Date: 07/09/10 02:21 pm Title: Guardian Angels
this story makes me so happy and sad.
Date: 07/09/10 01:33 pm Title: Guardian Angels
*dies more inside* BILLLLLL *pouts*
Date: 07/09/10 12:33 pm Title: Every Second Counts
i agree that adam is calling for bill in the music.....
Date: 07/09/10 11:47 am Title: When In Love
DIES omg... fucking amazing.... mmmm i need happy alone time now... thanks
Date: 07/09/10 10:55 am Title: Guardian Angels
Wow, another absolutely beautiful chapter. Have you ever written original fic? Because your writing is so beautiful, and better than most things out there that are published.
I liked the addition of Bushido and Kay as Bill's friends. He's going to need all the help he can get. I'm so glad Adam is on his way--what torture though to be on a plane unable to get updates for 9 hours!! I do hope Bill wakes up for Tom though. I love Adam, and want Bill to be with Adam, but feel like he should wake up for Tom because of their bond.
Big huge WHEW!! That you think him dying in the sequel would suck. =) Thank you so much for the speedy updates. I check my comp last thing before bed, first thing when I get up, first thing when I get home at night...I love this story!!!
Author's Response: I'm the same way with reviews XD I both look forward to and hate when I have to be away from the computer for a few hours or days- always worth it when I come home and my inbox has exploded! And I used to write originals, my history has gone anime fanfics/originals/and now TH fanfics only- but they were never as good as my writing is now. Not to toot my own horn or anything, but my writing impresses even ME now.
Date: 07/09/10 10:41 am Title: Guardian Angels
no...you are the best--though you make me cry. theres just so much feeling it's overwhelming, during the highs and the lows. you're gifted. and now to bill, please, please pull through. adam will be there soon, wake up for him, babe.
Date: 07/09/10 10:20 am Title: Guardian Angels
Did I ever mention I am completely in love with this story? It's very sad, but I'm still amazed how well you have written it.
I hope Bill will be alright soon and that Adam will be there when he wakes up. It would be so beautiful. :)
This was the first and also the best Bill/Adam I have ever read. I love it! :3
Date: 07/09/10 06:06 am Title: Breaking Point
great update
thank you,love
Date: 07/09/10 05:36 am Title: Breaking Point
........You're my favorite writer ever on here. Because you don't take a month to update. Because when people take months to update, I lose interest in their story.
Date: 07/09/10 02:39 am Title: Breaking Point
this story makes me flail in excitement.
Date: 07/08/10 07:50 pm Title: Breaking Point
NOOO. Woman, with the cliffhangers!
The whole atmosphere and scene set at the hospital is really, really well done.
Date: 07/08/10 07:37 pm Title: For A Good Cause
If the hint is a sequel, I'm super excited!!! Your hint about different warnings scares me though. I can't handle Bill surviving this fic only to die in the sequel. Please tell me I'm off base.
Author's Response: To die in the sequel? THAT WOULD SUCK :O I always write relatively positive endings, even if they aren't always 'happy'. What I have for the sequel so far seems to have the same warnings and themes this story does- but even I don't know if those will change until the time comes =/
Date: 07/08/10 06:25 pm Title: Breaking Point
I hope I can hold it together until the end. This is way too heavy. It all started out so happily. *shakes head*
Date: 07/08/10 05:00 pm Title: Breaking Point
I think I need to start checking this site everyday based on how quickly you update. My goodness.
Tom’s reaction to Bill’s cocaine use, the disbelief and then the sheer terror as the situation hit him was believable and heart wrenching. I felt for him, even though this is a work of fiction. His nervous breakdown seemed to be a long time (well, a chapter or two) coming. Tom and Bill are twins, and since that is a large part of this story when one twin is hurt, sick, etc… the other is going to be severely affected. That part played out well – Tom’s reactions and feelings.
I am so glad that you had Bushido included in this chapter! His concern over Bill, and the way he worked with Georg to get Bill’s phone all the way back at the venue really showed how much he cares for the singer. Bushido is definitely and interesting character, I like that you’ve let him have a cameo in this! His helping Georg to find Bill’s phone, even when he wasn’t exactly sure why, was (dare I say it) sweet of him. He’s just a big softie underneath the gangster attitude. I personally liked his reaction to Bill being with Adam – a moment of surprise, and then acceptance.
Adam, again, is the perfect boyfriend, and is almost as distraught as Tom in this. I say almost because I don’t think that it’s possible for anyone, even the twin’s mother, to feel like Tom does. But the way you juxtaposed Adam’s character is great. It he situation seem even more dire.
I can’t wait to see what happens with Bill. I don’t imagine that you’ll let him die, that would make the story just end and I don’t think that’s going to happen. Bill and Adam living “Happily ever after” would be nice. ;)
Apsenniel
Author's Response: My endings are generally positive. Maybe not always happy, but so far they have ended on a positive note, and SINCE THERE IS A SEQUEL...well at least we all (including myself) know he won't die in this story. Your long reviews make me smile so wide, you don't even know. ::love::
Date: 07/08/10 04:13 pm Title: Split Seconds
pain in the arm= HEART ATTACK. i think Bill can no more hide his secret now.
Date: 07/08/10 02:35 pm Title: Breaking Point
Thank you for the update! I really don't want Adam to get his heart broken again, and I really want Bill to pull through! I just really, really hope there's a happy ending!
You're writing is so well done, I still feel completely entranced when reading this.
Date: 07/08/10 12:17 pm Title: Breaking Point
*cant.effing.breath*
Gah, I've only been reading this a few days but I'm SO addicted!
Date: 07/08/10 12:03 pm Title: Breaking Point
Even I wasn't breathing! Please please please please please update soon---i'm dying here, gotta know Adam is gonna get there soon and what Bill's prognosis is now after this episode!!!
Date: 07/08/10 11:59 am Title: Breaking Point
I almost cried...but the happy song i am listening to prevented it...
Don't Die Bill!!
Date: 07/08/10 10:28 am Title: Breaking Point
ohmygod. ohmygod. ohmygod.