Date: 11/07/10 12:04 pm Title: beautiful
This is WHAT i'm TALKING about!! You write with such raw emotion i can't even DESCRIBE what i'm feeling right now!! the transition of tom being his usual nasty self to softening up to try to keep anna to stay and talk was ... god.. itmade me speechless! and bill freaking out over his brother driving drunk without his knowledge was heartbreaking. And then the scene where Bill threw his arms around him and sobbed against him because he was grateful to be alive was... I nearly cried. My heart raced the last scene though. Tom's lips on her FACE... near her MOUTH!! And him calling her BEAUTIFUL? That's what this story should be called! Beautiful. Because you, mam, you write some gorgeous stuff here. No wonder it's featured. Top notch stuff. Some of the best.
To the idiot PANDORA below.. it's completely realistic that bill trusted anna. He was afraid and she was the closest person available to him. Also, she WOULD think tom would drink that much because bill said "you havent had that much in years!" and he happened to drink that much after their arguement ?!?!? GET OVER IT PANDORA. SHE'S A GOOD WRITER AND YOU CAN'T HANDLE IT. YUP.
Idiot. Hah.
Please update soon, heyepic, this is addicting.
Date: 11/07/10 11:55 am Title: beautiful
Wow! This is absolutely fantastic. Sry I didn't comment earlier but I was so into this that I found myself wanting to get to the next chapter asap. I think u've done an excellent job on keeping this realistic & am looking forward to many more chapters =) Can't wait until u post again & congrats on being featured. U deserve it.
Date: 11/07/10 10:50 am Title: beautiful
you have no idea how mouch i adore your story and i can wait for ever just to see them together.
Date: 11/07/10 10:33 am Title: beautiful
nono i def like stories that are more realisitc, its really irritating for me when the author makes them have sex within the first few chapters & i feel like that defeats the purpose of the elemnt of surprise
so keep the pace you're at, cus its perfect! xD
Date: 11/07/10 10:19 am Title: beautiful
Oh wow...Tom did something stupid but now what? Please update soon this story is getting better and better!
Date: 11/07/10 09:59 am Title: beautiful
omg how can someone not love the rate it's going in? Love doesn't happen over night and i definitely enjoy reading the mishaps leading up the whatever is to come
Date: 11/07/10 09:33 am Title: beautiful
I don't think it's very realistic the way bill is so confrotable with anna, it looks like they have been best friends for years, and they just met.
and I know anna is starting to like tom but I think she should be a bit stronger, she actually thinking it was her fault tom drank is just too naive.
I do like the fic a lot, hope it only gets better.
Date: 11/07/10 09:13 am Title: beautiful
I luff it! More soon pleaseeeeeeeee!!!!!!
Date: 11/07/10 08:56 am Title: beautiful
I CAN WAIT!!! I love this story too much to give up, no matter how long it takes. I have a feeling Tom will blame the alcohol for his word vomit. But with the way he treat her why would she give him a second thought. I just hope she puts him in his right place. I love this story with a passion!!!
Date: 11/07/10 08:23 am Title: beautiful
i can wait until something more happens between Tom and Anna. I love drama, and I hate how most of the stories always go too fast when it comes to relationships. I adore this whole story. You're such a good writer b29;
Date: 11/07/10 08:23 am Title: beautiful
Iīm happy u said that, cuz I donīt really like it when the relationship develop too fast. Humans are complicated, and relationship takes time.
And, good work(fantastic work), I really loved the chapter, u really deserved the feature!
Date: 11/07/10 08:09 am Title: beautiful
This is an amazing chapter. So intense and I really love the scene of Tom being jealous, because it means that he actually cares. That he really likes Anna a lot, although it's too early to admit it.
And yeah, I love how Anna acts, that she has dignity. And I really like that Nate guy, hope that he wouldn't disapper and will make Tom annoyed a bit more :-P
I love ur story, hope for update soon.
Date: 11/07/10 07:43 am Title: car trouble
Oh my god! I need more! Now!
Date: 11/07/10 07:40 am Title: beautiful
I'm definetely not disappointed..This was such an amazing chapter!
i loved it and i'm glad it's a realistic development, it would be really odd if they hated each other one minute and the next minute they were declaring undying love..
My favourite bits of this chapter:
bill reaction to finding tom at home-imo it was realistic
Tom and anna's conversation
I can't wait for more X
Date: 11/07/10 07:38 am Title: car trouble
i hate gen fics, i've never read a gen fic.
but this one i adore
Date: 11/07/10 07:29 am Title: beautiful
Aww I want to read the next chapter soon! :)
Date: 11/07/10 07:15 am Title: beautiful
Love love love the story and I love the pace you are working with, good shit takes time! ;)
Date: 11/07/10 06:15 am Title: beautiful
oh my god... :O
Your story is amazing!!
And about what you said in you end notes; that's exactly what i wanted! :D
please update soon!
Date: 11/07/10 06:14 am Title: beautiful
i totally love it, and your announcement(that it's going to be a long story) made me tremendously happy. I wish you would update faster, but I know it's pretty hard to always have inspiration:)
keep doing a good job, your story is fantastic!!!
Date: 11/07/10 05:18 am Title: beautiful
First of, I'm sorry if I haven't commented before. Second, I really really really love your story. Your writing pulls me in.. It's like I'm in there, seeing and hearing the scenes, what ever happens with my own eyes and ears. It's fantastic. It's amazing that you can keep ve relationship between Tom and Anna realistic. Not many can, and that's another bonus with your story. I like that a lot. Third, a long story is great. It really is. And I think is good that you'll continue in making a realistic relationship between them. Isn't when your drunk the truth comes out? I loved the scene in Tom's bedroom. It was just.. Beautiful (; And Nate made a reappearance, which was great. I think Tom needed that little bit of jealousy. He finally admitted some of his feelings for her. Right now, I'm trying to figure out why Anna started crying. I guess I'll find out soon enough. Anyways, I'll shut up now. I hope you'll post again sometime soon and - maybe a little late - congrats on being featured.