Date: 10/21/10 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 2: Pants on Fire
Woo, I'm glad Tom didn't just call off the wedding. Aw, and seeing Bill all dressed up for their wedding made me feel bad for both Tom and Bill...
Oh I can't wait to find out what's with Bill's past, why he walked away from it and doesn't wanna talk about it...
But I feel that Tom was being kind of irrational and not letting Bill explain, although I can totally understand how his anger and hurt would've blinded him and make him lose reason...I feel really bad for both of them. Tom's threats are kind of scary, what with him threatening to ruin Bill's career... that was mean of him :( .... and that whole conversation they had was full of tension and hurt and awesome drama!
Hmm, now I'm curious why Tom wanted to go ahead with the wedding instead of call it off (and him demanding Bill comply was creepy and awesome! :D), and what he has in store for Bill.
“Because I want revenge, and there is no revenge sweeter than the things I have planned for you.” ---- ah damn, that is scary. He sounds like a serial killer or something.. I love angryhurt!Tom! He's hot! :P
Honeymoon! Will be interesting!!! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 10/21/10 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
Oooh! Oh this is very interesting! Is Bill really in it for the money only...? Oh man, the suspense is killing me!! :P Can't wait to find out more about Bill's past and his wedding to Anis... *goes onto next chapter*
Date: 10/20/10 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 2: Pants on Fire
Poor Bill, I'm sure he has an explanation and he wasn't after Tom's money. If only Tom would listen...
You switch back and forth from the past tense to the present tense a few times. Might want to fix that.
Date: 10/20/10 02:30 am Title: Chapter 2: Pants on Fire
Oh I like!! Gimme more!!
Date: 10/19/10 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 2: Pants on Fire
Wow that Tom reminds me of someone from a novel I've read. So fierce and charged with vengeful emotion.. and hawt XD
I look forward to Bill's p.o.v. I hope that wasn't an act he just put on :/
Date: 10/19/10 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 2: Pants on Fire
oooooooooooooo. I like angry Tomi.... i'm tracking you
Date: 10/19/10 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 2: Pants on Fire
Oh wow, I don't know what I was expecting to happen, but it certainly wasn't Tom wanting to go forward with the wedding and resorting to threats to do it. I feel bad for him, though, it wasn't easy for him to find out about this on his wedding day, especially not when it confirms what his mother has been telling him about Bill. I just hope Bill has a good enough explanation about this and that Tom listens to him eventually. Fantastic chapter, hon!
Date: 04/30/10 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
WHEW! SO MUCH drama in one chapter. NO TOM! dont call it off T_T!. Well there HAS to be a reason that Bill did that to Bushido. THERE HAS TO T^T. BUT Tom you should AT LEAST confront Bill before you do something crazy. tsk
Date: 04/30/10 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
wow. i hope there is more to the story and bill gets a chance to explain. i look forward to seeing where you take this.
Date: 04/30/10 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
Hi!!
I apologize for the time it took me to review, after all I promise to do it when arriving home, but then I just got home to change my clothes and be off again... anyway, sorry.
This starts interesting! who's saying the truth? I believe Bushido is saying half-truths, I resist to believe that Bill is a thief. Will Tom have the clarity of confronting Bill before calling off the wedding?
Great you will update so soon.
Hugs pretty!!
Date: 04/30/10 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
OH, SNAP! Bill you bitch!!! ;D
I hope Bushido is not telling Tom something, and Bill isn't scamming Tom.
But it's nice to come across a story where Bill's the asshole ... so rare.... I LIKE THIS. I LIKE THIS ALOT. <3
Date: 04/30/10 12:16 pm Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
OMG Bill's a gold-digger?!
Date: 04/30/10 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
woa Bill is the bastard in this story
me likes
i hope that he's not too heartless
Date: 04/30/10 05:10 am Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
I like who it is going, keep writing
Date: 04/30/10 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
OMG, sorry I didn't reply to this sooner! I was pissed at people and had a huge headache, so I went to bed -.-
But, I love it! I can't believe Bill did that, and that he lied to Tom, *glares at Bill*
I think Tom should think before just calling the wedding off. He needs to talk to Bill first. But maybe that's just me, 'cause I don't like the idea of them not together xD LOL!
Love this, and you, can't wait for more.
*tracks story* =]
Date: 04/30/10 04:23 am Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
I'm on it
Billshido I like and I wanna know how it's gonna end
Is Bill really a gold digger or is there is something else
I wanna know
Date: 04/30/10 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
Wow, I am really looking forward to reading this one. It definitely is different from any thing I've ever read on here.
Date: 04/30/10 02:49 am Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
I love your ideas.I love your fics.Everyone!
Date: 04/30/10 02:44 am Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
You always manage to come up with the most awesome stories this one sounds so intresting
Date: 04/30/10 01:18 am Title: Chapter 1: Liar, Liar
Bill you bitch. :O