Date: 10/09/10 12:12 am Title: bill
I absolutely love this story. It always has me on the edge of my seat. Please keep writing!
Author's Response: i'm so glad, i work pretty hard to get that sort of response.. i will keep writing, thanks for your lovely review (:
Date: 10/07/10 02:42 am Title: bill
this chapter's worth the wait! hope your study is going well! :D
can't wait for the next update bcs I can't wait to see more of Anna and Tom's interactivity lol hahaha
Author's Response: im happy it was worth the wait. tom and anna definitely are a lot of fun to write. thanks for wishing me luck in my studies!
Date: 10/07/10 02:41 am Title: bill
this chapter's worth the wait! hope your study is going well! :D
can't wait for the next update bcs I can't wait to see more of Anna and Tom's interactivity lol hahaha
Date: 10/06/10 09:29 pm Title: bill
OMG YOU MUST UPDATE I WANNA KNOW MORE DDD:
Date: 10/06/10 09:24 am Title: bill
ahhhhh :D i am literally beaming right now
this made my day
Date: 10/06/10 12:02 am Title: bill
The way you write the interactions between tom and bill are perfect. they're brothers.. it's painfully obvious. and i love how you've made bill the sweeter twin.. which is completely realistic. i love how anna finally has someone on her side -- talk tom down, bill! haha. also.. i love the little subtle shows of concern tom has for anna throughout the chapter. seems he's softening up to her, huh? i'm really interested to see what happens at the club.. and when anna finds out they're much more well known than she knows!! oh my god. also, the last paragraph when tom touched her face.. just barely.. i almost combusted with emotion. you're an amazing writer.
P.S.. WHY IS THIS NOT FEATURED YET?!?!??! COME ON PEOPLE!!!!
Date: 10/05/10 10:52 pm Title: bill
Awesome chapter, can't wait till the next one!
Date: 10/05/10 09:03 pm Title: bill
New chapter ! YAY!
I get so happy when there's a new chapter.
I love this story, is amazing ;D
I'm happr that Bill appeared, he's so sweet.
I hope you can update again soon.
Date: 10/05/10 06:05 pm Title: bill
Wow Bill is pissed off at him. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 10/05/10 09:23 am Title: car trouble
oh I just love it:X i wish you would update sooner..checking for updates is the first thing i do when i turn on the computer.
please keep writing, i love the way you describe her feelings and i can put myself in her place:)
good job!!!
Date: 10/05/10 04:43 am Title: car trouble
Oh, Bill is a sweetheart.
Date: 10/05/10 04:42 am Title: car trouble
YAAAAAY! YOU UPDATED. I'M IN COLLEGE TOO AND I KNOW HOW STRESSFUL IT CAN BE BUT ANYWAY, I UNDERSTAND. GOD BLESS TO YOUR ACADEMICS. AS FOR THIS CHAPTER.. Wow. It's a good start for the Tom-Anna relationship. Gah, my heart.
Date: 10/05/10 01:45 am Title: bill
ohmigod ohmigod ohmigod! I love this chapter! And I'd love it oh so more if you updated again :D
Date: 10/04/10 09:45 pm Title: bill
what is his deal? bill seems alot nicer though...and inviting her to a club, how lucky...and i wonder how bill would take the news of why anna and tom are really 'hanging out'...
Date: 10/04/10 06:45 pm Title: bill
So Tom isn't just an ass to Anna... He's snippy with Bill too... Interesting twist having them all go out to Karma's... I'm looking forward to the next chapter very very much! -clicks to favorites!- Thanks for another great chapter!!
Date: 10/04/10 06:43 pm Title: dirty dishes
Oh fuck... Can she sue him now? Arrest him for assault.. and BILL! YES!
Date: 10/04/10 06:41 pm Title: close encounters
Tender Tom Moment! Score. I wished Anna had socked him... but her telling him off was great. She's feisty and I love that about her! Great job!
Date: 10/04/10 06:39 pm Title: real men wear chanel
I want to punch Tom in the nuts... What a strollop! However, for a brief moment I really liked that soft side to him where he seemed almost hurt that he thought girls used him too... and then he went and bitched out Anna and he scored off the ass meter... lol
Date: 10/04/10 06:35 pm Title: clean-up on aisle three
I really liked that Anna didn't know who he was or anything about the reason he was famous. It was an interesting twist. I liked even more that Tom didn't tell her... Wonder what will happen when she finds out how popular the ass really is! lol
Date: 10/04/10 06:30 pm Title: breakfast and bedsheets
Gross... so gross. I wouldn't touch his sheets either. I love how she doesn't take his shit without a smart ass remark. You have me laughing throughout the chapter! :)