Date: 08/05/10 05:22 am Title: dirty dishes
I love love love this story, I really enjoy reading it, and the way you present the characters in it is outstanding.
Tom is such a weirdass, he needs to keep his temper in check, but I love his character nonetheless.
I lol'd at the last line :p Awesome entrance for Bill!
Keep the story coming please, I can hardly wait for the new chapter :)
Date: 08/05/10 04:10 am Title: dirty dishes
Wow Tom is a DICK....I really want to read more so please update soon
Date: 08/05/10 04:04 am Title: dirty dishes
this is so good! really, girl, it was fun until now, but when you bring bill too, then the show is complete! please go on, i take all the pleasure in the world reading it!
Date: 08/05/10 12:23 am Title: car trouble
i think i have to review again,you rock, i totally love this story, please i want to know what's next, did tom really hurt her?, or what just happened to her?, this is the best story i ever read!!!!, please update :D
Author's Response: the best you've ever read? wow.. i am.. speechless. haha. that means so much and THANK YOU times a thousand for your awesome review. i will update soon :)
Date: 08/05/10 12:00 am Title: dirty dishes
I think I've said this before, but I'll say it again...I love how you write Tom but he is seriously such an ass! HAHA
Is it time to meet Bill? I sure hope so! Maybe he can make Tom be less ass-like! LOL =]
Author's Response: i love how i write tom, too. i feel like he is an ass, but no worries, there's a soft side that'll come out eventually ;D.
Date: 08/04/10 11:34 pm Title: dirty dishes
(this time i'm revewing from my laptop ;)
Yay! Billas here!
WTH did Tom go? That jerk. hmm if I was in here shoes I would act the exact same way...probably worse.
Tsk Tsk Tommi temper temper.
Update soon!
Author's Response: haha, yeah, i'm trying to keep her as relate-able as possible. i'm glad youre putting yourself in her shoes - i have done my job. :-) i'll update soon, thanks for reading !
Date: 08/04/10 09:42 pm Title: dirty dishes
You must write more I can't get enough of this story
Author's Response: Thank you!!!
Date: 08/04/10 09:37 pm Title: dirty dishes
oooohoohoohoo! bill! hi! lol.
Author's Response: oooohoohoho yes. aha :-) thank you for r & r'ing. ;-)
Date: 08/04/10 08:43 pm Title: dirty dishes
Please update soon...I love this story
Author's Response: i will update soon. i love that you love my story. ha. thanks!
Date: 08/04/10 08:42 pm Title: dirty dishes
I LOVE this story! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: i'll keep up the great work just for you :). thanks for reviewing.
Date: 08/04/10 08:40 pm Title: dirty dishes
omfg its bill!
whats gonna happen??!
did tom actually hurt her?!
thats goin wayyy to far she could even use that to her advantage cuz she could totaly press charges on him!
Author's Response: all of those questions will be addressed in the next chapter... i won't keep ya waiting too long.
Date: 08/04/10 08:26 pm Title: dirty dishes
i guess she finally meet bill, great!!!! is great that you upload sooner!!!, i love how the story goes!!!!
Author's Response: i LOVE your reviews! they make me smile like crazy, it's fans like you that help this update sooner! thank you SO much!
Date: 08/04/10 08:08 pm Title: dirty dishes
Haha, I started to laugh when I read the part where they got into a fight over the dish ! xDD Oooooh, it's Bill ! :D Update soon please ! I love this. (:
Author's Response: haha, thank you! your review made me smile. :-).
Date: 08/04/10 07:07 pm Title: dirty dishes
This is the best story on this website, hands down. I can't believe how unbelievably talented you are. The pacing, as many others have said, is amazing. It's realistic, it's believable, and it builds up the sexual chemistry between them beautifully.
I love how in this chapter Tom attempted to open up about why he flipped out over the nail polish; he tried to give Anna insight. It was like he was trying.. sort of. But then she told him off and he turned into dbag Tom again :) haha.
The dish scene was HILARIOUS, up until he lost his temper. Their little tug of war scene literally made me laugh out loud. Then again, most of their scenes together make me laugh.
I can't wait to see how Bill plays into this. It was brilliant how you incorporated him into it, finally.
But like I said, your pacing is perfect, and I never want this awesome story to end. It's gonna be long though isn't it? since she's only done his chores like five days now or something?
God update soon! I'm gonna lose my mind if I don't know what happens next!!!!
Author's Response: as always, your detailed review has really made my day. i love how you recognized all the little details i worked so hard to put into this story. you've motivated me as a writer to continue this and i thank you so much for your wonderful input.
Date: 08/04/10 06:54 pm Title: dirty dishes
Whyy have I not read this sooner haha? I love this! Enter Bill, yuss.
Author's Response: idunno but i'm glad you found it and like it. ;-)
Date: 08/04/10 06:33 pm Title: dirty dishes
because it's not tom!!! and i understand about being angry, but to shove her and knock her out is completely unacceptable...seriously, i can't wait for the next chapter...
and on a side note, thank you for your response to my last review...it was really sweet...
Author's Response: yes, shoving her is completely out of the question. but no worries, it won't be left alone. i'm glad my response made you happy, your reviews really make me happy too :) thanks again for the wonderful review!!
Date: 08/04/10 05:53 pm Title: dirty dishes
This story is amazing. I love it! Hopefully, you update soon.
Date: 08/04/10 05:47 pm Title: dirty dishes
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh snap Bill has finally entered the story (about time)and Tom oh my lord what was he thinking shoving her like that if you ask me this is a perfect opportunity for Ana to stop working in spite of the contract she signed just cause that asshole injured her (Tom=dummy/asshole) anyway cant wait for the next update
Date: 08/04/10 05:46 pm Title: dirty dishes
god god god god please go onnnn, I'm sitting on fire here!! wtf, he left her there?? o.O
Date: 08/04/10 05:45 pm Title: dirty dishes
Yay!!! You updated woo hoo I love this story it gets better and better everytime I'm speechless right now I so can not wait for more and when Anna meets Bill for the first time! -Eeepp- keep up the great writing and update soon ;D -9 thumbs up!-