Date: 05/16/10 04:47 pm Title: Typical
"Qu'est-ce que je fait avec toi?"-is this supposed to mean "what am I going to do with you?" if so, I think it's "ferai". The phrase you wrote means "What am I doing with you". If that's what you meant then ignore me.
And Dior the horse? ::iz ded::
Date: 05/16/10 04:27 pm Title: Nobody Knows
Tom's dickishness annoys me. More so than usual.
And Bill talking in french just made him even hotter. Never thought that was possible. He is now currently emanating more heat than the Sun.
Date: 05/16/10 03:41 pm Title: Typical
*flutter clap* That chapter was wonderful... I'm supre curious about all the dodgy shit that happened in the bar though... can't wait to read and find out more
Date: 05/15/10 03:04 pm Title: Typical
I got too sick last night to read this, it upset me. You guys did really well with this chapter. I love seeing the town, it's one of my favorite parts. Oh, and I knew Bushido had to be somewhere in this; I was happy to see him.
Date: 05/15/10 01:11 pm Title: Prologue
I have a feeling Bill didn't go see Nat for sex. let's see :)
Date: 05/15/10 12:32 pm Title: Typical
"What do you mean, with?" I think that was my favorite bit.
Oh, Jost the creeper. Poor Jost.
Somehow I think that interlude with Natalie was not what everyone else thinks it was. >_>
Date: 05/15/10 11:38 am Title: Typical
LOL. Tom totes thought Bill had....male preferences. LMFAOLMFAOLMFAO. *patpat* poor Tom. Doesn't he realize that along with his confusion, there's a bit of jealousy in there. just a hint. xD
Date: 05/15/10 11:30 am Title: Typical
He named the horse Dior. *snorts*. Okay, I giggled at Jumbie, but now I'm simply all out snorting at Dior. I'll be back for a proper review in a bit. xD
Date: 05/15/10 04:17 am Title: Typical
I love how this is progressing :)
Date: 05/06/10 06:05 pm Title: Nobody Knows
:) update more soon! this is fascinating!
by the way, what is the rough time period of this piece?
Author's Response: 1868. :)
Date: 05/05/10 06:26 pm Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
Finally. I have the opportunity to read the first chapter. Gosh, I love it and it is beyond my expectations. I mean, I didn't know what to expect frankly, after the prologue, but I had a general idea. But what you guys just wrote here is ten times better than what I thought, and this time the foreign language is french :)
I don't even have time to review properly, but this first chapter was really good, the imagery was awesome in my mind, Bill's personality draws me in already. Your words flow so smoothly, like usual. The atmosphere created is very pleasant. Pace and timing in the story are perfect. And this is only the start *__* I'm so excited and I'm enjoying this very very much. I'm so sad that I can't read the next chapter right now(plus it seems you updated with two chapters already in that short time, wow!)
Gotta go, my brother's breathing down my neck at the moment because the official exams are coming this monday, so...Yeah.Wish me luck.Merci beaucoup les filles, vous n'imaginez pas comme vos histoires illuminent mes journées :)
Date: 05/05/10 03:31 pm Title: Nobody Knows
Oh wow this is a really good start and I can't wait to read more of it
Date: 05/05/10 07:56 am Title: Nobody Knows
he seriously thought he'd be able to help out right away? guess bill showed him...i like this story and can't wait for more...
Date: 05/05/10 12:49 am Title: Nobody Knows
I love apple fritters...yum...sorry, had to share =) Loved it, as usual
Date: 05/05/10 12:14 am Title: Nobody Knows
Tom can gentle horses; Bill is gentling Tom. :D Without Tom even knowing, I suspect!
He had never been so close to someone like... well, to what he suspected Bill was. *wonders*
I'm so into this.
Date: 05/04/10 10:44 pm Title: Nobody Knows
How long is Tom going to be a racist ass wipe? Please don't add too much of that in here. I love the story but hate reading racist storylines or stories with a lot of overt racism in it.
Date: 05/04/10 10:26 pm Title: Nobody Knows
I love how you are developing everything so realistically in this. The relationship between Bill and Tom so far is great because it's not pushed but neither are rude or "in love" *rolls eyes* You're taking it at a realistic pace and the people around are good too because you stick to their personalities good.
I am so glad you two are writing this and not someone else because just imagine how'd it go. Goodness...Anyway, I'm still loving how it's being described and the pictures you give me in my head.
Oh and Tom's racism is good too because he definitely has it but he tries to be respectful about it since he's a guest. I like you're handling. I'm definitely excited for more too.
I have a suspicion that Georg is going to be like the "villain" that gets them in trouble or whatever. We'll see though =]
(Also sorry my reviews are so scatter thought. I just try to get everything out while I remember what I want to say)
Date: 05/01/10 05:22 pm Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
I want to know what happened to tom!
Date: 05/01/10 01:38 pm Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
I am intrigued. And Old West! I used to love Old West stories um, longer ago than I care to disclose. I'm excited about this and where it's going.
Date: 05/01/10 01:33 pm Title: Waking Up Is Hard To Do
UPDATE!