Date: 10/18/12 02:56 pm Title: Pressure Point
that's a strong boy Bill, now we can see that actually Tom is weaker than Bill. I loove the progress in this chapter, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: You're correct; Bill is the stronger one indeed! Hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters where you see more of Bill's strength! Thank you :)
Date: 10/18/12 02:44 pm Title: Aftermath
Tom and Bill! I want to see Tom make progress :-D
Author's Response: Oh, he will. But very, very slowly... ;) Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/18/12 12:07 pm Title: Aftermath
OMGGG this was such an awesome fic to read !!!!!!!!!! i was like grinning like an idiot with each chapter and blown away with all of them *----*
im so glad i found it adnasjkdnajd although the last two chapters leave me really upset aksndaksd TuT Bill in the last one i couldnt believe it!!!!
im hoping he has an evil plan in mind hahaha but then i think really wants koji TuT!!!
dying for the next chapter!! aklsdmasd.
OMG TOms reaction!! cant wait to know... maybe he felt something with the twin connection?? hahaha omg such an intense fic!!! just brilliant
thank you so much for share it!!!!
-hahaha just wanted to make a little confession lol
i used to have the twins xxxvids in my laptop xD!!! it was so mind blowing find out twinscest was fckin real aksdnskda hahhaah, but my laptop die lol TuT when i get it fixed maybe i should watch it again hmmm ... hahaha ok i stop now
amazing story once again, just perfect!!!
oh another think hahah sorry
do you have a real person in mind when you describe Koji? i would like to watch a pic one day xD!!!
Author's Response: Wow, what an enthusiastic review! Thank you! *is very happy* I'm glad you're liking this story so much, even though some bits may have upset you. As I said in my last review (below yours) Bill is suffering from a mental disorder caused by the kidnapping which is making him act out of character so that's why he appears to want Koji so much. Oh, Tom knows full well that Bill finds Koji attractive and he doesn't like it at all! But he can't do anything about it... I know, seeing real twincest for the first time is a shocking thing all right, but in a good way! Once you've seen it, it then seems much more normal. As for Koji, I do indeed have a face in mind for him. Do a search for Atsushi Sakurai from the J-rock band Buck Tick. He has /really/ intense eyes and when I saw him I knew he was perfect for Koji, but only in the pics where he has long hair! And of course his eyes should be a lighter golden-amber, not brown but you get the idea. Also model David Chiang has a face I can see on Koji, although he's far too thin to be our kidnapper! Thanks again for all your cool comments and I hope you continue to enjoy the fic :)
Date: 10/17/12 11:31 pm Title: Aftermath
uhh, I was all ready to read his story, but seeing as the chapter ended and we're being given an option, I think I'd rather we just move into some Bill seduction time...though it's up to you :) GOD you get me so worked up!!! tease! xD
Author's Response: Well, I've decided to show both! Sorry for being a tease but it's all gonna explode out of control very soon so stick around for the ride ;)
Date: 10/17/12 09:18 am Title: Aftermath
Once again you've proven your amazing skill with the written word although I'm not sure how to feel about this chapter. I definitely enjoyed it but I do prefer for Tom to witness the interaction between Bill and Koji; a jealous Tom is one of my favorite things. I think I understand Bill's fascination with and attraction to Koji but it might be coming off as just a bit too complacent, however I trust you as the writer to know where this is headed and how you want to get there and I will be anxiously holding on for the ride. Thank you for updating and I eagerly await the next chapter. Should it contain Koji's backstory? A portion would be quite nice with plenty of Bill and Tom included:D
Author's Response: I like a jealous Tom too but Bill wouldn't DARE get so close to Koji with his brother around! *imagines the fireworks* Don't worry, Tom will have plenty of opportunity to show his raging jealousy in upcoming chapters *evil grin* Bill probably does seem quite eager to please at this early point but remember, he is suffering from a very real psychological response called Stockholm Syndrome (even though he doesn't know it) and that's exactly what it does to people. It alters their perception of the kidnapper to a more positive one in order to alleviate their fear and distress, making the captive act in ways that they normally wouldn't outside of a hostage situation and most of all, feeling drawn to their abductor. It's also called 'capture-bonding'. It's a coping mechanism and I think it's really interesting! I will tell a little of Koji's backstory in the next chapter and then will focus on Bill and Tom so nobody gets left out :) Thank you so much for your comments and I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Date: 10/17/12 06:07 am Title: Aftermath
I am very interesting in Koji's story, as long as we get some Bill and Tom in the next chapter too. I love Koji's description of what he would do if he were a dragon and his description of Bill's 'big brown deer eyes'. That's so true!
