Date: 12/17/12 08:54 pm Title: Awakened Desire
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Author's Response: XD Thanks for reading!
Date: 12/16/12 01:41 am Title: Awakened Desire
yeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssssssssssss. ughhhhh!!!!!!!! you...you do things to me. every damn time. neeed more xD
Author's Response: Haha, thank you! Glad you liked it :)
Date: 12/15/12 01:37 pm Title: Awakened Desire
Tom making sure his brother is unharmed is precious. He's as suspicious as usual, and hasn't much towards Koji's goal since he came in. Bill is showing that he's steps away that Koji didn't even have any idea of. But it's exciting and Bill really needs things to progress now I think.
Hot images! I really liked this chapter for obvious reason ;)
Author's Response: Thank you, Maria! It's definitely Bill who's going to push for things to happen between him and Tom. He's the one who's gotta make Tom change his mind. It won't be easy but he'll get there in the end!
Date: 12/15/12 01:34 pm Title: Koji's Teenage Tale
hey Rina :)
I certainly loved the story Koji had to tell. It's such a heart breaking fact that he lost his twin. I loved that he gave Bill such a great new approach to the bond between him and Tom. An Egyptian princess. How exciting is that?
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy you liked Koji's tale. It is sad that he's all alone now but I guess that's why he's taken Bill & Tom to keep him company. Bill would make an amazing Egyptian princess (or prince!!), that's for sure :D
Date: 12/15/12 09:20 am Title: Awakened Desire
I loved this chapter - seeing Bill start to progress down that route was certainly interesting. I'll give a more detailed review on THS but I did want to point out one sentence.
"I can almost see Tom assertively bending Bill’s slender body over the sink and sliding that hot piece of man-meat right up his baby bro’s hungry hole, banging him in firm thrusts from behind until Bill is coming like a Mexican firecracker and sobbing Tom’s name. "
-- This completely threw me out. I guess you were trying to go for something a bit more... raunchy and daring but it just doesn't seem to fit with the rest of how Koji speaks and things. It's too... harsh and cliche. A bad porn producer line. I read it and all the tension and emotion previous just... evaporated. My two cents but, that's how I feel. Other than that, an /excellent/ chapter and I hope you're feeling better from the morning sickness of the last one!
Author's Response: You're so right - that was a stupid line and I have removed it because it isn't necessary. I'm happy you enjoyed the rest of the chapter and thank you for your comments! I'm still sick, though :(
Date: 12/15/12 08:53 am Title: Awakened Desire
Thank you so much for the update... its like receiving an early Christmas present, although if you wish to give another chapter before the holidays then this one could be considered a stocking stuffer, lol. That was definitely a hot scene. Very well written. Seems a pity, however, that Tom was unaware of what Bill was doing and I am a bit confused on the fact that Koji won't allow any further physical contact between himself and Bill since they are both aware that jealousy and protectiveness are the main emotions that Tom would feel and that seems so beneficial to the goal. I have no doubt, however, that you know exactly what you're doing. Anxious for more:D
Author's Response: Don't worry, the next time Bill does this, he will make sure Tom knows about it... ;) I guess Koji doesn't want to take all of Bill's first sexual experiences away from him. I think he'd rather have Bill share those experiences with Tom instead, and for Tom to do it because he actually wants to, not out of sheer jealousy. Although, jealousy definitely helps, you're right there! Thanks and have a great Christmas!
Date: 12/15/12 02:50 am Title: Awakened Desire
I think this is possibly your most incredible chapter yet...and the hottest masturbation scene I've ever read. Knowing that Tom is sitting oblivious in the other room, and that Koji is the one enjoying the visual, makes it even hotter and intensely sad at the same time. Great stuff.
Author's Response: Aw, thank you very much!! It's tough to make a solo act interesting and hot but I'm happy to have accomplished that :) It's kinda sad that Tom missed it all but never fear - he will find out very, very soon how wicked and naughty Bill really is... ;)
Date: 12/15/12 02:32 am Title: Awakened Desire
Awh.. poor Bill! He all ready excepted that hes on love with (well.. thats what Im guessing from the way ge acts), but now Tom has to.except it too! Thnx for the fast update!
Author's Response: Yes, Tom will have to accept it eventually...But Bill will work on that! Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/09/12 05:12 pm Title: Koji's Teenage Tale
I cannot even express how much I love it when Bill and Koji are together, they just get each other in the best way and I love it. I can't wait to see Tom and Bill reunite after this because I know Toms probably worked himself up to the point where Bills gonna have to be cute and there'll be a sweet moment and gah!
Thanks so much for the update, it was amazing as usual!
Author's Response: Aw, really? You love Bill and Koji's interactions? That makes me so happy! :D It's like they are actually becoming friends, in a way. And they couldn't talk like this if Tom was there because he'd be angry and interrupting all the time. Oh, there'll be a 'moment' when Bill goes back to their room, that's for sure ;) Thanks again.
Date: 12/08/12 06:02 pm Title: Koji's Teenage Tale
xD I think Bill was playing the puppet master a little bit there...but I'm glad they talked. I wonder how they're going to get Tom to crack without getting mad about it
Author's Response: Yes, Bill can charm his way into a lot of things! Hopefully into Tom's pants too LOL Thank you for your review!
