked it and thank you again. :D
Date: 05/03/10 03:41 am Title: Chapter 1
i think it couldve had more to it, maybe Tom couldve asked him to join him in the shower, or palmed him own erection. i dunno, it seemed a little vague but still good.
Author's Response: Yep, my beta said that Tom could have asked him if he was coming into the shower with him, but I did kind of like the reader being able to take it where they wanted at the end. I'm happy you liked it anyway. Thank you! :)
Date: 05/03/10 03:39 am Title: Chapter 1
SO HOTTTTT!!!!! I wanted to whimper along w/ Bill when I read your delicious desription of Tom's toned sweaty body. I demand that you write a sequel where Bill can't take it anymore and jump his bones. I so love me a horny lustful younger twin. Also, did your husband read this story and gave it a thumbs up? Your husband sounds awesome! :D:D:D
Author's Response: Hm, I'm thinking about a sequel. We'll see! :D
And oh yes, my husband reads everything I write. He's a few chapters behind on "Janni" but otherwise, yep, he reads it all. And truthfully, if he doesn't like it, I don't post it. He is very awesome! (I'm gonna tell him about this and he's going to blush like mad. lol!)
Date: 05/03/10 03:23 am Title: Chapter 1
They better make room in that shower for me cause dammit woman I need one now!!!
Author's Response: LOL! You're welcome? xD I'm glad you liked it, honey. Thank you! ♥
Date: 05/03/10 03:11 am Title: Chapter 1
My flatmate came in while I was reading this and there was a mad scramble to minimize the window hahah. Loved it. Voyeurism is just so saucy.
Author's Response: LOL! I love that. I'm pretty thrilled you enjoyed it. Thank you! :D
Date: 05/03/10 02:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Just... my jaw dropped. Man, you captured THAT moment just perfectly. Wow. *fans self*
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! That is very high praise, coming from you, Sophia. :D
Date: 05/03/10 01:44 am Title: Chapter 1
I so wanna see twin smut in the next one. I can only imagine... omg woman. ♥
Author's Response: Hm, there should be a next one? Maybe shower!sex? Just maybe. ;) ♥
Date: 05/03/10 01:37 am Title: Chapter 1
ahahahahahahahahahah what an "ohSHIT" moment....
Author's Response: I'm sure the look on Bill's face had to be priceless. xD
Date: 05/03/10 01:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I think the ending is just vague enough to let the reader's imagination fill in the blanks. ;) Guh, the description of the water running down Tom's neck and chest was enough to make me whimper, so I can't blame Bill. Also, this line: He’d lift Bill’s legs up to his chest, lube him up nice and slick and take him. Gorgeous. I repeat, guh!
Author's Response: Wonderful! Bill had done all the imagining for us but I really wanted to reader to take it further in his/her own mind.
I'm tickled you enjoyed the descriptions; picturing Tom like that makes me whimper, too! Thank you, Kish. :D