Date: 11/08/10 03:42 pm Title: beautiful
Ahhh, so intense. :D I love it. (: Please update soon. (:
Date: 11/08/10 03:21 pm Title: beautiful
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Date: 11/08/10 01:48 pm Title: beautiful
eugh, i love this story so much
Date: 11/08/10 09:03 am Title: beautiful
Deals fine with me as long as you update :D
Your amazing. I love it.
Date: 11/08/10 06:20 am Title: beautiful
Can't wait for more!I really like your story.
Date: 11/08/10 05:43 am Title: beautiful
ooh my..I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 11/08/10 04:31 am Title: beautiful
Whoa! I finally read your story. It's so intensive and I love it! The detailed emotions of Anna, Tom and Bill felt so real. Tom has been a total jerk but I feel for him towards the end of this chapter. I'm exciting that your story is long and it will not rush into a declaration of love because Tom often gets the girl too easily. Keep on writing and please update soon! =]
Date: 11/07/10 11:46 pm Title: beautiful
I love your writing style. :)
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Keep up the awesome work!
Date: 11/07/10 10:02 pm Title: beautiful
OOOOOmg i like totally cried just now!!! excellent work keep it going!!!
Date: 11/07/10 09:35 pm Title: car trouble
Ahh! Thank GOD you updated! I was going a little nutty. I fell in love with this story the very first time I read it, and I think you do a phenomenal job with it.
Date: 11/07/10 08:34 pm Title: beautiful
I like that this is more realistic than other stories as far as relationship development, some things you can't rush.
Date: 11/07/10 08:34 pm Title: beautiful
jesus... i'm completely head over heals for this story. and i totally get what you're saying about it taking time to develop a realistic relationship, and to be quite honest, i would've been disappointed if it happened so quickly.
so far this story is probably the most realistic i've read here. thumbs up.
Date: 11/07/10 08:03 pm Title: beautiful
I think you are taking things at an incredible pace. I don't think things should move any faster than they are going. It makes things more interesting =]
I absolutely loved this chapter. There was so much emotion in it. I was cheering for Anna the whole time she was blowing Tom off. He totally deserved it. It was nice to see a different side of Tom too though. Even though the alcohol had something to do with it, it was nice to see he isn't completely heartless.
I absolutely love this story and cannot wait to see what happens! Definitely not disappointed =]
Date: 11/07/10 06:44 pm Title: beautiful
oh im definately not dissapointed, a story like yours is a breath of fresh air, im absolutely addicted. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Date: 11/07/10 05:16 pm Title: beautiful
YAYAYAYAYAY! I love it! Please don't stop writing on this story until its finished. I would die. I need an ending and I'm sure everyone else does too!
Date: 11/07/10 05:01 pm Title: beautiful
no, i like this.... i like the fact that you're not rushing it like a lot of people do on here... heck, even i rush stuff, but i'm an impatient writer... XD
Date: 11/07/10 04:47 pm Title: beautiful
I love the brotherly bonding between Tom and Bill. so Fucking SWEET jeeez you're good! and this chapter was lonnnng worth the wait.. and i too am so happy that youre taking it slow.. this is real people! he wouldnt start spewing lovey dovey stuff just yet! anna is the greatest OFC in existence.. how ddo you do it?! she is likeable and relatable and so cute.. god i feel bad for her.. obviously she was ccryingbecause her emotions are conflicted with tom... he nearly kissed her AND CALLED HER BEAUTIFUL. i gasped out loud when i heard that. and i love seeing tom go semi soft when he sees her.. its like he tries to stay the cold ass but fails in teh end and shows some niceness to her, like when he confronted her.. i really cannot wait for the next chapter... this is the greatest story i've ever read..
Date: 11/07/10 04:46 pm Title: beautiful
I love the brotherly bonding between Tom and Bill. so Fucking SWEET jeeez you're good! and this chapter was lonnnng worth the wait.. and i too am so happy that youre taking it slow.. this is real people! he wouldnt start spewing lovey dovey stuff just yet! anna is the greatest OFC in existence.. how ddo you do it?! she is likeable and relatable and so cute.. god i feel bad for her.. obviously she was ccryingbecause her emotions are conflicted with tom... he nearly kissed her AND CALLED HER BEAUTIFUL. i gasped out loud when i heard that. and i love seeing tom go semi soft when he sees her.. its like he tries to stay the cold ass but fails in teh end and shows some niceness to her, like when he confronted her.. i really cannot wait for the next chapter... this is the greatest story i've ever read..
Date: 11/07/10 03:55 pm Title: beautiful
I am COMPLETELY in for the long haul :)
I couldn't get enough of this story, so realistic, with all the imagery.
I'm so glad I found this story today!
It's amazingly written, funny, quirky, shameful, disturbing.
Everything rolled all into one!
Keep going, because this realistic development of a relationship story is exactly what is needed.
And don't cut to the chase!
Slow and steady wins the race :)
Date: 11/07/10 02:47 pm Title: beautiful
Awesome chapter:))) This is truly the best story i've ever read, it's so interesting and i just can't get enough ot it. Please post more soon, pleaseeee