Date: 07/18/10 01:11 pm Title: car trouble
hey, i just started reading this story and i just wanna say that I love it so much.. its brilliant and im really loving your characters.
your writing style has kept me hooked and im really looking forward 2 more X
Date: 07/18/10 02:31 am Title: clean-up on aisle three
Loving loving it! But omg! Tom is such a bitch XD
Date: 07/18/10 01:35 am Title: clean-up on aisle three
Ooooh i totally sense a love triangle...yay! xD ahaha keep up the good work.
Date: 07/18/10 01:08 am Title: clean-up on aisle three
More more more plz!!! Love it!!! Tom is a douche lol!!!! =p
Date: 07/17/10 11:02 pm Title: clean-up on aisle three
Tom is a mean Jacknut! in this story I can't help love it more more and Anna is the best I just love her ugh!
keep up the great writing update soon :D
Date: 07/17/10 10:54 pm Title: clean-up on aisle three
wow tom is a bitch great story btw
Date: 07/17/10 09:09 pm Title: clean-up on aisle three
ugh, I hate Tom in this story, he's so...disgusting and spoiled !
but I also love this story and can't stop reading. :)
Hope you can update soon.
Date: 07/17/10 09:08 pm Title: clean-up on aisle three
Oh my god, fantastic! Your writing is ridiculously addictive, and I'm loving Anna the more I read. She's believable and so real and raw and it's amazing how I can read about her and connect to her.
The sexual energy between her and tom is there, boy oh boy did you create an electrical spark. He's such a dick though, but he's still charming and.. wow, you've created an AMAZING story my friend.
i'm so excited to see what happens now that nate is in the picture! i wonder if some jealousy will spew? Ahhhh! Update soon!
Date: 07/17/10 06:43 pm Title: clean-up on aisle three
This is soooo good!!! oNe of my favorites!!
Can't wait for the update!!
Date: 07/17/10 05:09 pm Title: clean-up on aisle three
Ohhhh, boy. I can only guess what's going to happen in chapters to come now that Anna's met a guy, lol. I can just see Tom purposely ruining things.
And boy, is she in for a shock when she finds out who Tom is, haha!
Date: 07/17/10 03:57 pm Title: clean-up on aisle three
This is so freaking good! Don't ever stop writing, you have a gift!
Date: 07/15/10 04:45 pm Title: breakfast and bedsheets
Why arent you updating? Gahhhhhh I'm dying here lady.. you write tom so well and i check everyday to see an update but alas it's not there :'( please please please, i'm begging now.
Date: 07/11/10 10:52 pm Title: breakfast and bedsheets
ooo this story is sooo good dont stop writing. I wanna know what happens next please post soon :D
Date: 07/11/10 04:11 pm Title: breakfast and bedsheets
Wow haha very heated. I cantnwait for the rest(:
Date: 07/11/10 03:39 pm Title: breakfast and bedsheets
this is by far the most perfect tom/ofc pairing ever! :D more please!
Date: 07/11/10 10:24 am Title: breakfast and bedsheets
wow, I think I'll have killed him by the end of the story xD
go on please, it's sooo good!!!
Date: 07/11/10 02:12 am Title: breakfast and bedsheets
Wow, every chapter manages to get even better. You're honestly an amazing writer with an addicting style -- it's so FUN yet simple to read. Your descriptions anddialogue are well balanced in this chapter, as expected.
Tom and Anna have real chemistry... that's something that's hard to accomplish with two characters. I can tell this is going to be an incredibly popular fic -- because it's a HET fic that's actually LIKABLE and BELIEVABLE.
I love Anna by the way. she's so fucking hilarious; witty and sarcastic, relate-able.. I like how she's not this gorgeous model that Tom falls over.
Tom is such a dick in this story but somehow it's charming. The sexual tension is sloooowly building, and I know some shit is gonna go down eventually. Haha.
Please update soon. This story is gaining momentum AND readers and you NEED to give us more. xoxo
Date: 07/11/10 01:43 am Title: breakfast and bedsheets
Man he is a douche! ... Why the hell am I hoping that shell get together with him?!? Lol update soon! I
Date: 07/11/10 01:43 am Title: breakfast and bedsheets
Man he is a douche! ... Why the hell am I hoping that shell get together with him?!? Lol update soon! I
Date: 07/11/10 01:43 am Title: breakfast and bedsheets
hahahah tom is such an ass :D
i love the whole thing