Date: 05/13/10 07:15 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh, Tom, you dummy! :3
Bill`ll straighten you out, lol
I really like how Tom sees The Phantom and himself as different people. It`s a good aspect- but not one anyone is really going to understand lol
If it`s not too much to simply suggest- you don`t have to go through with this if you don`t want to, and I will completely understand..... but can Bill be on top? Please, please, please, please? *puppydog face* I`ll do ANYTHING for a botTOM. :)
Author's Response: BAHA :) you'll just have to wait and see!
Date: 05/12/10 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
that car is fucking sex on wheels i swear!! it is too sexy to not be driven by Tom.
Tom sounded extra sexy in this chapter too, i can't even breathe right now
the end of this chapter was too fucking hot! Bill/Tom is too good in this story
amazing chapter
Date: 05/12/10 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 5
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KILLING. ME.
Date: 05/10/10 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 4
that damn Becca needs to go now. she's ruining the Tom/Bill
oooooh Officer Kaulitz...HELLO! i can totally see this and Tom as a lawyer...that's sexy
i hope Tom decides to go with Bill to the site, just because
can't wait to read more
Author's Response: ohh just you wait...Becca will be gone before you know it :)
Date: 05/10/10 09:33 am Title: Chapter 4
ooooh..... i'm getting chiiillllllllllllssssssssssssss
Date: 05/10/10 07:32 am Title: Chapter 4
*giggles* Oh, this is fabulous. Amazing, and THE PHANTOM? Awesome XD
I love Tom as an arsonist, and I love Bill even more as a sexy police-officer :D Mind you, that wasn`t all I liked, lol
The plot`s good too, and the idea`s a fun one, yeah? I love the nervousness that Tom`s feeling when Bill shows him the newspaper article, and even though he knows it`s a lot more dangerous, he`s probably not gonna stop.
Anyway.... yeah. Keep being epic :)
Author's Response: your review pretty much made my day :)
Date: 05/09/10 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
wooh... niiiice, can't wait to see how this ends up going!
Date: 05/06/10 01:58 am Title: Chapter 3
gotta say I like that he does it when noone's there to get hurt in it. nice touch.
Date: 05/05/10 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
i love it! this is soooooo good!
the way you described Tom is amazing.
i can't wait to read more
Date: 05/05/10 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
lol. 1) the phantom - i always write phan-TOM-rider, just like that. 2) clear and present anger was not a bad pun. a bit cheesy but not actually bad.
3) i like this story. i love Officer Bill's drunk antics and I love Tom in anything. small note - pastel purple? that would actually be lavender?
Author's Response: very true, that would indeed be lavender :P thanks for the constructive criticism! :)
Date: 05/03/10 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Drunk Bill is love. x333
I liked that.
This idea is interesting and amusing. I'd love to read on.
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Date: 05/03/10 05:06 am Title: Chapter 1
ooh sounds interesting.. :D I can't wait for more :D
Date: 05/03/10 01:52 am Title: Chapter 1
more more more bitte