Another great chapter. I'm frustrated right along with Koji and Bill though. Come on Tom! It would be harder to admit things under pressure like this though. If Bill would just turn his charm on Tom...well, we'll see. Thanks for the update!
ps-I loved the picture of Tom's eye makeup! =)
Author's Response: You'll get both sides in the next chapter, just to keep everyone happy! I know Tom's reluctance frustrates everybody but Bill will really start trying to change his mind and things will start to happen very soon! Thanks so much :) Glad you liked the pic too :P
Date: 10/12/12 11:22 am Title: Pressure Point
Omg, can't help to leave another comment.. I love this part so much!! Well.. you know what i mean xp It's totally adorable when Tom's playing the 'big brother' act. You should do that more often! (only if you want, though....) Hope you'll update soon. (: I've readed a few other comments, and i think it totally amazing that you review on every comment.. - sry for my English.. Hope you'll understand what i'm trying to say. And i've readed another comment ( Your review on TokioMoonlight) and i think it would be a freaking good idea if you would let it take a while before the part of them being sexuel towards eachother begins.. (omg, it took me all of my English skills to write this... Sorry for the grammarfaults xp)
Author's Response: Hey, so good to hear from you again! Yeah, I love Tom being a 'big brother' too - so heartwarming (and kinda sexy as well) ^^ I am definitely playing on that part of him more in the future. As for my replies, well, I think that if people are nice enough to leave me a review, then I will always reply to them because I love to hear from everyone who enjoys my story and they need to know how much I appreciate them! Hm, the sex will happen in its own time. No need to rush when there's so much other stuff going on to keep your interest! I'm glad you see it that way too :) Thank you so much for writing to me (and your English skills are great, by the way)!
Date: 09/13/12 05:44 am Title: Pressure Point
Oooh, very interesting. As shocking as it all seemed at first, I'm not actually surprised that this is how it played out. Bill is already the one more comfortable with the male sex stuff and he would protect Tom. I am very interested to see how Tom reacts to all this though. Great chapter, thanks so much!
Author's Response: Yeah, I could have had Bill be weak and scared but I prefer him to have some balls! ;) Tom's reaction will definitely be interesting and will eventually culminate in something even more shocking so please keep on reading. Thanks again for your reviews!
Date: 09/13/12 05:34 am Title: Makeup
I actually loved the description of Tom's make up and the process of Bill putting it on him. I wish there was a picture of that out there somewhere.
Good for Bill for being brave!
Author's Response: Thanks! ^^ I actually did up a photoshopped pic of Tom in the makeup if you wanna see...go to the main Photobucket website and search for me there, Rina762003, and you'll find it in my album called "Koji", along with pics of our crazy but sexy kidnapper ;)
Date: 09/02/12 02:26 am Title: Pressure Point
Ohhhhhhhhhh my god. That was... Wowie.
Well, I really hope there will be twin fluff next chapter! :)
As always, amazing chapter and thanks for the awesome update!
Please post soon!
Author's Response: I'll try to put a bit of twin fluff in there for you! Thank you for your review. I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it develops :)
Date: 09/01/12 12:07 am Title: Pressure Point
OH MEIN GOTT!!! O_O I-I-I cannot believe what happen :O like...Bill blew Koji O_o and Tomi... had to watch ok this is wayy too intense!! X''D my god this is amazing!!! :'3 I cannot waittttttttt for the next one I am glad that Bill is "acting" ok for Tomi but I know he too must feel somewhat dirty :$ sighzz I cant believe Koji let it go that far though but I guess this is how Tom has to see it....
