Date: 04/19/26 09:18 pm Title: Taken
After a small hiatus I'm back finishing up my 'tracked stories' that I never got around to.... ok WOW this was a RIDE LOL... did NOT see [the original/first] ending happening. I enjoyed this fic and wanted to say thank you for writing and sharing it!
Author's Response: Hi Nightshaded! Thank you so much for your review and for finishing my story. It's nice to hear from a fan all these years later and I'm so glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 10/26/24 04:26 am Title: Shime Waza
” Bill guides Tom to lay down with him on the bed, so that they can embrace fully, curling up to each other like two orphaned possums in a basket, arms and legs entwined” Sooo adorable haha nawww 🥹 And I like this whole story very much, this is my second time reading it, I’m also a very detail loving writer and reader.. I love to set a scene as vividly and intensely as possible, also love to read it like that, helps my already vivid imagination to really get a movie going while I read 😍👌🏼
Author's Response: Hello Mllsblls! Thank you so much for your review! I am always so happy to hear from a loyal reader and the fact that you've read my story two times is amazing :) Haha, I am definitely big into details so I'm glad you appreciate them too. It's so nice to know people are still reading this fic even after all these years. Thank you <3
Date: 08/15/23 01:23 pm Title: Taken
Wow…. Where do I even begin! I’m not sure if you still visit this website at all, but I hope you do! I am stunned, amazed, giddy? I don’t even know all the words to use to describe how much I thoroughly enjoyed this book! Being a little late to the TH random I have so so many Tom/Bill books on my list to read. Originally I wasn’t planning on reading this book bc I’m a strictly no side character parings kinda girl, but I LOVED this! You have written such a deeply detailed OMC. Seriously! This could be a movie and I would watch it over and over again. You have such a way with words and your writing really allowed me to imagine the story like I was there watching everything unfold. I just finished ‘The End’ and I’m about to start reading the final few chapters. Please never stop writing!! You are so incredibly talented.
Author's Response: Hello Eldog333 and thank you! Yes, I still read reviews but I haven't gotten one for this story for 6 years so it was a lovely surprise! Haha, I would love this be turned into a movie and would watch the hell out of it all the time too :D I'm thrilled that you enjoyed my writing and the creation of my OMC, Koji. This story is quite special to me and I'm so happy that people are still discovering it after so long. And it is never too late to become a fan of TH! Unfortunately, I haven't written for many years since having my 2 children, who are both autistic. I just don't have the time. But I still do appreciate every word of the reviews I am given, especially from a new fan. There are tons of great stories on this site so happy reading! I hope you enjoy the last few chapters of my story - "Seven Years Later" part 1 and 2. "50 Years Later" is more of a comedy chapter but hopefully you like it too. Thank you so much for your review. It made my day!
Date: 12/21/17 12:14 pm Title: 50 Years Later
Really loved this. It was hilarious, but kind of sad too that they were all getting so old and decrepit. Love that Koji is now so linked to the twins that all 3 of them intend to go together. Thanks for writing this Christmas sequelights. Have a great time. Love Helen xx
Author's Response: Hey, I'm so happy you liked it! Yeah, I felt the same way when I finished writing this - a mix of amused and mildly depressed. As much as we don't want to think about it, one day the twins WILL be that old :P Needless to say, there won't be any further sequels...unless they all die and come back as zombies, which would be kind of cool LOL Thanks so much for your review and have a Happy New Year!
Date: 12/13/17 12:38 am Title: 50 Years Later
omfg i was almost screaming
Author's Response: Thanks for reading! :)
Date: 06/11/16 07:13 am Title: Taken
Hi Rina,
this ist an amazing story and I read it in a a very short time because I could’nt get enough from the boys and Koji. An I like the ending which I didn’t expect. But ist very nice and it's the right end fort he story.
My enlish ist not so good that i could discribe what I want to say – like I would do in german. But I can tell you that I love the story very much. You are an very talented writer. Thank you very much for that amazing story. I know how much time it takes to write and so I think you deserve a very great ‚THANK YOU‘!!!!
