Date: 05/19/10 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 5
haha omg i really like this story at first is wa like eh... but yea know i like it! i love bitchy bill in this story! and pervy tom! its nice great job :)
Author's Response: =)) I'm glad you're enjoying it, thank you!
Date: 05/19/10 11:11 am Title: Chapter 5
this is going to be so yummy. I love Bitch Bill.
Author's Response: me too, idk why but I think it's fun:))
Date: 05/19/10 10:22 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Bill
Author's Response: haha, yes =)
Date: 05/19/10 09:56 am Title: Chapter 5
yay.. you updated!thanks for updating so soon..brill chapter and really left me wanting more..*a cookie for your trouble*
also im liking the idea that they are sharing a bus...take care xo
Author's Response: =)) welcome. Thank you! & of course they share a bus, there could be no other way ;))
Date: 05/19/10 09:26 am Title: Chapter 5
LOL, I adore this story! It's so much fun to read! I love the way Tom gets into Bill's skin, love that Bill can't stop talking about Tom and that Nat is aware of this. I'll be looking forward to more, this just keeps getting better and better. :D
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that=D thank you!
Date: 05/19/10 09:15 am Title: Chapter 5
haha.Tom makes Bill insane!It will be a long tour for Bill.
Author's Response: & for Tom;))
Date: 05/19/10 08:35 am Title: Chapter 5
Hahaha Tom is driving Bill crazy.
I love it, continue soon!
XoXo
Author's Response: Yes, cos I think it's fun ;) I'm glad you like it, & I'll try to update again soon!
Date: 05/19/10 08:19 am Title: Chapter 5
Naww, poor Bill ^_^
Author's Response: haha, yes! how he suffers...:P
Date: 05/18/10 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 4
i loved the interaction and banter between the boys..
great chapter,great author and great story!
cant wait for next chapter so update soon...I have more cookies =D
Author's Response: =D thank you!! I'll try to update tomorrow! I just need to edit the chapter, then I'll post it.
Date: 05/17/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 4
Bill's bitchiness is funny, yet annoying at the same time...
Author's Response: well, that's the way I wanted to write him, so....
Date: 05/16/10 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
Really good story.I love the way you write it.waiting for more!
Author's Response: thank you! I'll try to update soon=)
Date: 05/16/10 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 4
It's not such a filler but I hope that I can see more interaction betwen both of them :)
Author's Response: =)) there will be def more interaction in the future chapters! thanks for reading=D
Date: 05/16/10 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 4
WOw awesome can't wait :D
Author's Response: thank you=)
Date: 05/16/10 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Awesomeee :DD
Update soon really want to know what will happen!
Author's Response: thanks=D I'm gonna try my best to update soon!
Date: 05/16/10 02:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
"You don't. Ever. Touch. Me." Bill spat. "Who the fuck do you think you are?"
"Your new guitar player?" Tom smirked. "By the way, I like it when you get feisty, that's really hot," he toyed with his lipring, winking at Bill. The singer's mouth dropped open, and smoky eyes widened for a fraction of a second, before his lips thinned.
"Don't even try, mr. one-night stands are awesome and I love girls," Bill sneered.
"Well, you kinda look like a girl," Tom shrugged again. Bill glared at him fiercely. "Wanna come see my bedroom?"
LOL! It was an awesome chapter! I loved their banter, especially the bits I quoted, heehee. Sparks are already flying and I'm loving every single moment. :D I'm looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Haha, glad you enjoyed it=)) I'm gonna try and update soon!
Date: 05/16/10 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
Love it!
Author's Response: I'm glad, thank you=))
Date: 05/10/10 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
I really love the idea for this story, and diva Bill of course. Update soon. Oh, and Fuel too.
Author's Response: thank you, glad you like it=) diva Bill is fun haha.
Date: 05/10/10 11:10 am Title: Chapter 3
WOw awesome and I could see Bills face priceles :D
Author's Response: thanks=D
Date: 05/10/10 10:52 am Title: Chapter 3
I got excited by your chapter notes. My dog is still reigning! (My pup gets called Queen B)
And oh geez Tom. Yellow? Really? Well, at least the hat and shirt shades matched...
Author's Response: aww haha that's cute =) And well, he did actually wear yellow irl lol =D
Date: 05/10/10 12:21 am Title: Chapter 3
Really good please continue soon! (LL
Xoxo
Author's Response: thank you=) I'll try.