Date: 07/04/10 12:31 am Title: Chapter 22
Good grief. How can she not realize that Tom is Bills Twin? I mean i know there styles are different but their faces are IDENTICAL! and whats up with this Marishka chick? Why does she want to kill Cy so badly?...I haveto wait a WHOLE week to get ansers? UGGGH! lol
Author's Response: haha! well hmm lets just say she's a tad silly :P rnMarishka's a bit of a crazy... :Prnyep, well im about to post another chap right now, coz im back :D
Date: 07/03/10 03:08 am Title: Chapter 21
(once again just commenst while im reading)
why did he make her close her eyes? Toteleport and save time?
OMFNG- JUST KISS ALREADY! UGH! lol
VEGIEloaf? wow news to me lol
"I liked Georg’s place plus, he had that coffee machine.: lmao. og ALL things to use georg for she chooses his coffee machne. If she wasnt so in to bill id swear she was in to chicks lol
shes JUST NOW realizing shes in love with bill? that dunce lol
I liked this chapter. - in case you couldnt tell from the comments- lol
Author's Response: oh, i dont mind.rnhaha, well it set a kinda 'romantic mood'rneveryone says that :Prnlol, yeah, well i guess that coffee machine was pretty good. BAHAHAHAHA, that made me laugh so much! rnhehe, yeah, she's a tad silly :Prnreally? i cound have never been able to tell ;) rnthanks so much for your reviews :Drn
Date: 07/02/10 02:38 am Title: Chapter 21
Ah. Me likey. They need to kiss already ^^ hehe.
Author's Response: yay! im glad you like it :P hmm, well i guess you'll have to keep reading to find out ;)
Date: 06/30/10 02:05 am Title: Chapter 20
Its esier to teleport heavy things?.... Well that makes since in a way. If somethings heavy you have more to 'grip' on to so to say.... can you GRIP things with your mind? lol
Author's Response: lol, yeah, well i guess that works too, but i was going for more surface area (im a biology nerd, lol) hehe, in this story you can ;)
Date: 06/30/10 02:03 am Title: Chapter 20
WAIT JUST MINUTE-... things the teleport can CATCH ON FIRE? WTF?WHY? ... Is this another weird sun thing/ Since they live on a flaming ball of gas they can ACIDENTSLLY flame things? good greif - more reviews comming-
Author's Response: hahahaha! yep, they sure can! hmm, i never really though about that, but i guess it could be? Ah, well thank you very much :)
Date: 06/22/10 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 18
im confused. how did he keep making her fall? weird super natural sun people. lol.this chapter was really good. i think bill and cy are going to end up hooking up and i think georg is cool. ::sidenote:: your in australia? cool.
Author's Response: umm yeah, super sun powers XD nah, i think he shifts the air :) aw, thanks so much! hmm, i guess you'll just have to keep reading to find out ;) rnyep, i sure am :) everyone seems to think so (i do too hehe)
Date: 06/22/10 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 18
haha bill was acting like a dad how cute cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: hehe, yeah :) i think i'll update either today to tomorrow :)rnthanks for reading!
Date: 06/10/10 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 14
AHH! i wonder whats going to happen next. thanks for updating soon :)
Author's Response: hehe, well i guess your gonna have to wait :) not too long though coz i think i might post another soon :)
Date: 06/07/10 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 13
i really like this chapter thanks for updating soon:)
Author's Response: haha, thanks :) rnno problems! i've got it all done so may as well post it!rn
Date: 06/06/10 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1
i really like your story....=)
you also could write a chapter about what is Bill thinking....xD
Author's Response: Thank you!!rni'd love to, but i've actually written the whole thing already, its just a matter of posting it :P
Date: 06/05/10 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
i really like the idea the whole theme of the story its very well written good job:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 06/03/10 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 11
ok so im new to the site and i dont know how to do "reviews" so ill just leAve a few comments. I just sat and read this whole thing. its awsome. its very well written and suspencefull - that fact that there are super natural things helps too since thoe are some of the best stories. lol i luv it =)
Author's Response: Thank you SOOOOOO much, i really appreciate it!!rnI hope you continue reading.rnYeah, thanks again and welcome to the site :)
Date: 05/14/10 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 5
This one didn't confuse me :D
Date: 05/10/10 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 4
Its a little confusing, but i like it and i wanna see where it go's.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, but if you continue, it will all make sense in the end! Oh and thanks for the review :)
Date: 05/02/10 01:38 am Title: Chapter 2
I like keep it going
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!