Angeleyes
Author's Response: Hello and thank you very much for your lovely review, Angeleyes! I get so excited when someone discovers a story of mine and reads it all at once because that means that I did a good job. Don't worry about your English - you don't need tons of words to make me happy; just that you loved it is enough for me! Thank you again for showing your appreciation for this story :)
Date: 02/19/16 09:36 pm Title: Seven Years Later, Part 2
I'd love to see more of Koji - you've given him such a strong, interesting voice. He could easily stand alone in a story without the twins (gasp! treason!). His thoughts have an intensity to them, even when he's just narrating minor details, like Tom's skin getting goosebumpy. This pov of an outsider on a B/T story has been quite interesting - I've enjoyed how the twins are secondary characters to Koji, and how he has such depth to him, which is mostly shown through his very intense obsession with the twins. It was his force of personality that wrapped the boys around his finger (or really, his dick), and they're used to being the Charisma du jour. Here comes someone with an even stronger persona, and even more confidence - how can they resist? They've probably never encountered this before. I am very curious about Koji, and how his inner turmoil has changed over the years. If I recall in the first part of the story, he was having some pretty huge issues about dealing with the loss of his twin, to the point of splitting his own persona to try to make up for the giant hole in his life. But analytically, I can suppose that he's just channeled all that into his obsession with the twins. Healthier, I guess....if only by a small amount. The relationship between the three of them is realistic enough (in this high fantasy world, but they live an incredibly fantastical life, so there is some modicum of believability here), which makes it easy to imagine. Koji's emperor-like personality (he never doubts for a second that he'll get everything he wants as though the universe owes it to him) sways the twins to his bidding, sweeping them along in the excitement of just being around someone so confident and powerful. It's fun to imagine this little threesome going on for years and years, and yet, even after seven, they still haven't done everything together. It's still new enough that Koji feels the need to explain (to himself) that Tom really does feel safe with him, even though he shows some tension. I really enjoyed picturing Bill as a voyer - a very easy to conjure image. And Tom wanting to give in to Koji, finally, yet still ever so slightly begrudgingly. Which Koji has fun with, making him beg for it and say he'd wanted it all along. Nice dominant/submissive touch thrown in so casually, like it's "no biggie," but obviously very important at the same time. I'm glad you sent me the email about these chapters, they were a delight to read, and I hope you're planning on writing a new story soon (and maybe starting one about Koji you could put on fictionpress??) Thanks again!
Author's Response: Hi mizu! Thanks so much for your lengthy review. I'm always thrilled when a reader likes Koji's character and thinks about what happened to him, or wants to see more of him. I created him out of thin air and he doesn't come with his own ready-made fan following like Bill & Tom do, so when someone like you says such great stuff about Koji it's just awesome! Yeah, he probably could have his own novel since so much has gone on in his life and he has such a cool job - it would be called 'Koji the Bounty Hunter.' LOL However, I haven't got any plans to write his memoir just yet. Maybe a new story, though! I'm happy you enjoyed those chapters and thank you once more for all your kind words :)
Date: 02/16/16 05:16 am Title: Seven Years Later, Part 2
I'm so sorry my review comes so late, honey. I haven't been well at all but this doesn't mean I didn't enjoy this chapter, every single bit of it!
Nutella, yeah! It doesn't scorch as melted chocolate XD and, what follows, is exactly what I was thinking about.
I love it that all the characters show the very same traits they had all along the story. Bill is veeery curious and eager to experiment everything. Tom is still sort of defiant, even though he enjoys the situation a lot. And Koji... is still our Koji: loving, caring and twisted.
It's great you mention the shameful incident of the necklace; who knows? Maybe there's really a Koji out there who protects the twins from weirdos..... *wicked smile*
The end is so sweet. It's love, just love.
Thanks to no end, my dear, precious friend. Love you.
