Date: 05/10/10 02:58 pm Title: I Can Feel You Smirking From Here Tom
Welcome :D
Date: 05/09/10 10:15 am Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
real porn stars^^ I think they're just ill, they are real perverts. But I don'.t think I would hate to see that^^
That was very original, I really love it.
Author's Response: lol i don't think many people on this site would mind seeing it tbh. lol glad you thought it was original and good hun XD
Date: 05/09/10 09:54 am Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
wow! lol
This was amazing. Naughty boys. Such passion.
I thoroughly enjoyed this :D
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Maria
Author's Response: XD they are naughty boys lol but thanks for reading!
Date: 05/08/10 07:07 am Title: I Can Feel You Smirking From Here Tom
I dont normally respond to a response from a review because usually it's not necessary.. but once in a while........
I'd like you to know that I take time to think about what I'm writing when I leave a review for a fellow author, and have never tried to attack another THF author's works.
I simply write what I felt after I read it: if I felt there were problems I will point them out, and I'll also tell u what I liked. :) I promised myself that I'll always be honest, otherwise I don't see the point.
I'm sorry u thought I singled u out with my mediocre review. You're welcome to read other reviews I've left for other authors and you'll see a wide variety of comments.
I find it strange however to be given "advice" about proper review etiquette.
If someone told me that my writing style was amateur, I'd indeed be sad, but I'd know there was at least some truth, and then it would spur me on to try harder. I have no problem saying that I'm an amateur writer -it has nothing to do with it- We are what we are, and other ppl probably know it as well. Let's repeat: I, AS WELL AS MOST AUTHORS ON THIS SITE AM AN AMATEUR WRITER. Duh. Some amateur writers are just better than others, and some writing sounds more professional. It's up to each reader to decide.
And just because an author is published doesnt mean that someone out there doesnt think their writing stinks. lol.
I think I said it in my profile that I would hate it if I got 100 positive reviews when they didn't all think so.
-Ema
Date: 05/07/10 04:29 pm Title: I Can Feel You Smirking From Here Tom
sexy sexy^^ I'm not an exhibitionist sooo, I think it's pretty weird.... but it's still sexy sexy
Author's Response: haha funny thing? I'm not one either! lol I just love writing the twins as exhibitionists. thanks for reading hun!
Date: 05/05/10 08:58 pm Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
Jesus! I've always loved when they get caught and stuff, but damn this is so much better.. O.O
Author's Response: haha I know eh? It makes it so much better when its "authorities" that catch them eh? Thanks for reading hun XD
Date: 05/04/10 12:33 am Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
I started laughing out loud when they broadcasted their ...err.. 'love' to the entire school. xD I'm still holding in the laugh lulz. XDDD Dude.. that.. killed me.
Mmm.. so they're masochists? Hand cuffs.. har ha.r ^-~
This fic was sexy... and short.
Great < 3
Author's Response: lol this was actually a lot longer than it was supposed to be. It was supposed to be in one posting but the muses went apeshit and kept giving me ideas to make it longer. lol I wouldn't say mashochists persay... they just like bondage? lol and I agree it was sexy...XD
Date: 05/03/10 04:30 pm Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
I can't deny it.... I loved this. It was quite hot
Author's Response: lol you shameless trollup you! lol you just have a fettish for them as exhibitionists like I do! LOL good thing you liked it though Iggle!
Date: 05/03/10 03:51 pm Title: I Can Feel You Smirking From Here Tom
dude the new chapter was OH MY FREAKING GOD!!!! I was laughing so hard! I love it!!!
Author's Response: XD thanks hun!
Author's Response: XD thanks hun!
Date: 05/03/10 03:21 pm Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
*swallows thickly* I uhm.. Gimme a minute. *flushes and runs off for ice*
Author's Response: awe Mis really?! I have a bottle of water if you need it!
Date: 05/03/10 11:44 am Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
I love this ;)) but, hey, can u add more? its not a good way to end a good fic like this =)) Can we have more?
Author's Response: i'm shocked at how many people love this fic! like blown away! Not sure if I'm going to add more or not. Depends on my muses and how much they love me
Date: 05/03/10 11:03 am Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
Nooooo, I want more!! XD
Author's Response: XD this ones done but thanks for reading!
Date: 05/03/10 05:20 am Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
Oh god, this was just a pure WIN like you said! Holy shit xD Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm like insanely happy you think it's just as win as I do!
Date: 05/03/10 12:05 am Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
Ok, so the idea behind this story is pure genius!! Bill and Tom exhibitioning in school is super super sexy. However, the execution could have been better. The writing style is a bit amateur, there were random tense changes, there were typos, some parts felt like you started an idea but didnt finish it.... yeah, the writing could have been better. The images were great tho: Bill straddling Tom on a benchpress, 69ing in the library, and making out in a cop car... really hot. lol.
I think this needs another proof-reading, but I still liked it. :) Well done. I hope you'll write more stuff like this.
Author's Response: I’m glad you liked it. I really am. But this site isn’t one for professionals. Everyone on this website that posts their stories is an amateur so it should be obvious that the writing will sometimes seem like it. I agree that it could have been proof read more. I know there are mistakes in it. I didn’t beta read it myself like I normally do and neither did the girl I get to go over it a second time for me. I’m happy that you liked it and want me to do more stories like that but a small word of advice for the future? Don’t single one person out and call them an amateur when you yourself are one unless you’re a published writer of any kind or are an English professor. Many people won’t take it kindly and most won’t respond in a polite way like I’ve tried to do. It makes things easier for everyone in the long run. But thanks for reading XD
Date: 05/02/10 10:00 pm Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
Eeep! That was just.... GAH, I think I'm now a puddle XD
Author's Response: I'll take that GAH as a good thing and say YAY!
Date: 05/02/10 09:57 pm Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
OMG!!! so original i loved it :)
Love,
Ashley(formerly hummer07)
Author's Response: woot! glad you think it's original and loved it! XD
Date: 05/02/10 07:51 pm Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
OMG THIS WAS AMAZING TOMI!
Author's Response: XD danke Billa!!!!! I knew you'd like it! even though I didn't beta read it like at all before it got posted lol
Date: 05/02/10 07:12 pm Title: They'd Make The Perfect Porn Stars
lol oh my god that is pure win!!!! XD I effing love this!!
Author's Response: lol glad you think so hun
Date: 05/01/10 12:36 pm Title: What Are The Chains For?
Hahaha wow you really do like making them exhibitionists xD Can't wait for the next chapter! Sad that it's the last one.....but wait how they hell have they not gotten kicked out of school yet XD my school you get caught for PDA three times your suspended or expelled. XD
Author's Response: haha I have no idea how they haven't gotten kicked out yet but who knows how the next chapter will end? All I know is that I'm EXCITED EN MASSE for it. *squees*
Date: 05/01/10 05:10 am Title: What Are The Chains For?
Love it. xD
Author's Response: woot! thanks for reading hun!