Thank you for another great chapter ^_^
Author's Response: Yeah, it was pretty intense, I'll admit. But I think it had to be done or they could have been sitting there twiddling their thumbs for weeks without anything significant happening. Koji means well but he is the 'bad guy' so sometimes he does go to extremes to prove his point, something Tom is quickly learning. But perhaps it will make him more co-operative now! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 08/31/12 06:40 am Title: Pressure Point
Damn, that was intense. God damn it, Tom is such .... a ..... ball.... hairy... sack... but so is Koji although, (I sound like my mother), it was for their own good. Although I don't like how Koji is "forcing" them to openly love each other.
Author's Response: Haha, had to laugh at your description of Tom! XD Yeah, Tom and Koji really get on each other's nerves for some reason but Koji really does like Tom, deep down. And he wants them to be happy. Well, Koji hasn't forced them to do anything together yet... but he is trying to make them see his point of view. Thanks for reading!
Date: 08/30/12 10:01 am Title: Pressure Point
Awesome chapter! I am always excited to see an update from you!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm happy you look forward to it ^^
Date: 08/29/12 04:38 pm Title: Pressure Point
well, I would have LOVED some Tom/Bill action.
In the next one perhaps? Now that Bill is experienced he could do the same to Tom? :O
Author's Response: Tom/Bill action may not happen for a while, I'm afraid. Tom is SO against it that it will take a lot of convincing to make him cross that line. But hopefully I can keep you entertained until then with other things ;)
Date: 08/29/12 03:27 pm Title: Pressure Point
Wow I was so not. Expecting that but dammmmmm that was hawt cant wait till the next update!!!!!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you thought it was hot! Some people probably didn't but it will get hotter, trust me ;)
Date: 08/29/12 12:04 am Title: Pressure Point
loved. loved loved loved!
Author's Response: Thank you!!!! Happy you loved it :D
Date: 08/28/12 05:47 pm Title: Pressure Point
YESSSS. not exactly what i'd imagine, but hot as hell. it's too bad Tom couldn't see every pornographic detail, it probably would have turned him on somewhat ;) though that would probably have traumatized him even more. aaaaaaaaaaaaaah, i can't even imagine where this is going and that's part of why I like it so much! aw, i kinda like Kujo ;) he's making things happen...things we'd really like to happen, haha....xD I fully support the decision to only write TH fiction!! more from you would be lovely :)
Author's Response: Exactly, Koji is just doing what we'd ALL love to do, if we could get away with it! ;) Poor Tom is traumatised enough by what he saw but Koji is not done with him yet. Or Bill. Thanks very much and I hope you keep reading to find out what happens next!
Date: 08/28/12 04:33 pm Title: Pressure Point
I totally love this story! :) And then I feel guitly for loving it, lol. I get so excited every time you post a new chapter! So hot. Can't wait for more!
You go, Bill. ;)
Author's Response: Haha, don't feel guilty! If anyone should feel guilt, it's me for writing it ;) I'm so thrilled you like this fic. Thank you!
Date: 08/28/12 11:29 am Title: Pressure Point
Bill's gonna break down in the shower, isn't he? He's been so strong while Tom fell apart and he's staying strong now to snap his twin out of the guilt Tom's feeling that he couldn't protect Bill. But how can something like sucking off their abductor not affect poor Bill? Either he's decided to just supress his own feelings (which is never a good thing) or he's determined to hide how he's been affected from Tom. I bet he's about to scrub himself raw in the shower. As for Koji, I think we might just have seen some weakness from him. He's patently more affected by Bill than he cares to admit, and he allowed his annoyance at Tom to cause him to ignore his own rules. I feel so sorry for Tom, even more so than for Bill. He must feel absolutely useless; his usual bravado hasn't protected his twin, in fact he made things worse. This was an amazing chapter. I truly loved it. I've posted this review on LJ as well because your story deserves all the praise it can get.
Author's Response: I thanked you on lj for your fab review but I shall thank you again! I have finally worked out what's happening next in the story and I hope you like it :)
Date: 08/28/12 08:54 am Title: Pressure Point
I was so happy to see an update. That was really good; you're an excellent writer. I loved Bill's sacrifice and Tom's reaction. The guilt, revoltion and anger work well on him, although I love him best when he is in jealousy mode. I'm hoping that more attention is shown to Bill to provoke that response in Tom. Nothing better than a Tom who wants to claim what is rightfully his:D
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Your praise makes me happy :) Oh, you bet your ass that Bill will get more attention and Tom is going to be one jealous big brother indeedy! ;)