Date: 09/12/14 11:52 am Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 2
gaaaaaahhhhh
Author's Response: I hope that means it was a good chapter! ;)
Date: 09/07/14 10:53 pm Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 2
First, YAY I have finally caught up to this point after trying to for a month! Secondly, I really enjoy this story. I always get excited when it's updated because I can't wait to see what happens.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, there are a ton of chapters so I'm glad you are up to date now and can enjoy it along with everyone else :)
Date: 09/07/14 06:14 pm Title: Taken
Hey! Sorry i don't think i've been as active in reviewing lately, i've been a little busy. Anyway, I'm getting anxious for the end of this story...I don't know what I'll do when it ends D: Please tell me you'll write another! But this chapter was so...hot! I love the bill/tom pairing so much, they're so cute together :) Also I really hope Koji doesn't die, but i don't know what would happen between him and the twins if they get out and Koji is still around, would they be friends? Or never speak again? What about the connection Bill and Koji had? Or was it just stockholm syndrome (i hope i spelled that right) IM ASKING SO MANY QUESTIONS sorry I'll leave you alone now xD I just wanted to say fantastic chapter, you have me on the edge of my seat waiting for the next one!
Author's Response: Hi, Brooke172! Lovely to hear from you again. You will get answers to most of your questions in the next couple of chapters so please stick around! Thanks for your review :)
Date: 09/07/14 02:29 am Title: The Awful Truth
I think that Koji just is scytzifrenic. It was confusing at first but I think I understand.
Koji thinks is Brother is speaking through him and he has a split personality. When It says keichi it is the aulter ego?
Author's Response: You are correct; there is only one person actually there and that's Koji. When it says Keiichi speaking it's just Koji, acting out the part of his brother. He's a very ill man!
Date: 09/04/14 07:18 am Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 2
For the first time ever, I've mixed feelings about a chapter and I hope I can explain at my best the reason why.
First, I want to point out that some details - Tom being completely conscious of what he's doing and him admitting that, so far, he's been fighting back his feelings not to let Koji wins – express perfectly that they're not having sex for the the sake of sex itself; it's just natural consequence of their deep, true love as the meaning of twc should always be.
Unfortunately, though, I also think that the description of twincest is there because this is what it's expected from a twc ff. I perceive this story (novel, I'd say) more about Koji instead; everything happens because of him and everything is caused by what he thinks and does. Twincest is his goal, yes, but in my personal opinion it's only a collateral consequence of his actions, not the main subject. The part of this chapter I love best is what he feels when watching his monitor; it made me emotional once again, as it happened many times before.
Maybe I'm too partial to Koji because it's the best original character I've ever encountered in a ff and his complexity is so well described that he's like a real person. His pain, his loss, what he's experienced in the past is the pivot of the story more than the twins themselves.
I really hope I managed to make it clear that mine is not a detraction but only a personal opinion based on what I felt as I was reading.
Author's Response: We've already spoken about this chapter privately but I just wanted to say that you're awesome and I love you for loving Koji so much!! He truly would be touched that you care for him so deeply <3
Date: 09/02/14 09:50 pm Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 2
I have been following this story since it started and it's one of my favorites. I was a little worried that you were going to kill off one of the twins and I'm glad that this is not the case.
Author's Response: Hey, nice to meet you and thanks for your comments!
Date: 09/02/14 08:32 pm Title: Taken
Making more sense now, Rina! Happy as a clam. Interested to see if Koji lives or dies. Very happy that you aren't going to kill the twins (Though i figured you wouldn't...)
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you like the next couple of chapters too :)
Date: 09/02/14 03:52 pm Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 2
Ooooh snap. Is this it, are we finally coming into the station? (I know Tom is...xD) I'd love to see a bit of what life is like outside, but I'm thinking we wont get that and that's okay. :)
Author's Response: Hello again! You will get to see a little of the outside world in future chapters so you can look forward to that :)
Date: 09/02/14 08:57 am Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 2
Hiii! I'm writing this from my phone so I apologize for the short length of this review, but I thought I'd leave you a little something for all of your hard work!
I love this! Everything is fluff, passion and love, I am such a happy reader/reviewer right now, you have no idea.
I absolutely adore how you've portrayed their relationship with one another. I just love the depth you've gone into to describe their connection and bond, it's so realistic and it's as if I can feel it too? The smut was written to perfection, they didn't have sex for the sake of having sex, they had sex to be connected to each other on a deeper level and you made that so blatantly obvious. It wasn't just about being physically close to one another, it was more about being emotionally and mentally ONE with each other and fucking hell, you've put a shit ton of effort into these two latest Chapters to portray that. I don't know how you did it, but you absolutely nailed it, you really did and my mind has been officially blown.
I'm so glad that you've mentioned that Koji isn't going to kill them because I started to panic. I hate haTE HATE being caught off guard with those unexpected Major Character Deaths (especially when a writer doesn't put out an immediate warning for that and BOOM it appears half way through the story), so I'm happy you've cleared that up. HOWEVER I AM SO SAD RIGHT NOW. This is going to end soon, right? I don't want it to! But I am so happy that Bill and Tom are on the same level with each other now and have given in to what they both secretly wanted.
