Date: 08/26/11 08:11 am Title: Chapter 1
so am I still waiting for your amazing sequel hehe... I just really loved this story so I really want a sequel I will wait till the end of my life ...:)
Author's Response: Haha, well I think that I won't take that long! I'll have a look at it right now and see where I can go with it!
Date: 08/11/11 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 28
Your story was absolutely amazing! You are a great writer! I wish I could write that well!
Author's Response: Thank you very very much! I beg to differ, but thank :) I'm sure if you put your mind to it, you could be ten times better :)
Date: 05/30/11 03:03 am Title: Chapter 28
OH MY GOD I LOVE IT SO FUCKING MUCH I CRIED A LOT EEEEEEEE IM SO BAD THAT I WANT A SEQUEL BUT IT WAS GREAT SO GREAT AND FANTASTIC!!mmm do u mind doing sequel for this?ahhhh i want sequel so bad :''''''''''''((
Author's Response: Aw, I'm sorry I made you cry, but do you know what? Crying is the biggest complement for me so thank you. About the sequel, I actually have started it, but it's been about a year since I have looked at it again, lol. But maybe I will start writing it again. I'm glad you liked it and once again, thank you :)
Date: 09/01/10 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, interesting start :O Good fic idea ^^
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Date: 07/18/10 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 28
I dint know where else to put this so ill put it here: your welcome for all the reviews. I used to write on a fan forum (and will be posting on here soon) so I know how frustrating it is not to know what your readers are thinking. Its even worse when you know you have a thousand people reading but only a hundred are voicing themselves. And also THANK YOU for such an amazing story. It was truly entertaining-and funny-from the 1st chapter all the way to the last. ... OH! and i would LOVE a sequel!! lol
Author's Response: I know right! like guys its not like i can't see you reading, but anyways :P Awh, i feel so fuzzy inside, this just made my day! even though its only 8:14 im the morning.. :P awll i'd just like to thank you again, and we'll see....
Date: 07/18/10 03:05 am Title: Chapter 1
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcPGL-VW7w4&feature=related
It's in here.
Author's Response: oh, damn, i cant watch youtube vids atm :\
Date: 07/17/10 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 28
Haha, a thing that was going through the internet the past few days.
Yay!!!! I would love that!
Author's Response: lo, i still have no idea what it is :P well, we'll see...
Date: 07/17/10 04:34 am Title: Chapter 28
That was amazing!!!!I I really had to cry ,it was beautiful honestly :)
Author's Response: :) im glad you though so!! awh :) thank you for reading!
Date: 07/17/10 03:58 am Title: Chapter 28
You dun goof'd.
You can't end it like that D:
Oh, well. It was a good ending anyhow.
Author's Response: ? lol. well unfortauately, i did. well, thank you, for reading and all your reviews :) but to make you feel better, how about a sequal?....
Date: 07/16/10 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 28
oh of course she takes the coffe. its NEVER a bad time for coffee. lol
"purr coffee’" ... whas a purr coffee? is it a flavor?
"Thanks. I’ll always remember you and those coffees" good grief. she couldnt have said him and his MUSCLES it had to be that?
"‘Your brother, he gave me a tissue and told me that the dryer was feisty.’".... im not sure i even need to comment in this one. lol
AWWW THEY KISSED! and- now shes never going to see him again??! awman...
why can she never go back to the sun? oh he live there or or.... SOMETHING! *huffs and storms off*
lol jk i got a thank you? WOOT WOOT1 I loved the storie -as you know- and its actually a good ending though i wish things could be different between them....
Author's Response: hahahaha!!rn
rnok, when i first red your comment i was like WTF?! but when i found it, its supposed to be the purr of the coffee machine, geez i went wrong there!rn
rnhaha, yeah, well they were pretty good, nah, but i guess it was an inside joke :P me personally i hate coffee :Prn
rnhaha! yeah, though i'd add a comical line in there to lighten the moodrn
rnyes! finally, yeah, unfortunately :(rn
rni'm not even sure about thatrn
rnAw, thanks so much!!!! yeah, well hmm maybe you would like a sequel? oh and i wanna thank you, for all your wonderful reviews!!!!
