Date: 10/30/10 02:41 pm Title: real men wear chanel
the last line had me in near tears. oh my god tom.. you're so mean.. poor anna, jesus, poor girl. this was gorgeously written though. realistic and tense and oh my god. the tension between them. and tom's icky! screwing a girl on the counter.. dang, boy! hahaha. i love this so much!!
Date: 10/30/10 02:37 pm Title: clean-up on aisle three
this nate guy seems like he could bring some interesting things to the story.. hmmm.. dundundunnnnnnnnnnnn.
i love how he made her do his food shopping, ahha! classic. whatta ass.
Date: 10/30/10 02:17 pm Title: breakfast and bedsheets
seriously, this is hilariously sexy. you managed to write something really hot but really funny and fun to read. this is such a good time,. i never want it to end. i love tom's portrayal in this.. you write him perfectly. he's strangely sexy despite his nastiness. and anna.. god, she's perfect. so real! my favorite line was the chocolate chip line.. and again, your writing flows so well.. this is amazing..
Date: 10/30/10 02:07 pm Title: dinner negotiations
this is getting ridic interesting. not gunna lie. and your writing style is so easy to read but flows so well and.. wow you have real talent. i can't believe he's forcing her into slavery for a month. let the games begin indeed! lol
Date: 10/30/10 02:01 pm Title: morning coffee
DISLIKE PAIGE. so much. but you develop characters really well it seems and i'm pretty impressed right now. i laughed out loud at the little encounter between anna and tom.
“You’re joking,” She laughed. “Did you see his face?”
“Did you see his hair?” I snapped.
favorite line. so natural and wonderful and HILARIOUS. you're a funny, good writer. i'm diggin this.
Date: 10/30/10 01:56 pm Title: car trouble
I'm shocked at the number of reviews so I told myself I'd read it and see for myself. Well chapter one is pretty damn funny. I love how you introduced the female character and THANK YOU for not making her a typical OFC on this site. Very good start! Onto chapter two..
Date: 10/30/10 11:39 am Title: drunken inhibitions
OH MY GOODNESS!!!!! This story is amazing and I really can't wait to read more chapters!! I do love Tom's character, although he's a complete ass! I'm pretty he and Anna will finally reveal their true feelings for each other. It's only a matter of time!!
Date: 10/30/10 11:20 am Title: drunken inhibitions
Oh gosh!!! This story dude!! The story is pure torture and the suspense drives me nuts!!! But in a good way of course. To be honest inwould have kissed Nate to him stop and think as well. Tom... I have no idea about whether I love him, even tho his selfish son of a pig ways make me want to cut him open and sell his organs on the black market! Oooh sorry to harsh? My bad... But this story is what thrives me to my very core, plz again I beg thee for more very much soon. Xoxo
Date: 10/30/10 06:32 am Title: dinner negotiations
wow Tom, slow it down!
Date: 10/30/10 01:48 am Title: drunken inhibitions
How ridiculous that he was like "I don't know you," and now does this! GRR the Tom in this story ticks me off! What could he possibly say next that won't be asshole-ish? He makes me want to punch him! /rant
As for a REAL review... Your story really draws the reader in! I just ranted above all emotionally, and it's cuz of you! Your writing and story affected me that much, and I think that's quite an accomplishment!
I like that you've given Anna some character depth, and that she has values and beliefs that she sticks to. There are a lot of shallow and 2-D ofcs, bless their hearts, but that doesn't cut it for me. You on the other hand have developed these great characters and crazy plot. I am hooked to this like Tom is to strawberry nesquik. Ew... *shudders* Chocolate milk ftw.
Date: 10/30/10 01:38 am Title: real men wear chanel
Tom you lowlife. Seriously? Wow. Poor Anna.
Date: 10/30/10 12:34 am Title: drunken inhibitions
Bloody brilliant!
Korean dramas are always entertaining, but you increased the awesome by adding the Kaulitz twins =D
Date: 10/29/10 07:22 pm Title: drunken inhibitions
This chapter was awesome! I can't wait 'til the next chapter!!
Date: 10/29/10 07:18 pm Title: drunken inhibitions
YAYY! you have a new addicted reader!
And be proud, het usually bugs me, but THIS....-sigh- THIS IS AMAZING DARLING!!!
Keep up the good work(((:
I'm quite addicted.
Love, Alice(:
Date: 10/29/10 06:56 pm Title: drunken inhibitions
NO NO NO NO NO NO NO PLEASE DON'T LET THE CHAPTER END THERE *searches frantically for 'next' button* OMG. I LOVE THIS.
I am strictly a slash girl. Strictly.
I read this het.
I could not be happier.
I LOVE THIS DAMMIT.
Date: 10/29/10 05:57 am Title: drunken inhibitions
Ooh, I love this story!
More. MORE!
I can't wait to see what happens next. (:
*thumbs up*
Date: 10/29/10 05:00 am Title: drunken inhibitions
omg!! CANT WAIT UNTILL THE NEXT!! UR GR8 GIRL!!! :D
Date: 10/29/10 02:12 am Title: drunken inhibitions
Oh! I wanna know what happens!!!! Tom is seriously an ass in this story and I love it! Great update!
Date: 10/28/10 11:43 pm Title: drunken inhibitions
this story is amazing .. iloveit :)
Date: 10/28/10 03:03 pm Title: drunken inhibitions
*squeals* eeeekk! Wow I really really really am in love with this story!!! I'm practically addicted to it. :3 pleeeeeaaaaasee update soon und keep it up! ^-^ :3