Date: 12/06/10 08:00 am Title: Taken
Great storyy ^_^
I like it .. and i'm waiting for the next
i'm wondering what this guy wants from the boys
i'm starting to think that he wants them to have sex together to be in love with each other? to show him their feelings?
what does he wants exactly :S?
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, Narcissa - I'm so sorry I haven't replied to your review yet! I always like to respond to anyone who takes the time to leave me comments on Captivation and somehow I missed this one. >.< Forgive me! I give you belated thanks for your remarks and am glad you enjoyed the first chapter. Not sure if you've kept reading but if you have, your questions have already been answered in Chapter 5. And you were right on the money. That is exactly what Koji wants from them! But it may not be as easy as he thinks to convince the boys... Thank you so much again and sorry for the late, late reply!
Date: 12/06/10 03:27 am Title: Shime Waza
Thanks for the update, I'm just looking forward to more! =)
Author's Response: Well, thank you for reading! More will be coming soon.
Date: 11/27/10 12:25 pm Title: Reunion
omg, I like really want to read the next chapter right now!!
Author's Response: Well, I've just posted it so that should make you happy! :)
Date: 11/02/10 02:08 pm Title: Reunion
I want to read more! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it! More will be on its way...
Date: 10/08/10 01:46 am Title: Taken
This is a really interesting psychological horror-esque type of tale, and very well written too. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to seeing where it goes.
Zoinks, that must have been some dream!
Author's Response: Haha, yes, it was an awesome dream indeed!! Thank you so very much for your compliments and for taking the time to leave a review. I'm happy you are enjoying it as I put a lot of work into each chapter so it's nice to be appreciated :)
Date: 10/08/10 01:15 am Title: Reunion
updateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdateupdate..... that's all.
Author's Response: Why do you want me to update so much? Do you like the story or something? haha XD Thanks!
Date: 10/02/10 03:35 am Title: Reunion
This is very interesting. So far i do like having this point of view, but i can't be sure i wont want it from the boys at some point. Love the story though, keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you. There are many fics around from the boys' perspective but I like writing from an outsider's point of view. Looking in on them, observing in silence. It might be creepy but it's also fascinating watching how people react when they think nobody is watching. You'll soon see how the boys feel anyway. They both have strong personalities and they'll make it known quite clearly!
Date: 09/29/10 10:51 pm Title: Reunion
Wow Tomi is a little crazy too ;) I don't know if I would not have done that as well. I mean they are twins and Bill is more to Tom than just his brother, the same the other way too. Kolji is annoingly calm and I'm not sure why that make him more creepy. I'm just glad the twins are at least together now but i'm worried for what will happen next.
Author's Response: Yes, having your twin stolen from you would make you crazy as hell! Haha, I agree. Koji is TOO calm sometimes but this may not always be the case - maybe Bill and Tom can band together and rattle him somehow... Thank you so much for reviewing! (and you shouldn't worry so much. I promise I won't hurt either of them!)
Date: 09/29/10 04:02 pm Title: Reunion
Haha, hey Rina, didn't know you were posting on here. I'm impressed with this chapter as I knew I would be. Mr. Kidnapper is as charming and devious as always. And I think everyone here would be guilty of staring too long and too hard at Tom's chest should the opportunity present itself *grins*
I think it's very cute that Tom thought Koji was so much of an amateur that he thought he could catch him off guard with a gun. That would be, potentially, the first pre-emptive strike you'd anticipate.
I felt my whole heart swell when Tom and Bill finally got to eachother again. It may have been just a hug, but it didn't read as one. It read as an epic reunion afte years of seperation, not just days. I am anxious to read more. The big question on my mind now is, now that he has them, what will he do with them?
Author's Response: Thank you, Luna! We'll get to see much more of Tom's chest - I'll make sure of it!! ;) Yes, Tom didn't really think that through properly. Too busy missing his lil bro. But yay, they are back together again! I'm glad I was able to get the strength of their emotional embrace across. Now, what will big bad Mr Kidnapper do next? Well, play with them like little mice in a cage, of course... *smirks*
Date: 09/29/10 11:32 am Title: Reunion
it is really god, I like this story, keep updating :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Please keep reading! :)
Date: 08/02/10 08:56 pm Title: Resistance
UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE!!!!!!
Author's Response: I HAAAAAAAAVVVE!!!
Date: 06/13/10 11:11 pm Title: Resistance
OMG! This is fantastic!! More! Sooner!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm happy you're enjoying it and am working on the next part ^^
Date: 05/27/10 06:57 pm Title: Resistance
So... This guy keeps saying he's not sick but he wants to watch Bill and Tom have sex? That seems a bit sick to me. I can't imagine that. I'm curious to see what happens when and if Tom is brought to the room Bill is held in but why do I think this guy won't make it that easy. I was not shocked when Bill kept trying to get away. I can't blame him no matter what this mans intentions are I would want nothing more than to get away either. Bill is brave and mentally strong but I'm still very worried for him.
