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Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/12 08:17 am Title: Pressure Point

Hahaha xD Bill's so sweet! Perfect brother.. but, do the others - Georg, Gustav... Ect - know they're gone?

Author's Response: I imagine the G's have noticed the twins' disappearance by now but as it is not their story, I will not focus on Georg or Gustav at all. I can't focus on them as this is all seen through Koji's eyes, not theirs. It's just about Bill, Tom and their mysterious abductor! Hope that's enough for you and thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/28/12 02:57 am Title: Pressure Point

At first I was furious that Koji got a go first at Bill. I imagined he'd appreciate that Tom was the first who had any go at Bill. That the twins would take each step together. But his plan backfired and I can appreciate that it got out of control. Still, I think he shouldn't have let Bill do it.
But afterwards, I can see that Bill actually showed some balls none of them knew he possessed. So that was actually rather cool. I felt tremendously for Tom's state of mind afterwards. He was really in shock, but luckily he has Bill to lean on because Bill is now the stronger one :) Very thrilling chapter!

*huggles*

Author's Response: Yeah, that was the point of the chapter. To show that Koji is not always in control of himself (especially where Bill is concerned) and to show that Bill is much ballsier than people think! Tom is definitely in shock and will need Bill to get through this. Like it or hate it, at least Koji has shaken things up between the twins and allowed room for more stuff to happen. Thanks for reviewing, Maria! *huggles back*

Reviewer: Kiseki123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/12 12:12 am Title: Makeup

I love you. I really do.
Am I the only one who would love to see Tom in makeup? I mean I know he and bill are twins, but I feel like it would just be so glorious.
I can't even get over how you characterize the twins in this, it's just so perfect and wonderful and I just can't!
Koji is the greatest person ever, I don't know why people don't like him, honestly. I'll never stop saying how much I love this story! Thanks so much for the update!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I love you too! *hugs* I love anyone who gives such awesome feedback. You like Koji? *squees every time I hear that* I know he's not an easy character to like simply because of what he's doing to the boys so if you can see past the crazy to the damaged, vulnerable person inside of him, you get extra points from me ^^ And you're definitely not the only one who wants to see Tom in makeup! I actually did a little dabbling in Photoshop(I'm just a beginner, really) so if you would like to see my version of Tom in green Egyptian eyeshadow after Bill got done with him, check this out (hope the link works): http://s760.photobucket.com/albums/xx243/Rina762003/Koji/?action=view¤t=TomEyeshadow.jpg If you can't see it, message me and I'll send it to you :)

Reviewer: eley Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/12 02:48 pm Title: Makeup

X''D OMG OMG I swear I thought Tom would have been the one to make the move first but nope Bill is all out >.< hahahah I LOVE IT!! Koji is insane but I love it >:D

Author's Response: Yeah, Bill is surprising everyone with his boldness! Just because he's the youngest doesn't mean he hasn't got guts. Or balls. Or both. And Koji may be insane but if it wasn't for him, this whole story wouldn't even exist! ;) Thank you, my dear!

Reviewer: Gol1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/15/12 09:59 am Title: Taken

I f*ckin love this story

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I never get tired of hearing that :D

Reviewer: Maxximonster Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/13/12 07:31 am Title: Makeup

Awwe thats the END?! :( thats a GREAT STORY but i was hoping there would be more... you know...STUFF ;) lol sigh i still loved it.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! There will be STUFF in the next chapter (of a kind) and the story is nowhere near being finished yet so stick around!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/11/12 04:36 am Title: Makeup

Ah, the Peters twins, yes? he he...oh man. CLIFFHANGERRRRR. wanting Bill and not wanting Tom...almost there....aaaaaaaaaah!! but but Tom already thinks Bill is hot sooooo...I smell breakdown on the horizon. though, I doubt Tom would let it get much farther than kissing or making out without another flip out, once they get there...hmm. WANT D:

Author's Response: Yes, the Peters twins! I think they're pretty amazing in what they do and how brave they are. Haha, you're right - if Tom let anything happen with Bill he would flip out big time. But that's part of the fun! ;) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/10/12 04:02 am Title: Makeup

Wooo, they kissed! Well.... Bill kissed Tom, but that something xD. Good idea, with that porn video, and those twins in dr porn :)) it would be awesome to ser Bill ànd Tom with makeup in reality. They would look so much alike! Or both without makeup, than you would also see how much they look alike

Author's Response: Yes, a kiss is still a kiss, no matter who gives it! ;) Hopefully the porn inspires them to do other things too... And hey, if you wanna see Bill without makeup, there are plenty of clips on youtube of that; just search "Bill Kaulitz no makeup". He looks really lovely without it, and much younger too! Very much like Tom. Also, there are ones with Tom in eyeliner but they are fake. Still, worth a look because damn...he's hot!!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/29/12 08:02 am Title: Push

I feel really bad at the moment.. I haven't reviewed! :( But I still think that this is, again, a nice chapter. Olso because I wanted to read the sequel so long xp But that's mostly my fault, cus I didn't know you had updated again. (sry for my bad English, I'm workin on it xD) Thanks for updating!

