Date: 10/15/11 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 6
wow this was just hilarious, your story is amazing
Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad to hear you found it funny :))
Date: 10/15/11 11:43 am Title: Chapter 4
love the story!
Author's Response: thank you! :)
Date: 07/28/11 05:37 pm Title: Epilogue
this is a really good story!!
u should do a sequel to this!:)
Author's Response: thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed it =) but I've no plans of ever writing a sequel to this.
Date: 07/12/11 10:58 am Title: Chapter 19
Really enjoyed this story. The exchange between Bill and Tom was so fast and furious, both verbally and physically though, that it was hard to see how they would reconcile their relationship. It was a shame to see it come to such a quick conclusion as their personalities here would've made for something a bit more drawn out, imo. Still a hugely enjoyable fic!
Author's Response: Hey thanks for this comment=) I agree with all of the points you've made. It ended very fast, I should've outlined and planned it more. Instead I just posted it as I wrote it; tbh I don't really like this fic myself =x. Now I don't post WIPs anymore for this exact reason haha. But I am glad you enjoyed it despite all its failures. Thank you=)
Date: 06/21/11 01:41 am Title: Epilogue
love this! amazing story, hot too ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy to hear you liked it=)
Date: 04/15/11 01:51 am Title: Epilogue
Wow! Fucking fantastic story! I absolutely loved it xD
Author's Response: Thank you=D I'm happy to hear you liked it!
Date: 03/28/11 06:20 am Title: Epilogue
I reviewed chapter 5 months ago and for some reason never gave another review after I read the story. Anyways, this is like the 3rd or 4th time I've read this story and I love it. I love Tom and Georg, I love Georg, he's so funny. I love what you did with the characters. I even loved Bill even though at times he acted like a cold-hearted bitch. But, yeah, I love this story. I am so glad I found this story. It's in my favorites I think, I'll have to check but it probably is.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you've enjoyed the story and that you liked the characters =D thank you for reading!!
Date: 02/17/11 10:34 pm Title: Epilogue
Oh God your fic is amazing. I can't believe you don't have more reviews!!! I almost died laughing so many times and then I hit the chapter with Tom's song and I can tell you I think I did die laughing. Well, I probably cut off some oxygen to my brain from the insane cackling I was doing because I now have a splitting headache lol!
I love the whole progression of their relationship and the smut was hot. I actually left work early today because I started your fic this morning and had to leave for a meeting and spent the whole meeting thinking about your fic! So I took half a day and just finished it heh. And now i'm fucking horny and wishing my OH were here! I already sent him a naughty text and he said no one better expect him to get up for the next 10mins LOL. I am so bad.
Anyway, love it!!!!!!!! :D :D :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much =)) it already has way more reviews than I ever thought it'd get, haha. I'm happy to hear you found it funny and enjoyed reading it! Sorry about the head ache :p Thank you for reading and leaving such a great comment, it made me smile =D
Date: 02/17/11 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 6
Oh Bill! Don't go hating on the braids! Story is hilarious. Love Tom and I want to goose Bill for some reason hahaha. It's damn tiring being a bitch. I should know - been a bitch all week and I'm exhaused!
Author's Response: Thank you =D I'm glad to hear you like it! And yes, being a bitch is hard work ;)
Date: 01/30/11 09:47 am Title: Epilogue
Hi!
I absolutely love this story.
Once I read the prologue? I could help but read the whole story, almost in one go!
- Diva Bill is at his best. His outbursts are fucking hilarious since the first one....Besides that, of course he is blasé and disappointed by men and people in genera, but I think he has extenuating circumstances, with all he and his mother went through.
- And Tom doesn't nothing to cool Bill down. He'd rather add fuel to the fire.
They are as opposite as possible and they clash furiously
- The situations they put themselves in, are so funny. The dirty tricks they made to each other are so good!
They -and you- have a wonderful imagination. Every 'hate' chat is so catching, every reply priceless!
- As to the sex...it's strong, mind-blowing, passionate, angry....But so....I don't think I have the right word to describe it.
It could have remain only that, sex...but when it first happens, there is already something more in them, even if neither of them would admit it.
And when Bill learns about the bet, he is angry for a good reason. He didn't want his shell to crack and him to be perhaps hurt, but it happens and he tries in vain to rebuilt it stonger than before.
Which leads to the payback sex...It's kinky, even disturbing...but so good. even if it breaks Bill more.
the 'New Bill' was interesting but it was so unlike him
Tom and Bill could have stop this thing, whatever it is...but when they think of this solution, it is too late, they alreday were so caught into each other.