This is amazing and I can't wait for another update! < 3 xxxxx
Author's Response: Aw, I'm so happy you liked the last 2 chapters. I did put a lot of work into them so thank you for noticing! Their bond is much more important than sex so I'm glad I got that across. And yeah, there are only a couple of chapters to go... I will be sad when it ends too :(
Date: 09/02/14 02:48 am Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 2
Sooo beautiful!!!
But I still laugh Bill's words about mess after their first sex :DDD
Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah, he's a drama queen :)
Date: 09/02/14 01:10 am Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 2
That was do good! Just perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Date: 08/30/14 08:49 pm Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 1
beautifully done - excellent. thank you.
Author's Response: Hello! Thanks so much for your kind words. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 08/26/14 06:02 am Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 1
Just dropping you a line to say; I'm still reading! ;)
Author's Response: Yay, thanks! :)
Date: 08/25/14 12:21 pm Title: Pull
That was perfect. So many stories I've read have the boys suddenly jumping into bed, like a switch was flipped. I'm glad to see Tom is still reluctant to take things further.
Author's Response: Thank you! If people are after a story where the twins have sex day after day, this isn't that story. It will take a while for them to get together but it's worth it in the end :)
Date: 08/22/14 02:53 pm Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 1
Warning: please don't even think I'm biased because I'm not.
The first part of the chapter is fast-paced and so realistic I could see Tom going into a frenzy out of terror. He says what anybody would say in such a situation although Bill knows better. It's pointless to fret over something you can't control; what could they do in case Koji decides to kill them?
Bill's set of mind is perfect and also psychologically accurate. It's proven that in time of war, natural disasters or other horrible occurrences, sex drive skyrockets (it may be part of the basic nature of mankind to carry on the species) so it's not strange at all that he wants to make love to his brother exactly in the moment they have no certainty about their lives. The mutual love is already there, the circumstance is perfect.
The conversation they have before sex is so sweet and moving! It sums up all the love they share, the way they see life and death, the impossibility to survive without the other one... It affected me in a way that's impossible to put into words. Plus, the topics they talk about, have lots of references to their song and I love the mix of completely fictional and tue facts.
As for the rest, it's one of the sweetest twc description I've ever read. There's only love, respect and heartbreaking (in a good way) feelings. I've also noticed HOW they have sex; it's different from the stereotypical descriptions I've come across through the years. Here it's natural :)
Just a last thing. This [quote]: “their mouths automatically opening to each other like thirsty children standing in the rain” is poetry
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much, My Immortal! I can always count on you to give an in-depth review that explains exactly what I'm trying to portray here. I am happy you understand why Bill wants to make love at that time, when Tom doesn't (initially) and I'm glad their conversation beforehand wasn't too cheesy. I think that's the best way to write a convincing story: mix true facts with ones you make up! Seems to work well. Also, I always try to write sex scenes that are different from the norm so don't worry, Bill's prostate is not going to even get a mention here ;) Thanks again for your faithful understanding and support! <3
Date: 08/22/14 10:19 am Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 1
It was beautiful chapter! Please, don't let them die!!!
Author's Response: I won't let the boys die, I promise! Thank you for commenting :)
Date: 08/22/14 09:43 am Title: Last Night on Earth - Part 1
Awww, I really hope Kookoo Koju doesn't kill them. They're so cute together! Thank you for posting! This was an emotional one xD
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't fear - I will not kill off the twins :)
Date: 08/11/14 01:50 pm Title: Taken
Dear author,
Pleased to meet you too! I just wanted to send you a second review to give you huge kudos for replying to me, even though this chapter confused me. I do intend to 'hang on for the ride', as it were, as i've been doing so for the last year. Hope your little one is healthy and your muses stay ever strong. Ealasaida.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm about to post a new chapter so I hope you like this one :)
Date: 08/02/14 02:36 am Title: Reunion
And another is not a hooked legs but a Hook Kick... I am more than likely going to correct these... Not that you have to do anything about it, you can just delete my comments
Author's Response: Like I said, good to know! And I will actually change it just for you :)
Date: 08/02/14 02:34 am Title: Reunion
I'm sorry, I just have to say it, although the story is AMAZING and it keeps me on the edge of my seat, being a matual artist I would apreshiate it if you would use the proper terms. It is not called a Karote Chop, the form of strike He most likely used was a Vertical Knife Hand. You don't have to change it, but it is slightly insulting to the matual arts when a user of the technique dosn't use the right term.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for your feedback! As I'm not a martial artist, I did not know this and I was certainly not trying to offend anyone. I'm just using terms that 99% of my readers would understand. I don't mind changing things if I'm wrong but if I changed it to a Vertical Knife Hand, most people would not know what that is so I'd still have to explain it in layman's terms anyway. I actually got help with those parts from my husband who is a security guard with hand to hand self defence training but they don't use the correct terms either as it's not proper martial arts he was trained in. Good to know though, so thank you for pointing it out! And I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)