Date: 12/27/10 08:43 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
ahhh i'm going to explode soon!! but please dont hurry the fic!!! u'll finish it in your own time and not because you have some bloddthirsty readers behind u... he he ..
LOVE IT!!
Date: 12/27/10 04:52 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
I admire you again. How you can keep your readers in tension, so they are actually desperate to read. I love how you build your plot. I was expecting Tom would do some shit to Anna after the kiss, because he's too... shy xD I don't know to admit his true feelings to her. But what he'd done! It's just painful for her, because always he treats Anna like shit. So really I like Tom, but I want Anna to show him his place or smth :-D
I'm waiting eagerly for the update.
You're amazing writer.
Date: 12/27/10 11:55 am Title: things that go bump in the night
UPDATTEEEE SOOOOOONNNN! ITS BEEN AGES BETWEEN UR UPDATES.....UPDATE QUICKER!!!
Author's Response: next update will be up within a few days :)
Date: 12/27/10 05:24 am Title: things that go bump in the night
omg, I'm so glad you've updated, I missed it ! Tom's such a jerk, but you make him likable in some way...xd Bill's better for her, but I want her to be with Tom ! x
Author's Response: yeah it's difficult to write tom in a chauvinistic, asshole way but still keep readers' interest in him. quite a challenge and i'm glad you recognized this... i'm glad you're enjoying !
Date: 12/27/10 03:48 am Title: things that go bump in the night
OH MY GOD!
i am so freaking happy that i read this story!
i am not a fan of het but this is
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words cant describe it!
you are an amazing writer
Author's Response: the most wonderful reviews to read involve something along the lines of "...i dont usually read het BUT - " that being said, i'm so so so happy that my gen/het fic has caught your attention, thanks for reading and thank you for the compliment
Date: 12/27/10 03:13 am Title: things that go bump in the night
OMG I love this story so much! And finally some one who can make Bill and Tom close but NOT gay :D I think it's ironic because a girl at my school is named paige- and is exactly like your character, but she's like a freshman i think :D Continue soon! Can't wait!!!
Author's Response: that's a hilarious coincidence about the chick at your school. of course she's a freshman, hah. and yes yes i love writing a brotherly, non-twincest relationship with the two boys, thank you for the kind review
Date: 12/27/10 02:22 am Title: things that go bump in the night
im rendered speechless. with each chapter you give us you bring something new, something fresh, and im absolutely addicted to this story and to anna and to tom and to their disfunctional relatonship. your writing is so exciting and so heartbreaking and i had tears in my eyes at the end. her breakdown was so gorgeous and so tragic and bill being there made me happy. i am TOTALLY team NATE right now because god hes so nice to her and she needs some comfort as tom clearly doesnt know how to be affectionate even though its obvious hes fallen for her too. this story is just ,. i dont think words can even describe. im in love. update soon
Author's Response: your reviews make me blush :D you're so thorough in them and i dig it. team nate all the way, and yeah, tom has feelings for anna, he's just suchhh ann assss. thanks for the review
Date: 12/27/10 12:06 am Title: things that go bump in the night
Fabulous, as usual! Can't wait for an update :)
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 12/26/10 11:49 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
NOOOOOO ! AAAAAAAAAAH !
I want to kill Tom right now, that bastard. I'm so angry with him.
If I was her, I would throw something at him. Or better, play the dumb and pretend I didn't even know him.
But then I would go to my room because I wouldn't stand to look at him. Or then I would go after Bill.
Anyway, I would hate him. I do hate him right now.
I can't wait for the next chapter !
Author's Response: yeah he's a dick. don't worry though, anna won't go down without a fight. thank you for the review
Date: 12/26/10 09:11 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
oh that was fantastic. i love your story. so realistic. I look forward to the 'quicker updates' ;) x
Author's Response: i'm glad you find this realistic, that was my main aim ahha. quick update within few days, keep your eyes peeled :D
Date: 12/26/10 02:08 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
NNNNOOOO WHY IS TOM SUCH A FUCKN PRICK!!! Bill is so much better for her! But at the same time, I want her to be with Tom. CHANGE TOMS ATTITUDE!!! :( I kept signing in waiting for this update, and this chapter I waited for just pissed me off!(as if I were actually there or something)lol
Author's Response: ha i hope you're not too angry!
Date: 12/24/10 11:40 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
Awww I knew it was Tom, I fucking knew it. That's a fucked up way to get back at Anna, I hope he feels like shit.
I love Nate and Bill, they're such nice guys to balance Tom's stupidity.
awesome chapter
Author's Response: completely fucked up. he's a bastard. i was even angry writing it - but no worries, he'll get his. thanks for your review
Date: 12/24/10 11:25 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
oh.my.God.
I felt my insides give out the same time Anna broke down. LOVELOVELOVEIT!
You HAVE to update soon. please?
Date: 12/24/10 10:13 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
This chapter was great. I was brought to tears at the fact Anna had to come home to that nightmare. I will vote for you too and please update ASAP.
Date: 12/24/10 08:20 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
Poor Anna I thought her situation with Tom was bad enough but the fact he slept with Paige?! Oh God this is definitely dramatic and I cannot stop reading...can't wait to read more!
Date: 12/24/10 05:50 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
Fuck! Tom's such a dick! Why can't he just stop causing Anna so much pain, if he really wants her, why does he do that?! :(
Date: 12/24/10 05:18 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
Oh and btw, I will most definitely be voting for this at the awards site. It deserves all the votes it can get because it is one of the major competitions on that site. MOVE OVER OTHER HET STORIES. 25 days is gonna blow ya away. haha. UPDATE SOON, kay rant over ; )
Date: 12/24/10 05:17 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
Update Soon! Will the next chapter have some Tom and Anna interaction?
Date: 12/24/10 05:13 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
Gorgeous chapter. The date with Nate was so cute and I was incredibly happy for Anna that she had someone so nice to take care of her..
..And then she comes home to that nightmare. I had a feeling it was TOm but I kept begging myself that it wasn't, i was literally saying outloud as i read "no, please don't let it be!" And then he came out and my heart dropped.
The scene with Bill is one of the best written scenes i've read in any story. It's full of raw emotion, it makes my heart race and I'll admit - i cried with her. I felt the heartbreak AND THAT is AMAZING WRITING that caused that.
This is best story of any category on any site i've ever read. bravo.
Date: 12/24/10 04:59 pm Title: things that go bump in the night
OMG! Awesome awesome chapter! Don't like Paige at al >.