What I really likes is the progression of their relationship.
Hate, mixed with attraction that turns into deep feelings.
They deny it whith so much strenght, it's so laughable, yet so cute.
Thei road on love paths is long and arduous, but it slowly creeps its way in their hearts and brains.
In fact, they become a couple without realising it.
- And I think there is one person that doen't deserve to be forgotten....Poor David, all those two put him through....POOR HIM!
This story was wonderful, I don't remember how or why I started to read it but I don't regret it one bit!!!
So good ans captivating even if the base plot isn't totally out of the ordinary...I mean...the boys in a band, it could have been dull or a plot often seen.
But you managed to make it almost perfect...
Congratulations, this story is amazing.
Kiki
PS: I read a lot, but I rarely left a review...Or when I do it, I almost always have an ulterior motive.
Not reprehensive, I must add...
I translate some stories into french - which I am - and I always left a review to the author whose stories I want to translate...
So Here goes my request:
Would you allow me to translate this tory into french?
I have a few already done and some in project but I can help but find new ones!
It could be great to have yours in those.
XXX
Author's Response: Hey:) thank you for such a nice and amazing review it made me smile! I'm thrilled you've enjoyed the story! If you wish to translate it please put a link to the original author(me) and to where the story is first posted(here at thf). And once you've translated it, I'd love it if you sent me a link to wherever you might post it to :D thank you!
Date: 11/29/10 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 7
Dude!
I'm so in love with your story :D
I know you've already finished it, but yeah...
I've even printed some chapters to read it during class. Lol.
It's a sure thing that I'll read more of your writings after I'm done reading this one (:
Author's Response: Thank you =D I'm glad to hear you liked it so much!
Date: 11/20/10 04:01 pm Title: Epilogue
Awesome story! :) At first I thought it would be the usual that they meet and fall in love but both don't want to admit it at first, so the hating part in the beginning was different :)
Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it=) Thanks!
Date: 11/17/10 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
Tom is friggin awesome, Bill really needs to lighten up and not judge Tom. Anyways, I am going to keep reading this.
Author's Response: Thank you =)
Date: 11/07/10 11:49 pm Title: Epilogue
Aww what a fluffy little ending!! This entire fic was amazing. Though you never did really explain what Alext did to make Bill lose what little faith or tolerance he had for guitar players...but I probably only noticed it because I read this all at once. If i ahd read it as it was posted I probably wouldnt have noticed the oop hole...i dunno...it was great any way though. congrats on a great fic
Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it =) Um, iirc Alex was only mentioned twice in the story, in passing. I didn't deem it important to go off on a tangent about it/him. He was Bill's unrequited school crush, I think and that was all. It was Bill's father mostly, who was responsible for Bill's hate for the guitarist and I think that was explained sufficiently.
Date: 10/27/10 12:37 pm Title: Epilogue
LOL Poor David.
I'm sorry I haven't written more reviews or something but I need to tell you: you're an amazing fic writer. I enjoyed the history though you keep telling you didn't know what you were doing. ;D
Author's Response: Haha, I know right? How he suffers! Thank you, I'm happy you enjoyed the story so much =D
Date: 10/27/10 12:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
This chapter was fantastic! I almost died laughing (hard thing to do, btw, your sense of humor is amazing) and I'm loving Tom's attitude vs. Bill's.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hah, my sense of humor's a bit out there, but I'm thrilled you found it funny! =D
Date: 10/26/10 04:58 pm Title: Epilogue
That was so cute! I enjoyed watching them go from hate to love. The ending was great, too. Poor David - he'll never win any argument, now.
Author's Response: =D Thanks so much, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the story! And yes, David will need a loooong vacation :p
Date: 10/22/10 06:50 pm Title: Epilogue
amazing. such a quality read. thanks, a lot) definitely adding to faves
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm thrilled you liked it =)
Date: 09/19/10 10:11 am Title: Epilogue
Oh God, it's so sad it ended. I've been a long time reading this because I find it so amazingly good.
And now it's just over .__.
I've been laughing so much over this. Even when they were trying to be serious, I couldn't help but giggle. It's aw-mazing and I love it!
I think you did a great job with the writing too. It's not just one boring blurr of a story, it's exciting and you always end up wondering what will happen next. And the way it's build up, I like it very much.
I swear, this is good shit. Credits to you!
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, it had to end sometime, right? =)) I'm glad you found it amusing, I was aiming for something light and fun with this fic=) thank you, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it!
Date: 08/27/10 05:30 pm Title: Prologue
This was a fun read. Thanks for posting.
Author's Response: Thank you=)