Date: 12/08/12 06:47 am Title: Koji's Teenage Tale
Thanks so much for updating, I check everyday for a new chapter. I loved this one especially. I feel so bad for Koji that he had to loose his bro like that. I had a dream my parent died and I woke up sobbing and I was thinking of this fic and the realisation hit me like a sack of wet dumplings how devastating it would have been.
Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter, even if you did feel bad for Koji. It would be totally awful to go through what he's gone through and it makes you understand, if only a little, why he is the way he is. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 12/07/12 02:05 pm Title: Koji's Teenage Tale
Oh this completely made my day!
I've been waiting for the next chapter, for ages it feels like, and I really love everything you put up. With the small exception of there being very little action in this specific chapter - I love action and Tom is seemingly violent in this tale, which I really, really love!
Please post the next as soon as possible. I know it takes time to write epic chapters like you do, but please hurry?
Author's Response: Don't worry, the action will be ramped up soon! I like a slightly violent Tom as well ;) Next chapter won't be far away! Thanks for reading.
Date: 12/07/12 09:11 am Title: Koji's Teenage Tale
Haha, Bill! First he seems so innocent and sweet and then, BAM, he almost blackmails him xdxd
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill's not THAT innocent lol. He can be a little manipulative when he wants something.
Date: 12/06/12 06:52 pm Title: Aftermath
seflakwafjeal kl;kejawae aejak PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE I'M GOING INSANE HERE
Author's Response: I'm updating today so you can put that straight-jacket away! :P
Date: 11/05/12 01:52 am Title: Taken
Hahaha, I actually am shipping Toji more than twincest. There's SO much angry sexual tension between them. EHEHEHEHEHE ;)
Author's Response: Toji!! Ha, that's awesome. And you're right - nobody has sparks like they do. Well, I'll try to work a little Toji in there just for you ;)
Date: 11/04/12 01:57 am Title: Aftermath
AFA WEJFLAK FJEALKFE AFEA ;FEA; FEAFE J;
How DARE you stop right there now I'm fictionally frustrated and yes I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT KOJI I LOVE HOW YOUR FANFICTION ISN'T JUST ABOUT SEX (ALTHOUGH THAT IS NOT NECESSARILY A BAD THING ;D) AND YOU HAVE AN ACTUAL PLOT AND CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND URGHHH KOJI
Author's Response: Sorry! Before I posted the next part I just had to see who was interested in Koji and I'm so glad you are! I know he's not the most likeable character but he is starting to gather a few fans ;) Thank you for your review - it's nice to know you're not just reading the story solely for the upcoming twincest (even though there will be that too).
Date: 10/29/12 06:24 pm Title: Aftermath
This fic so far, has been what I expected it would be, in terms of Koji's motives, but it was a clever twist, him having had a twin.. sadly, his tragic story and kindness as a captor still doesn't quite detract from his villainy, as well it shouldn't.
Koji's observations that Tom's bulking himself up to try and match him in strength makes sense, but not so much Tom's continued thoughts that he can out fight a skilled fighter like Koji. Can't wait to see Tom's shift in thought when this happens and he gives in.. don't much like to see him humiliated though. :(
I am surprised at Bill's behaviour though.. even being open minded about his situation, it's almost as though he's become grateful for being kidnapped, which makes me eek.
Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Author's Response: Hello and thank you! Yes, Koji is a villain, no matter how nice he tries to be. Tom still definitely wants to fight him and later on he will get to try! But yeah, poor Tom has been humiliated enough already so perhaps Koji will go easy on him. As for Bill, his behaviour is due to one thing: Stockholm Syndrome. Google it. It will explain everything! Thanks again for your comments and I'm glad you're enjoying the story :)
Date: 10/27/12 06:56 pm Title: Shime Waza
Just started reading this story.. and I am both anticipating and dreading what is going to happen to Bill and Tom. Naturally, I have my suspicions and from Koji's narrated hints, but I would rather suspend my thoughts and go with the idea that nothing is always as it seems.. at least for now. ;)
Author's Response: Hey, welcome! Thank you for taking the time to leave a few comments. Exactly as you said: you may think you know what's going on in this situation but just when you have it all figured out, something shocking will happen and make you question all the characters and their motives. There will be many moments like this during the story so I hope you enjoy it and please keep in touch! :)
Date: 10/24/12 11:44 pm Title: Aftermath
*_* love love love!!! I bet Tom is dying in the room there especially with Bill taking his precious time X''D great GREAT chapter I really love reading this ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you!! Haha, yes Tom is getting very impatient indeed! XD Glad you're enjoying the story :)
Date: 10/18/12 05:38 pm Title: Aftermath
I adored this chapter as much as I love all the others! I have to say that even though I'm really loving the twin love and hope they get together, this Koji/Bill pair is starting to grow on me. Amazing update as per usual, thanks so much!
Author's Response: Well, why can't there be more than one pairing? Bill can always amuse himself with Koji's attention while he's waiting for Tom to make a move ;) That should keep things interesting and ensure lots of jealousy! Thanks very much for reading!