Date: 07/15/10 12:32 am Title: Chapter 27
spiritul energy?... how does that work? (i guess it really is 'the fight in the man' that matters lol)
someones tip-toeing around confirming or denying...... idk y but i think there going to move in with each other.
Author's Response: lol, honestly, i have no idea :P haha, yeah :Prnrnlol, well seeing that im about to post another chapter now, you'll find out pretty soon :P
Date: 07/12/10 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 26
ya know.... im not sure how i fell about that one. I think i need a minute. ...wow.
Author's Response: thanks for being honest :)
Date: 07/12/10 01:01 am Title: Chapter 26
You probably already knew this, but you have two chapter 21s and no chapter 20. Tom can't be dead, he's the prology. He probably split his soul and hid it in objects. Hehe. When she becomes Cara or when they call her that, is she any diffrent or not?
Author's Response: yeah, i did know, i accidentally posted the one of the chapters twice and i had to do all this stuff and it when you look at the chapter list it shows 2 21's but the 1st one is actually chap 20, but thanks for the head's up :) Well, im sad to say, but he is :( She's the same, its just that she wanted bill to call her cara and he hasnt till then :)
Date: 07/12/10 12:22 am Title: Chapter 26
now the romance begins... lol. maybe. :)
Author's Response: haha, yes maybe ;)
Date: 07/11/10 11:30 am Title: Chapter 25
love this story! ;)
im just obsessed with the whole fantasy idea of there being another world where bill and tom kinda rule it :D
haha and I go by Cara so it's interesting for there to be a bill/Cara thing going on. lol.
anywho, you're an awesome writer and I really love the suspense and thrill your story has! ;)
Author's Response: Im so glad that you like it!!
rn:) yeah i must admit, i love to write fantasy coz anything can happen!
rnhahaha, its like you're in the story :P
rn
rnaw, thank you so much, you really dont know how much it means to me! oh and thanks for the review :)rnrn
Date: 07/11/10 04:11 am Title: Chapter 25
"Have a nice sleep?’ Gustav " ... MY Gustav's the BAD GUY!?! O_o whhhhhy? lo
"Would you like some more?’ He asked.' he means jokes? or was he feeding her
"and now since the Master is dead…’" how bad is it that i have no clue who the master is? - im pretty sure i should know but... i got nothin.
"‘I loved you!’ I said fighting back tears.
‘This gets more interesting by the second!’ Tom yelled excitedly." lmfao. ok im sorry. i know its a sad moment but i couldnt help but laugh at that. lol
Author's Response: Yep, he's a silent killer :P but really, i didnt want Gusti to be the bad guy, i just didnt want to leave him out either.rnrnHe meant more torture.rnrnhaha, well let me refresh your memory, the master is the guy is the reason that she's on the sun, she's been training to go up against him and the prodigy is his second in command; for lack of a better word :Prnrndont be, if i didnt write it, i probably would laugh too XD
Date: 07/11/10 04:05 am Title: Chapter 24
WARNING!- THE FOLLOWING ARE COMMENTS
Did the hostege really just yell "Bring it on.’? really? lmao
"Oh look, her arm is bleeding. We better kiss it better. Eh Stan?’" you have No idea how wide my eyes just got
"My thoughts wandered to Bill. I’m sure he was on his way;" how many days has gone by? just one?... thats a sun day right?
Author's Response: Yep. :)rnhaha, dont worry i didnt want her to get raped :Prnnah, i'd probably say an earth day so about 4 sun days; if i remember correctly :P
Date: 07/11/10 03:58 am Title: Chapter 24
"I turned to run, but I was stopped by the two men; who had been chasing me, were closing in behind me. "
what? does this mean that the two men that were chasing her stopped her or that someone else stopped her and the two men were getting closer?
Author's Response: Sorry it dosent make really make sense. she turned from tom but the men (the ones chasing her) where right there behind.
Date: 07/11/10 03:57 am Title: Chapter 23
this is all slightly confusing. Im guessing its because the persons point of view its from is so unsure of whas happening hersellf...? It makes enough sence for the reader to understand whats happening tho. It seams like its all leading up to something tho. ...With that im one to the next chapter
Date: 07/10/10 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 24
ahh why hasnt bill saved her yet?!
Author's Response: he likes to take his time :P