Author's Response: Don't you even worry about it - your health and well-being is the priority here, not giving reviews! I'm glad you approve of the Nutella usage LOL Yeah, I tried to keep everyone in character as much as I could, while still showing growth on all their sides. After all, a lot of time has passed so they are bound to be a little different than they were. Oh, I wish so hard that there is a real life Koji protecting the twins! I mean, they do have bodyguards, right? *sighs wistfully* Again, I'm so happy that you liked this sequel as I wrote it just for you, and of course I love you too! <3 <3 <3
Date: 02/15/16 10:31 am Title: Seven Years Later, Part 2
I love how you've brought this story up-to-date, incorporating current details from the twins' life like Pumba and that so-called fan who punched Bill's necklace. The sex was super-hot. I loved Bill speaking for Tom, giving assent and telling Koji what to do. Bossy Bill...so funny. Loved Koji's teasing and tormenting Tom, and Tom's desperation to be filled. But I think most of all I loved that Koji is still in their life, that there's real love between them and that Koji isn't so alone any more. His love is clear in the amendment to the tattoo, ranking his feelings for Bill and Tom alongside those for his dead twin. This was a really great conclusion to the story...though I wouldn't complain at all if you decided to add to it. I do hope you're working on something else despite being a busy mum, I love reading your work. Hugs, Helen xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you enjoyed it and that their feelings for one another shone through. I don't have any ideas of how to continue this story at the moment, but if I do come up with a sequel to the sequel, you'll be one of the first to hear about it! However, I may have another fic in the works so keep an eye out :)
Date: 02/14/16 11:42 am Title: Seven Years Later, Part 2
Are you sure it's done? I don't want it to be done.
The ending is so sweet, you've captured the emotions so well. I love this weird relationship they are in, especially because it doesn't really feel weird at all. This is actually exactly where I would have pictured them to be years later.
I kind of hate you for ending this again though.
Author's Response: As much as I enjoyed bringing these characters briefly back to life again, I'm not sure where things could go from here if I kept writing... Sure, there would be more sex but I don't have any real ideas for a plot so at this stage, I don't know if I will keep going. If I think of something, I will be sure to let you know! Thanks so much for reading and leaving your reviews. :)
Date: 02/14/16 11:16 am Title: Seven Years Later
I can't thank you enough for writing this (and for notifying me, I hadn't even seen that you updated this!)
I absolutely love it and oh my God you're sucking me right back into my Koji addiction. I am not sure if that is such a great thing as I, still, often think of this story.
But hey, it's great and amazing and just perfect. It just fits, it's just right.
Don't you ever stop writing!
Author's Response: It's awesome that you still think of this story, and of Koji, months later! It's a rare thing to create an original character that is remembered so fondly, so thank you :)
Date: 12/15/15 04:48 am Title: Seven Years Later
I really can't thank you enough, my dear. You put yourself in this gift (your imagination, time, writing skills and dedication), making it a billion times worthier than anything you could have bought for me. Last but not least, it came when I was going through a lot and it was a confirmation that TRUE friendship exists!
I see a bit of anger in Koji, here – Tom is pretty tense when Koji mentions Bill, as if they really haven't kept in touch for a long time and Tom doesn't know anymore what to expect from their peculiar friend. Koji is the kind of person who keeps their promises and expects others to do the same, and apparently the twins didn't, hence his need to punish them (what a “punishment”, oh lordy! XD)
By every possible videos, interviews etc I've watched in the past, I've always frowned at fics portraying Bill as shamelessly lustful; it seemed totally out of character to me. Then I watched the video of “Love who loves you back” and the behavior he displays here makes perfect sense. I mean, it's a video and it doesn't forcibly mirrors his real life, but Bill-the-character doing as he pleases, without shame or restraints, finally fits great in a fiction! Not to mention that even a saint can lose his halo in a wink, when Koji is involved XD
I then love that, whatever bit of anger Koji might have harbored, it disappeared once he's close to the twin and sees they like his attentions as he likes theirs.
