Date: 05/01/10 01:11 pm Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
And I think it's "seuls", not "seule", though my French is a bit rusty
Date: 05/01/10 01:09 pm Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
Bill's going to have a hard time with her. Horses really need a lot of reassurance from someone before they ease up on the attitude, but after they do, they're like puppies around you.
Cowboy talk doesn't suit Tom's delicate mouth imo, and I just died when I read Gus as the sheriff.
Date: 05/01/10 12:02 pm Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
This sounds really interesting! Can’t wait till you update it. :)
Date: 05/01/10 11:21 am Title: Prologue
Confusing. Though I guess you put the reader right into his lost soles.
Date: 05/01/10 10:31 am Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
Sorry to point it out, but there's a tiny mistake: it's "seuls." ('seul' for the masculine, with an 's' for two men and more) not "seule" (feminine, and for one woman, 'seules' for two and more). Hope i could help :)
can't wait to read the next chapter, ladies!
Author's Response: Lol, yes, thanks, too used to talking to people in French in terms of myself, the "e" is a habit. Whoops. ;)
Date: 05/01/10 01:54 am Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
*claps* I'm so happy you guys finished chapter 6 and updated. NORMALLY, this isn't the sort of story I would like to read but yeah we know how that goes; it's you two. I really love how you two have their attitudes down so perfectly for this story and how Bill acted in town. In all honesty I think his trip into town was my favorite part of the chapter just because I like the detailing of it. The placing of this story is great too, I can picture the town in my so well even though it's hardly been described just because you guys are great with the set up. How Tom is acting toward Bill already will create a wonderful bloom of a relationship and it will be interesting to see how it develops. I'm really excited to read more.
P.S. you have a typo " A change of his dusty clothes would do have to do."
Date: 05/01/10 01:10 am Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
I like this! Sounds so interesting and different!
Lovely banner! :]
Can't wait for more!
Date: 05/01/10 12:35 am Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
at least tomi's in good hands now...
Date: 05/01/10 12:06 am Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
*flail* I am so excited you guys finally started posting this. I remember Lena posting the banner ages ago and I was so excited then. This is amazing. I can't wait for more. :)
Date: 04/30/10 11:28 pm Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
Agggh this story is wonderful. Love me some old west boys, hardcore love them. And it's so real, too, you don't have them speaking eloquently. They're speaking like cowboys would have and that's perfect. I hope to see more soon!
Date: 04/30/10 11:21 pm Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
Hmmm...curious, very curious...
Date: 04/30/10 10:36 am Title: Prologue
kinda confusing
i think while i read more ill get it n.n
Date: 04/29/10 11:29 am Title: Prologue
Oh! I usually hate westerns but this one has me intrigued. Continue!
Date: 04/29/10 10:30 am Title: Prologue
Wow, this seems very very interesting! :)
Date: 04/29/10 09:16 am Title: Prologue
damn you! Now I'm hooked.
Date: 04/29/10 08:52 am Title: Prologue
Definitely caught my attention too! I love the idea and I just can't wait to read a bit more :D
Date: 04/29/10 07:00 am Title: Prologue
definately grabbed my attention...
Date: 04/29/10 05:53 am Title: Prologue
I came on THF to finally read "The ties that bind" and "Home", but I saw this first so I couldn't resist either. Not that I complain, but I didn't expect the new fic to come so soon.I love your weakness :)
Plus, that banner made by Lena is amazing. I believe she posted it on THFF a while ago. I'm glad there's a fic for it to go with now.
Back to this story then, Tom seemed to have gone through some serious beating. Maybe his attackers intended for him to die and thought he did but he didn't?Lucky him, somebody found him.
SO,I take it this story takes place in the times of cowboys and all that western stuff? Reading this feels very fresh, I can't wait to know where you intend to take it to.I believe at that time, people had some really original names too.Or rather nicknames.Maybe I read too much lucky luke though.
Back to the names: "Tom the wanderer"? "Billy the kid" lol, "Georg sharp dagger"(somehow that gave me an entirely different mental image). When I think western I think about the indians tribe,a little bit of those caravanes full of dancing girls and a piano man too maybe?going from city to city entertaining drunk cowboys in the saloons.And even the eager shady undertaker waiting for a new corpse to fit in one of his coffins.
My head is only full of cliché stuff, lol.
Date: 04/29/10 03:30 am Title: Prologue
Excited already *_*