Date: 01/06/14 12:54 am Title: first snow
I like the fact that the girl didn't immediately jump in Tom's arms after he said he loved her. You created a character with some self-respect. I think it's awesome that she judged him on his actions even though she had feelings for him.
Date: 12/09/13 03:49 pm Title: car trouble
I just read your entire story for the first time and I got to say it was one of the best stories! I love the dynamics and the characters(although I think Anna made many questionable moves throughout the story). I'm actually sad and surprised with the ending! Interestingly enough, I was actually siding with Anna throughout most of the story, towards the end I'm siding with Tom! I know she's afraid of getting hurt again but Tom seems genuine.
I just want you to know I really enjoyed the entire story and I hope you'll write even more like this (perhaps a het romance involving my favorite Bill!).
Date: 10/16/13 02:00 pm Title: first snow
Okay, so I have to say that I fucking loved this story. The finish isn't the best but just because I love happy endings. And I can't wait to read the sequel! Bye
Date: 09/04/13 12:58 pm Title: car trouble
You can definitely pride yourself with having made me read het, which is a first. I liked the dynamics between Tom and Anna and the way their "relationship" evolved. I also liked Bill as their "middleman", though he came across a bit too girly at times for my taste. I would have preferred him to stay in the role he had when Anna hit her head. Overall, emotions changed a bit drastically from one extreme to the other at time. Maybe less would have been a bit more, but only a bit.
Your style of writing is very good, with just the right amount the detail; and thank you so much for ending the story like that, it was perfect.
Date: 08/26/13 12:12 pm Title: car trouble
Hello :) So I'm actually reading this story over on twfanfiction.com where as you know now it has been slightly adapted to fit The Wanted. I just wanted to come over here and say how much I enjoy your writing and also how glad I am that you are gracious enough to let your work be tweaked and republished that way. I know that you would be well within your rights not to, but since I am a fan of The Wanted and not the band you wrote about I never would have found your great story otherwise. :) Anyway, I'm a fan of your writing and your attitude. I'll continue reading the other version but I'll try to pop over and leave reviews often. Thanks!
Date: 08/05/13 11:51 pm Title: first snow
I dont know if you were aware of this yet, but your story was plagiarized in the one direction site ): she copied word for word but simply just changed the names.
Date: 05/31/13 03:00 am Title: changes
HI :)))))) Im new on this site, and I only joined this site because of this story :) I love it so far!! I was up until 1am last nite reading this on the tokio hotel forum (I hope that this was with your permission like it said it was) but i thought it was amazing!! (btw, just so you know, I tried signing up a couple days ago but it wouldn't let me coz i got the security code wrong like 5 times haha) I love this story omg I would love a sequel!! and Im a het reader just so you know :)))
Date: 05/05/13 04:19 pm Title: bloody sunday
Wow that was unexpected.
Date: 04/23/13 02:20 am Title: first snow
This was so awesome! I haven't read many stories with the Twins *or any of the guys, really.*, but I think this will probably be one of my favorite stories about them *no matter how many of them I read*, simply because of how.. Real, it seemed. Y'know? Unlike others I've read, this one actually makes Sense! Anyway, loved this and I am going to read the sequel! *One of my friends on FB posted a link to this, so that's how I found it. Yay Alien-family? lol.*
Date: 04/19/13 01:59 pm Title: first snow
I know it's been a while since you've written this, but it was reccomended to my by someone. I loved it! I really liked how you developed Anna's carechtet
Date: 04/02/13 04:45 am Title: car trouble
I was just wanting to inform you that your story has been plagiarized. We found it, as the girl who had copied the stories, had taken parts of her banner and her chapter titles from a One Direction fanfiction, and used it for "her" (i.e. your) story on a The Wanted fanfiction site. Here's the link: http://twfanfiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=1321
Date: 04/01/13 10:24 pm Title: beautiful
I cried when Tom told Anna she's beautiful. The scene was so beautiful and touching. :')
Date: 02/05/13 10:26 am Title: first snow
I'm crying like a little bitch. I think I get to giddy when reading.
Date: 02/05/13 09:11 am Title: the collapse
I'm freaking crying.
Date: 02/03/13 07:42 am Title: first snow
Hey there ;)
Well, I know u finished that story long time ago but still I'm so damn fascinated by it. I first read the story on a German Fanfiction page but the author there didn't finish. And - coz I thought it's definitely the best TH-FF EVER - I created an account just to finish your wonderful story. Now, I'm lookin forward to read the sequel, I'll start in a minute. ^_^ I just wanted to make sure that you know how much I adore your story and how gorgeous it is. I couldn't just leave without leaving a comment. :) So, my biggest compliments, I love love LOVE your story, keep writing that amazing stuff! ;**
Greetings from Austria ;**
Date: 01/08/13 04:48 pm Title: first snow
oh my goodness im crying! i loved this story.. i cant wait to read the sequel - they seriously need to get together already . ;)
Date: 12/30/12 10:51 pm Title: changes
Sure! Sequel sounds cool although I might be too late to give my feedback XD
Date: 12/09/12 03:48 am Title: first snow
True to its name: EPIC story c:
Date: 11/28/12 12:36 pm Title: first snow
Oh man i was really caught up in that T^T Why did it have to end
Date: 11/07/12 09:12 am Title: anniversaries and headlines
hehehehehe made my day! i kind of figured this was how she was gonna find out! too bad i have to go to class or i would be reading all day! lol this is fantastic!!