Date: 08/11/25 02:30 am Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
Uhm, even if it’s bdsm they would never hurt their entrances so it spurts out blood wtf, that would jus make everything painful and only painful and the twins who love each other above everything in any universe would never treat one another like that, it’s a difference to bdsm and rough play and literal gory torturing grossness and making bill out to be a pathetic IT creature??? That would be okey with many of the stuff you wrote , please delete or rewrite it because yuck, and people who wrote that it was beautiful must be really damaged and screwed up
Date: 10/21/11 07:09 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
I am not judging you, at all. You're a good writer and I know people like your stuff. I have read stories of yours that I like. I was just taken by surprise with this and I'm sorry...couldn't finish it. Was afraid to finish it. Don't mind me...to each his own. At least you are aware of your own tastes. But to the individual who called this beautiful I would have to say, this is is where we part ways, because I think you're crazy. Unless English is not your first language and you are confusing your adjectives. Kinky, sordid, eclectic, masochistic, sadistic, even hot...all of those may apply if this IS your cup of tea. But beautiful? Hmmm...
Keep doin' yo thang girlfriend. Whatever makes your fans happy. Just PLEASE warn us ahead of time. I'm not a fan of having to wash my eyes out with bleach. Lol!
Date: 10/19/11 11:46 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
Jesus Christ, are you kidding? This disturbs me. Not just because it's so violent and hurtful, but because so many people seem to find that hot, and I think someone even said "beautiful". That makes me think some of you need help. The professional sort. It's not my thing, and had the warnings been subject appropriate, I wouldn't have read it at all, nor been here commenting; but since they weren't...you need to please include abuse, gore, humiliation, violence and OOC in your warnings. This was ridiculously and mind-blowingly under-rated and I'm not going to lie...I'm pissed.
But too late now, isn't it?
Author's Response:
I am very sorry about that. I apologize if the warnings weren't proper and I have changed it already. Thank you for your feedback and I understand if this is not your cup of tea and that just because the warning aren't proper you had been fooled on reading it. -bows head in shame-
rnI don't blame you if you are absolutely horrified and if you think I need help. -shrugs- Again, I am really sorry and I hope you can forgive me for this. :(
Date: 10/06/11 03:36 am Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
nice story!
Date: 03/17/11 04:06 am Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
Very very well done.
It was beautiful and hot!
Date: 05/30/10 01:39 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
That was good... I loved the idea, but the beginning was a bit tough to follow with the "it's" ...lol maybe it's just me.
Author's Response: I love referring to Bill using IT.. makes him feel unreal.. more than a mere mortal eh? -giggles- but anyway! thanks for reading and reviewing! -hugs-
Date: 05/06/10 05:19 am Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
umm ummm....welllllllll......that was really hot. really really hot. yah...:)
Author's Response: -giggles then hugs you- thank you!!!
Date: 05/01/10 06:25 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
this was very kinky, a part of me wishes you'd left out that it was role play though, i felt like it was just smut anyway so why complicate things?
Author's Response: my Tom!muse wanted to say he loves Bill.. he's fluffy like that.. -giggles- but -hugs- thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Date: 05/01/10 03:52 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
Ok, I liked parts of it,but I have some stuff I didn't like.
For one, if the twins were just role-playing or trying something out because Tom thought he might like it, then I don't think they would realistically start off so violently.
Also, BDSM can be really rough and mean without "blood spurting" --yeah, that was a little much.
I liked the toys and the dialog, and how you had them revert back to being sweet at the end.
Author's Response:
uhm.. it's okay I don''t even understand why I wrote it like that.. uhm.. -smacks Tom!muse- I have no idea about bdsm and yeah... -hugs- still thanks for reading and reviewing!! and I adore Gilded Cage so much!!
Date: 05/01/10 02:30 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
teehee, i love leaving colorful reviews.
it adds some oomph-ness :D
& You are SO welcomee (:
-----Sammi.
Author's Response: -hugs- they are so nice!! -dances around-
Date: 05/01/10 02:24 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
I liked it. :]
Author's Response: -hugs- thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you liked it!
Date: 05/01/10 02:02 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
HOLY FREAKIN' FUDGESICLE STICKS! XD
This was torturously
h o t & k i n k y :D
Like seriously, I'm on the virge of being out of breath just from the pervy images I had running through my head.
Thank goodness my mother isnt a mind-reader xD
You really did a wonderful job ^^
All the details and everything..perfect
(:
*loved it*
Most definitely FAVING (:
-----Samantha
Author's Response:
zomg.. -glomps you- this is the first time I saw a review in red.. you're awesome!! and -blushes- thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
dude.. I totally went O.o when I saw your review.. -giggles-
Date: 05/01/10 01:30 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
I feel like I've just had sex with you, which is a good thing thinking about your talent for writing, but quite awkward anywhere else. I guess I just got carried away by, again, your talent.
To sum it up: Really great!!
Author's Response: O.o LOL I'm a dominatrix btw.. but thank you! -hugs-
Date: 05/01/10 01:20 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
hehe i love it. XD i like me some KINK! *feels like a perv* ah, well. great job!
Author's Response: -glomps- thank you!!!
Date: 05/01/10 01:17 pm Title: Pretty little plaything aren't you?
Oohhhh, this is dark, and kinda twisted...but oddly interesting. And hot.
Author's Response: yay!!! thanks for reading!! -hugs- and reviewing too.. yes I'm weird like this.. :3