Author's Response: Aw, don't feel bad - you reviewed now!! I didn't even notice that you hadn't because I don't keep count of who comments and who doesn't. I'm grateful for any reviews I get so thank you very much and I'm really happy you liked it! :) PS. Where are you from? Your English is fine!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/12 04:40 am Title: Push

Loved this! I love that Tom was able to express his feelings clearly. I also love hoe he and Bill can be so sweet to each other and then turn around and bicker and call each other names. Its so normal.

Interesting blog. Not sure how I feel about it. I mean, I read stories here obviously, and I also am a product of the society and religion I grew up in. I am pretty open minded, and certainly enjoy learning new things.

Thanks for the updates. I think you handle a controversial topic well. I look forward to more. =)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your compliments! Yeah, normal brothers do shit like that all the time. I want to show both sides of their relationship, good and bad. As for the GSA blog...It IS a controversial topic and everyone has strong opinions about it. I personally don't agree with parent/child sexual relationships but I can see how it could happen, especially if they have not known each other for most of their lives. It would seem like meeting a complete stranger, not a parent. But that kind of relationship could be highly damaging in some instances and could cause a lot of negative issues. However, I truly do think that twin relationships are special, though, and it really doesn't bother me if they're in love with each other. There's no greater match! I'm not saying ALL twins should be in love or have sex, but if they are/do, good for them. I hope they're happy. Just as I hope Bill and Tom are happy, no matter who they're with! Thanks again!

Reviewer: violet_star77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/12 04:13 am Title: Pull

I had major deja vu reading this chapter. particularly the part where tom is soothing bill's fears/ego. Don't know if i read this already and forgot to review, or what. Love the very end, super sweet. They are so tender with each other. I am super excited to have another chapter to read too!

Author's Response: Haha, you probably DID read it and forgot to review. That's okay, at least you're doing so now! Glad you liked this one. I love writing bits where the boys are sweet with each other. So cute!! Wish we could see stuff like that in real life. Even if we never see twincest, I'd just love to see Tom give Bill a nice, long, affectionate hug ^^

Reviewer: tearsofaclown Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/12 09:27 pm Title: Taken

Oh my fucking god, this story is genius. I love that you put so much thought and research into the planning/writing of this story. I love the plot, the characters (AF LJEKWA JFLKDJ KOJI!) and the writing is just absolutely a-fucking-amazing so here *have a shit ton of chocolate strawberries and hot fries*

Author's Response: Oh, yum! *scarfs down fattening food-gifts* Thank you very much for your cool comments. I'm happy when somebody notices my hard work! :)

Reviewer: eley Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/12 02:23 pm Title: Push

awwwwwwwwww >.< kyaaaaaaaaa!!!! Tomi ='3 soo cute hehehhe I absolutely love this story it always gets me going :D

Author's Response: Thank you!! Tomi's adorable, isn't he? Even when he's being a stubborn little shit XD

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/12 01:56 am Title: Push

Tom is such an ass lol. Bill is cute and he is pretty :) It's funny because when I first saw Bill I thought his name would be more exciting or something.... Like maybe a more exotic name, just not Bill.

Koji has a point about Tom needing to let Bill know how he really feels and to not be afread to show him afection even in front of others. I still would feel like Tom as well. Brothers and Sisters are not supposed to feel sexually attracted to eachother although I have seen it first hand. I'm not totally against it however, It is a little odd. You can't help who you love though. It just sort of...Is.

Author's Response: Omg, me too! XDD I was shocked when I found out Bill was his name. I was expecting something...else. Something younger and cooler. Like Zane or Blayze. To me, Bill is an old man's name but now I have grown to associate it with him and his pretty face ^^ Yeah, Tom can bit a bit of an ass but he's making progress. And true, you love who you love. Tom will come to realise that eventually. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 05:47 pm Title: Push

loved the update!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! ^^

Reviewer: Kiseki123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/12 05:42 pm Title: Push

This story. God I love it! The GSA stuff was really interesting! Thanks for the update!
The twins are so cute!
And I adore Koji!

Author's Response: Yeah, I find the whole concept of GSA just fascinating. It actually happens in real life so this plot is plausible. Oh, you like Koji? Yay! I love it when he gets fans of his own :D Thanks for reading my story!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 06:02 pm Title: Pull

aaaaaaaaaaaw!!! and kisssss, omggg, koji should throw them some vodka or something to get the ball rolling ;P though they'd be able to act like they didn't mean it, then...hmm

Author's Response: Yeah, that's the problem with alcohol. It might make things happen but then there's the hangovers and the regret and the excuses... Would it really help them to get closer or would it just put them one step further backwards? Food for thought!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 05:28 pm Title: Dream

ooh, please do. me and this story are like bill and cigarettes. i'm gonna get antsy and frustrated by my withdrawels xD especially now that we're starting to get somewehre...;)

Author's Response: Haha, oh it's getting somewhere! The pace will pick up very soon, I promise!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 03:54 pm Title: Family Feud

aaaaaahhhhh, your little parting lines make me so anxious and excited. it's like it just peacefully comes to a stop and then you throw out a million possibilities, like a roller coaster with a drop when you think it's over xD

Author's Response: Yes, there are many ways this story could go and many paths it could take so I like to make you think about them!!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/12 05:26 am Title: Revelation

dun dun DUNNNNNNN :0

Author's Response: Heh, that chapter was a bit dramatic, wasn't it? :P

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