Mmm... I like the idea. :D Kidnapping is awesome! In fiction of course....

Though, I usually don't like first person but this is fine. Mm, the random explantations could do without. Also, the German and English in one sentence is a bit off. As in... ie: "Wir sind really cool" Either all German, or all English. Just saying. Please don't get offended. *hides*

Buuuuttt positive thinking :O
I can't wait for Tom to come, and I like how you're portraying Bill. I like his personality, how it's weak and childish. I find that .. erm, lovable. XP

This such an interesting dream though. I'd wake up and feel off lulz.

Good job. And KUDOS KUDOS KUDOSSSSS for long chapter! :D Long is GOOD!

Author's Response: Thank you very much for all your comments and feedback! Kidnapping does make for a handy story idea, that's for sure. Which random explanations are you meaning? I must warn you now that I'm a very, very descriptive writer which means I tend to perhaps over-describe things or over-explain things, or add too much thought or detail into my work. Some people like that and some don't but it's just my style, just how I write. (It's also why my chapters are so long!) As I'm writing from the kidnapper's POV I'm also at liberty to have his thoughts explained, and show how he sees Bill, from his own eyes. I may state some random facts that you already know about Bill but Koji isn't a long-time fan and therefore all this stuff he's only just learnt and finds it highly interesting and new. I'm also keeping in mind the readers who aren't that familiar with Tokio Hotel and don't know everything about them yet, just so they can enjoy the story too. Anything to help spread awareness of the band and the hotness of Bill! ^^ Okay, I won't mix German and English anymore - I understand what you mean. I'm glad you like how I'm writing Bill but he's going to be tougher than he seems now and I can't wait for your reaction when Tom shows up! Thanks again :)

Koji, J-ROCKER? looks familiar ^^. Kidnapper POV, interesting. Havent read one of those before and they way that this story is going, first chapter. Its pretty interesting =D. I likes all the detail you have into this chapter ^_^. Think you can put the German speaking in translation at the end of the chapter^^? dont know what they mean ^^::

Author's Response: Ah, you got me! ;) (For everyone who doesn't know, the pic of Koji is actually of a J-rocker called Atsushi Sakurai and he is the singer from the band Buck-Tick. That pic was from like 20 years ago or something but it's how I envision Koji to look now. Only scarier. XD) Btw, I have edited this chapter to put the English translation next to the German bits so everyone can understand what they are saying. As for the song lyrics, you can find them everywhere. I will be using "Ja" (yes), "Nein" (no), "Gott" (God), Bruder (brother) and "Scheisse" (shit) quite a bit in this fic, just because they sound cooler in German. ^^ Thank you for reading the first chapter of my fic and I do hope the next one keeps you just as interested, if not more so!