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Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/13 11:45 am Title: Twin Pleasure

Ooooh, goody - update! And the twins are getting so much closer to doing the deed. Tom can have no doubt now that Bill wants him that way. I'm just wondering whether what's happened so far will make Tom back off even further, really try not to have any physical contact with his twin because he can't deal with his emotions. I can see even more heartbreak ahead before Tom caves in, with him doing his best to deny what he felt and poor Bill getting rejected time and again because Tom's angry with himself. Sorry...that's me getting so in to the story I'm putting my own interpretation on things. Anyway, another fantastic chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: You could be right about Tom and how he's going to respond now. He's so damn stubborn that it won't be that simple for him to give in! But Bill will keep trying so I hope you like what happens next. Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: helpmebill Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/13 12:00 am Title: Twin Pleasure

Wow, HOT! I love this story so much & I was just thinking about it today!

Author's Response: Thank you - I'm so glad you're enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: Maria Dane-Edwards Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/13 04:31 pm Title: Twin Pleasure

Oh my god, Rina! That was unbelievably hot wanking session. I can vividly see Tom lying there shocked out of his mind by what just happened. He's stunned yeah, but probably also impressed somehow that he was talked into an orgasm. Bill was taking a clever diving into his own lust even if it was unintentionally.

I think this was a gentle easing into the next level of their journey to 'freedom' Koji way ;)
Well done :)
*hugs*
Myr

Author's Response: Aw, thank you for the wonderful words, Myr. It's not an easy journey to freedom but they're getting there! Thanks for all your support :)

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/13 02:13 pm Title: Twin Pleasure

ooohhhhh ;) closer closer!!! yayyyyy! belated congratulations :3 I hope you're feeling well! thanks for the great chapter!



Author's Response: I'm feeling much better, thank you! And thanks for your review :)

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/13 11:55 am Title: Twin Pleasure

Yes! Finally!!

Author's Response: Haha, I know! They're making progress ^^

Reviewer: Peaches Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/13 11:02 am Title: Twin Pleasure

This chapter was absolutely amazing. Bill's dirty talk was unbelievable to read and you've done so well in actually making the scene seem so realistic. I can't wait to see how the twins react to each other in the next chapter. I'm sure you're full of surprises and I cannot wait for another update! xxxxx

Author's Response: Yes, I'm always full of surprises! ;) I'm happy this seemed realistic and thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/07/13 09:56 pm Title: Acceptance

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!! I want them to do thingsssss, I'd like them to draw it out a bit, but Tom needs to slip a little on his resolveeee come on man, you know you want it! ;) I know Koji is a crazy mofo, but I really appreciate what he's doing for us, at the very least :) what a wonderful imaginary show you've got going on for us here! 



Author's Response: Thank you for appreciating my work! (and Koji's too :P) Tom's resolve will start to seriously slip in the next chapter so I hope you like it :)

Reviewer: ealasaida Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/13 06:50 pm Title: Acceptance

I wasn't sure that I was going to like this concept, but I enjoy it. I especially like your use of first person from the POV of the kidnapper. Keep updating!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I wanted to write something a bit different with someone else's perspective on the twins so I'm glad it's working :)

Reviewer: Gol1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/24/13 11:13 pm Title: Taken

congratulations :) I can't wait for twincest part *_*

Author's Response: Thank you! There will be a little bit in the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: mr_ious Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/22/13 01:45 pm Title: Acceptance

More Koji/Bill action, please? :3

Author's Response: I'll definitely put some more in later on but for the moment it's Tom/Bill. Glad you like the pairing though!

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/13 09:04 pm Title: Acceptance

Yaaaayyyyyy ive been waiting for this update and Aww congradulations on the pregnancy

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)

Reviewer: nessavonkaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/13 06:07 pm Title: Acceptance

OHGOTT!!!!!!! congratulations!! laksdmaskda Blessings for you and your baby such a beautiful news!!!!
Thank you so much for coming back!!! even when you are in this epic moment of your life aksdalks waaaa *fangirling* hahahah *u* hope you keep feeling better!!!

The chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOTHOTHOT askdlaksda
dear lord and the cute final scene OMG asdmksv love it!!!
this killed me "“I’d stick my tongue in that hot cherry pie.”" lol omg hahahaa I can totally hear Tom saying that waaaa hahahha
Brave Bill!!!!!! OMG i can't even believe he told Tom about him being Bi and that he would do it whit him hahhahah poor Tom he must be in shock lololol some hot dreams would be awesome xD
Tom being ok about Bill Sexuality was really cute
and OMG this part "...Sensing his twin’s need for contact.... " *DIESFANGIRLSICANTEVEN* *u*
Really amazing chapter!! Thank you!! thank you so much again!!!*---*

Author's Response: No, thank YOU!! Your enthusiastic review totally made my day and made me grin ^^ I'm so happy you're enjoying the story. If you want some hot stuff, you'll love the next chapter, I promise! ;)

Reviewer: Peaches Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/13 07:53 am Title: Acceptance

Thank you so much for updating this, it's written beautifully as per usual. Congratulations on the baby, too! xxxxx

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! ^^

Reviewer: asahi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/13 03:02 am Title: Acceptance

It's funny that you write Bill as being bi. I have always thought that he was for real. I'm not really sure why and I could totally be wrong but I just have that feeling. I really believe that he loves women as well as possibly loveing men. He just never really seemed completley streight to me but I also don't think he is totally gay either. I can also say I don't think he likes when other men are really flamboyent either.

Author's Response: I think he is bi for real too. He just doesn't seem straight to me. One day he might let us all know!

Reviewer: TimePassed Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/13 02:39 am Title: Acceptance

Omg, Bill is bi! And theyre so cute together!

Author's Response: Yep, in this fic he is! :P And they totally are the cutest ^^

Reviewer: Peaches Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/16/13 12:43 pm Title: Awakened Desire

This is amazing, when is the next chapter? x

Author's Response: Thanks so much - I'll try to get it up soon!

Reviewer: Gol1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/13 10:56 pm Title: Taken

I can't wait to read the next chapter *__* this story is amazing

Author's Response: Thank you - I hope to have the next one up soon!

Reviewer: Suende Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/13 06:53 am Title: Awakened Desire

Damn, that guy is creepy and strange. Bad thing that Bill is falling for all he has to say.
I wonder how Tom will cope with this situation any longer.

Author's Response: You'll find out soon! Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: my0wnbestfriend Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/11/13 07:40 pm Title: Awakened Desire

This was amazing...

Author's Response: Thank you!! :)

Reviewer: Kiseki123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/18/12 04:15 pm Title: Awakened Desire

Oh. My. God.
I love you.
Just.
Thank you for fixing my shitty week.
Amazing update
I love you.

Author's Response: Aw, I'm happy I could brighten up your week! :)

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