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, Koji may not be /entirely/ healthy in the mind but hey, neither are we. We would like to watch Bill and Tom have sex too, or we wouldn't be on this site! So, I guess we're ALL a little sick in a way... ;) Yes, Bill is being very brave but he needs his brother's strength. Thank you for sharing your concerns and I do hope you'll like the next chapter.
Date: 05/27/10 04:05 pm Title: Resistance
Wow, just WOW!! I enjoy reading your writing..reading a story that is detailed always makes it better and you are wonderful at explaining all the ins and outs of Koiji! It makes for a Fantastic read!!! I can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response: Oh, I'm thrilled that you love reading about Koji! I love writing about him. And the boys too, of course. ;) In all their wonderful detail! Thank you so much ^^
Date: 05/26/10 11:05 pm Title: Resistance
ugh...dont tell me crazy Koiji wants to see some twincest =B..hehehe..I LOVE IT!!!!...thats right Bill doesnt like to be told what to do...defiance Bill is really hot....and sad to say that when hes pissed....Bill is really effin adorable =P...man awesome chapter...attitude Bill, defiance Bill, make it or break it Bill...so good....and Koji not taking any of it...YEA!...what....so Koji wants to take Tom too @_@! NO!....and NO! dont mess with Bills face...NO SLAPPIN!....
on another note... KOJI...no wonder he kinda looked familiar....BUCK-TICK....should have known ^^a....cause i so love 'DRESS'..
awesome LONG CHAPTER which i effin LOVE!...and i cant wait to see whats in the next chapter ^_^
Author's Response: Uh huh, crazy Koji just /might/ want to see some twincest. But don't we all? ;) Oh yeah, I love seeing Bill angry and sulking. The rock star attitude just does it for me! Don't worry, I won't make Koji hit poor pretty Bill's face any more. I don't want to see it damaged either! And of course he wants to take Tom too. Can't have a story without Tom! You know Atsushi? Isn't he gorgeous? *sigh* Thank you ever so much for reviewing and I shall keep working on the next part for you!
Date: 05/26/10 02:59 pm Title: Taken
i think that this will be the best th storie i ever read.cant wait to read more
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so sorry I never responded to your review! I thought I had...But thank you so very much for commenting and I hope you got a chance to read the newer chapters. Tom is finally in it and has been reunited with Bill, while Mr Kidnapper keeps plotting and planning what he's going to do with them...
Date: 05/26/10 01:58 pm Title: Taken
"soon" in TH-content means "almost never". In 2009 this word was used A LOT and it usually meant said event wouldnīt happen in the near future and would get postponed again and again. It ended being an inside joke eventually. Therefore Iīm glad your soon is not the "soon" TH use ;-)
OK, chapter no 2: This goes exactly where I thought youīd take it. He wants to get Tom there too, so that he can see Billīs gratitude. And he kinda wants to make them a couple.
This is going to be fun. But isnīt he afraid he will get overwhelmed? I mean 2 guys with 4 hands surely can make their way out, even if heīs stronger. But maybe once he gets Tom there, heīll leave them completely alone and just watches?
ow.. I want to find out... canīt wait for the next update :}
Author's Response: Hey, Starlight! I just realised I never responded to your review back in like, May, and I'm terribly sorry - I always try to reply to everyone's comments but I somehow missed you. :( Thank you for explaining what TH "soon" means! XD I am afraid that there will be waits between updates, unfortunately. I'm just not able to update every week, much as I'd love to. But I do have around 20 chapters planned so please bear with me while I'm working on this fic and don't ever think I've quit it because I definitely won't do that! I just have a life that demands too much of my time. *sigh* Anyway, thank you very much for your comments and I hope you have been able to read the new chapter, where Tom shows up and joins the story. You are right about what the kidnapper wants. Just what we all want - to get the boys together in a coupley way! And maybe he IS a bit of a watcher... ;) Thanks again. Hope to hear from you soon and take care. :)
Date: 05/22/10 01:13 pm Title: Taken
yes, itīs me from LJ :]
I hope you continue this soooon (but pls not the "soon" in TH-context) ;)
Author's Response: Ah, I thought so! rnrnUm, I'm not sure what that comment means...*feels dumb* But anyway, keep an eye out because I will be posting the next chapter in a day or two!
Date: 05/08/10 05:30 am Title: Taken
Iīm staaaaaalking you O.o
Awesome fic of course, love all the little details (as I might have mentioned already XD) and boy do I want such a bunker with my own personal bishie *cough*
Author's Response: Haha, yes you are! But I don't mind because it's you and not some creepy old guy. ^^rnrnThank you for your support, darling. *huggles* And hell yeah, so would I! Maybe I'll build one beneath my mansion when I become a rich, famous writer and I'll keep it stuffed full of bishies and let you go play with them whenever you want. XDD
Date: 05/01/10 02:26 pm Title: Taken
A really intersting read. Iīm glad you posted it here too ^__^
I think Koji is doing a sociological experiment with Bill. I hope you update sooon.... *__*
Author's Response: Are you Starshine on lj? If so, I'll thank you again for your advice and interest! I'm glad I posted it here too. :)rnrnAs for what Koji is doing...it very well could be an experiment. Exactly what kind...I can't say yet. ;)