Date: 02/03/15 01:51 am Title: Truth or Dare
this story made me smile :) so i hope this review makes you smile
Date: 11/25/10 10:44 pm Title: Truth or Dare
Did this review make you smile? xD
Date: 05/03/10 04:24 pm Title: Truth or Dare
pure kink but amazing kink.
Date: 05/03/10 08:36 am Title: Truth or Dare
You really need to change your user name. People aren't going to appreciate your own talent if they think you are someone else. Instead, they will be upset and not read your fics at all.
Author's Response: well this is the only one from tokiobaby that i am posting now. That is why I put the notice because it was me. I changed it because I wanted to, sorry for the misunderstanding =[
Date: 05/03/10 03:58 am Title: Truth or Dare
Hmm, truth or dare is always a great beginning for twincest, but this was too rushed. I wish you'd mentioned some form of alcohol, and OMG Bill needs lube to shove a big dildo in! Poor Bill. A few more words/dialogue before the sex scene could have made it more realistic also. I guess that was the main problem with this fic, that the fast pace meant it wasnt very realistic. However, I thought it was pretty well written, and I liked the idea, and it was pretty sexy too. I just wish you could have drawn this story out a lot more, and included a few feelings/emotions, cuz there only seemed to be actions here. (ppl have feelings) This has great potential tho, well done.