Again thank-you so, so much, honey *hugs*
Author's Response: Aw, you are very welcome! I'm so happy that you liked it and that you were glad to see the return of Koji. Even after 7 years, our favourite bad guy is still keeping a watchful eye on the twins, checking in with them when he hasn't heard from them for a while. And yes, dishing out 'punishment' when he sees fit! ;) As for Bill not being shamelessly lustful - hey, you never know how he would act in private! In public he would not do this, yes, I agree. But in the privacy of a hotel room he could be completely different to what you see in videos and interviews. With all due respect, you have not slept with Bill so you cannot possibly judge how much of a freak he is in bed! He's a guy, after all and he jokes about dicks and things almost as much as Tom XD People are very good at concealing their true selves, when it comes to things of a sexual nature. Most people like to keep that part of themselves private. I mean, take me for example. If you didn't know me and you met me for the first time, you would think I was a shy, quiet individual, even boring. You would just think I was a simple wife and mother. You would have no idea that I write twincest and graphic gay fiction. And you would have no clue about what wicked adventures I've gotten up to in hotel rooms (even though you DO know because I've told you) LOL I'm just saying, don't judge a book by its cover! It might be squeaky clean on the outside, but filthy underneath XD Anyways, I am glad you can at least picture Bill as being shameless in this fic, if not in real life. I tend to think that Koji brings out the lustful side of both the boys ;) Btw, I have not finished the next part of this fic, sorry, but I will let you know when I do. Thank you for your kind review and I'm thrilled that you liked my little birthday gift. You deserved it, darling <3
Date: 12/12/15 05:28 pm Title: Seven Years Later
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Just about to post another one :)
Date: 12/12/15 03:38 am Title: Seven Years Later
Wooooooooo!!! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: 12/12/15 01:35 am Title: Seven Years Later
I squeeeeeed when I saw this update (and I am way too old to be squealing like a teenager). So, so good. Thank you 😊 xx
Author's Response: Haha, I'm happy to still get that reaction out of you! Enjoy the next part, and thank you for reading :)
Date: 12/11/15 09:29 pm Title: Seven Years Later
Lol don't torture him too much.
Author's Response: Haha, poor Tom is in for a bit of torturing, as you'll see in the new chapter!
Date: 06/18/15 03:27 pm Title: 12 Months Later
Thanks,I really enjoyed reading this.
Author's Response: No problems - thank you for commenting! Glad you liked it :)
Date: 03/08/15 11:20 pm Title: The End
Now that I have had time to digest this, I have more to say. I really enjoyed all the twists in this. I loved how developed of a character you made Koji. Your ability to create him elevates you from beyond 'just a fan fic writer' (not to disparage fanfic writers) to a Writer. Do you write original fic in real life? If you do I'd love to read it. Thank you again for your dedication to this story, it's so sad when ppl don't finish them. I look forward to reading whatever you write next.
Author's Response: Hey, thank you for the extra review! I'm very flattered by your praise :) I don't really have any original fic you could read but I do have other stories posted in other fandoms on the official Adult Fanfiction site if you were interested - stuff like Harry Potter/Ron Weasley slash, some Angel slash fanfic (the Buffy TV spinoff series) as well as fics for a few movies I like. I'm on there as pen name Rina76 if you search for me, or just go to the Celebrity Fiction section and look under Singers/Bands/Musicians, then Tokio Hotel and you will find me! I have started posting a new story there and here as well, called Improvisation, which is Torg. Please check it out and I hope you like it! Thanks again :)
Date: 03/07/15 03:35 am Title: The End
Congratulations on finishing this, it's exquisite. You did such a fabulous job and I love it. Thank you so much.
Author's Response: Thank you for all your reviews over the course of this fic! I'm so happy you enjoyed it right up to the end. Thanks again :)
Date: 03/07/15 03:26 am Title: Confessions and Apologies
Oh my god I love this!!
Author's Response: :)